SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is April 27th, 2024, 4:54am
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
Please do read the guidelines that govern behavior on the discussion board. It will make for a much more pleasant experience for everyone. A word about SimplyScripts and Censorship


Produced Script Database (Updated!)

Short Script of the Day | Featured Script of the Month | Featured Short Scripts Available for Production
Submit Your Script

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
All screenplays on the simplyscripts.com and simplyscripts.net domain are copyrighted to their respective authors. All rights reserved. This screenplaymay not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author.
Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    Screenwriting Discussion    Review My Logline  ›  Deecee Logline Moderators: LC
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 1 Guests

 Pages: 1
Recommend Print
  Author    Deecee Logline   (currently 63 views)
Poiboy1935
Posted: January 28th, 2024, 9:14pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
2
Posts Per Day
0.02
Here's my Logline.


Deecee the daughter of a famous rock and roll star is a child singer. A junior high student and is distraught from a child hood friend.

Revision History (1 edits)
LC  -  January 28th, 2024, 10:41pm
Logged Offline
Private Message
LC
Posted: January 28th, 2024, 10:41pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7630
Posts Per Day
1.34
This doesn't read very well mainly due to a lack of info - needs fleshing out, and the sentence construction could do with some work. You appear to have a full-stop in the middle of a run on idea.

I'm guessing your story contains something similar to:

Charts the life of the daughter of a famous rock and roll star.
Has to live up to his reputation/big shoes to fill.
Dealing with instant fame herself.
While navigating everyday challenges of school life, BFFs, bullies, petty jealousies, etc.

Like I said, just guessing.

You do need a name for this one in the thread title, so unless you advise otherwise I'm calling it Deecee.
Just so it doesn't get lost amongst all the other loglines.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 1 - 1
 Pages: 1
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    Review My Logline  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on


Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006