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I'm NYC-based and mainly write in the Horror and Sci Fi genres.
I am here because I want my work critiqued. I have 2 produced films under my belt thus far but before I dive into another project I want to hone my craft. I have a vision but my presentation needs work. And so i'm here.
In addition to screenwriting, I am also a photographer and writer for several alt (namely Gothic/Metal) publications/magazines, (I write reviews of music/books/films, write articles, interview bands, etc).
Random facts: I am a Biology major, working in Genetics (interested in Population Genetics/Evolutionary Biology/Ancient and Medieval History)
A Giallo fiend....and also a fan of Italian Horror or Psychological Horror outside of Giallo too (Suspiria, Blood and Black Lace, La Sconosciuta, La Doppia Ora/The Double Hour, etc etc)
Favorite composers: Wojciech Kilar, Goblin/Claudio Simonetti, Christopher Young, and more recently Eric Neveux (Borgia: Faith and Fear), Alti Ovarsson (The Eagle, The Mortal Instruments), Frans Bak (The Killing), etc
Currently watching: Luther rewatch binge. Also watching Warren Brown (DS Ripley on Luther) in his new shows, X Company, Good Cop, and By Any Means.
If you become an active member here, you'll get more than your fair share of critique. Be warned though, some people don't hold back. This can be disheartening at first, but once you realize there's no malice behind it things become much clearer.
Like the others, show your activity on here and you'll get reads. That simple.
Gabe
Just Murdered by Sean Elwood (Zombie Sean) and Gabriel Moronta (Mr. Ripley) - (Dark Comedy, Horror) All is fair in love and war. A hopeless romantic gay man resorts to bloodshed to win the coveted position of Bridesmaid. 99 pages. https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-comedy/m-1624410571/
Ahh... you've been hijacked already. This happens a lot. Now, you're going to have to do some work to keep people's attention -- just like a teacher does, that occasional call to order. Welcome on board. Hope you enjoy the ride
I was joking btw, to whichever moderator deleted the posts.
If Praxilla gets involved with the feedback, I guarantee people will be more inclined to seek out her work and return the favor.
StevenClark posted feedback on one of my scripts and guess what? The dude didn't owe me anything. I noticed he had a script in the Shorts section as well, so I left him some feedback.
Thanks all. My two shorts are currently at festivals . They're not Giallos/Gialli. However, the full length I'm working on (Demonized) works as a homage to the Giallo genre in parts.
It's better for my thread to be hijacked than to pass by unnoticed :p.
My two films are Stranger and Coma; both experimental psychological shorts written and produced by myself, directed by NY indie filmmaker Jeremiah Kipp, and starring Lydia Darly (Exorcist: The Beginning). Coma also stars Melissa Skirboll.