Quoted from kcranford Aww, glad you like it. You can use it or lose it - either way, it’s my pleasure to throw out ideas.  It’s so nice to have this group to bounce ideas off of and share.

Ghosties, I wanted to clarify this post. I meant that you were welcome to use it or not use it as you wish. My witty little rhyme “use it or lose it” wasn’t at all what I  meant - and sounded snarky when I re-read it. Sorry about that!

Kathy

Quoted from kcranford Ghosties, I wanted to clarify this post. I meant that you were welcome to use it or not use it as you wish. My witty little rhyme “use it or lose it” wasn’t at all what I  meant - and sounded snarky when I re-read it. Sorry about that!

Haha! Don't be, it wasn't snarky at all... heck, if you hadn't said use it, we would've stolen it.

Our log line is better overall and more effective for your and the others' contributions.

Again, thank ya kindly. -_ghostie gal

The last one you had was fine IMO so this is just nit-picky noodling around.

Not sure you need the tragic accident.

You could pop it a bit with a ticking clock

Alternate suggestion (but like I said - the last one is fine)

With just one week till Christmas, a desperate mother finds herself in a race against time to wrangle a donation from the only person with the rare blood type needed to save her daughter's life - the reclusive town Scrooge.

Quoted from eldave1 The last one you had was fine IMO so this is just nit-picky noodling around. Not sure you need the tragic accident. You could pop it a bit with a ticking clock Alternate suggestion (but like I said - the last one is fine) With just one week till Christmas, a desperate mother finds herself in a race against time to wrangle a donation from the only person with the rare blood type needed to save her daughter's life - the reclusive town Scrooge.

Ahoy Dave,

I could kiss you... we absolutely luv it, just absolutely wonderful of you to chime in. We're going to use this one. Thank you so very much. -Andrea.

Quoted from ghost and_ghostie gal Ahoy Dave, I could kiss you... we absolutely luv it, just absolutely wonderful of you to chime in. We're going to use this one. Thank you so very much. -Andrea.

Glad it helped. My pleasure

Quoted from ghost and_ghostie gal Ahoy Dave, I could kiss you... we absolutely luv it, just absolutely wonderful of you to chime in. We're going to use this one. Thank you so very much. -Andrea.

The operative word there is 'could' but I wouldn't hold your breath, Dave. Andrea's throwing those kisses around like there's no tomorrow.  

Quoted from eldave1 The last one you had was fine IMO so this is just nit-picky noodling around. Not sure you need the tragic accident. You could pop it a bit with a ticking clock Alternate suggestion (but like I said - the last one is fine) With just one week till Christmas, a desperate mother finds herself in a race against time to wrangle a donation from the only person with the rare blood type needed to save her daughter's life - the reclusive town Scrooge.

Dave, I was so hoping you would show up for this. Your loglines are always the best!  Thanks for chiming in with another great one here. So happy you were able to provide exactly what they were looking for. Kudos!

Quoted from LC The operative word there is 'could' but I wouldn't hold your breath, Dave. Andrea's throwing those kisses around like there's no tomorrow.

I'll relish in just hte possibility

Quoted from kcranford Dave, I was so hoping you would show up for this. Your loglines are always the best!  Thanks for chiming in with another great one here. So happy you were able to provide exactly what they were looking for. Kudos!

Gracias!

I know Dave's is a lock, but I just love writing loglines.

With Christmas looming, a desperate mother attempts to melt the frozen heart of the town Scrooge, whose veins are the sole carrier of the rare blood type that would save her daughter.

Quoted from steven8 With Christmas looming, a desperate mother attempts to melt the frozen heart of the town Scrooge, whose veins are the sole carrier of the rare blood type that would save her daughter.

Ahoy, Steven8,

Hey, it's always enjoyable to read other variations of it. Truth be told, I always thought our original log was a mouthful, and yours is definitely short and sweet.

We appreciate the feedback and input. Thank ya kindly. -A

Quoted from ghost and_ghostie gal Ahoy, Steven8, Hey, it's always enjoyable to read other variations of it. Truth be told, I always thought our original log was a mouthful, and yours is definitely short and sweet. We appreciate the feedback and input. Thank ya kindly. -A

You're quite welcome.  

Sincere thanks for your input, ladies and gentlemen. We really can't thank you enough for all the astute feedback you've given us. I always find the writing of the logline to be the most torturous part of the process, and you'll have made it a smidge easier.

All the best,

Ghost