This doesn't read very well mainly due to a lack of info - needs fleshing out, and the sentence construction could do with some work. You appear to have a full-stop in the middle of a run on idea.
I'm guessing your story contains something similar to:
Charts the life of the daughter of a famous rock and roll star. Has to live up to his reputation/big shoes to fill. Dealing with instant fame herself. While navigating everyday challenges of school life, BFFs, bullies, petty jealousies, etc.
Like I said, just guessing.
You do need a name for this one in the thread title, so unless you advise otherwise I'm calling it Deecee. Just so it doesn't get lost amongst all the other loglines. |