Hi, these updated loglines are for the first feature script I wrote and its prequel/sequel. I recently started 2nd drafts for these scripts. Please let me know what you think of the loglines. Would you watch these movies?

1) Space Fish & the Homeless Crusader - A one-armed young man discusses traveling the universe with his girlfriend moments before she dies, and eager to honour her he robs banks to afford a replacement limb.

2) Craterpeople - A young patriot soldiers a war fought using laser-based weaponry and is later recruited for leading a double life, to seduce and spy on a foreign ex-politician.

I liked the second one. I am not a fan of the 'universey' kind of movies so the second one sounded more realistic to me.

Thanks! They both take place on a dystopian Earth until the very end of each script. I consider them Earth Operas, as opposed to Space Operas, because they’re both epic and tragic.