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Jesus' Last Moments (currently 3277 views)
michel
Posted: July 11th, 2006, 2:54am
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Good try Helio. I agree with everyone that it's a nice allegory but it only would work on paper.
It was nice to read something from you again
Michel
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Helio
Posted: July 11th, 2006, 9:21am
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Hey, Dan and Michel, thank you two to revive (hehe like Jesus!) this attempt of cheating the people around here! Thanks again!
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Daniel_Robinson
Posted: July 13th, 2006, 12:21am
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hey Helio, I really thought it was about God's son nice twist at the end. That makes for a good writer. Dan
Gotta keep writing! Writer of: "The Video Game" Post Production "House of Curse", "The Secrect Door", Production "Twisted", Post Production "The Shadows", "Octagon" Post Production "Die Cut", "Judgement Area 51", "Colon and His Clone" !Produced! and more, run my name in search. e-mail me: stupifided2002@yahoo.com Cool site I make games for:http://www.rottenzombie.com/boards/index.php
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Helio
Posted: July 13th, 2006, 7:51am
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"I really thought it was about God's son nice twist at the end. That makes for a good writer." Hey Daniel, again, I have to say you thanks a lot, man! I was think that you maybe will like to read "The man that killed Bambi". Take a look at it on Shorts that I will read one more piece of yours, right?
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HyperMatt
Posted: December 16th, 2018, 10:43am
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Digging into the Simplyscripts archive, and the writer will probably never see this. Not reading the comments of the logline, the twist really got me, but agree with what everybody is saying that is would only work on paper (or a radio play?). It rarely did feel like a Biblical film at the start, creating the atmosphere with thunder and rain (reminded me of The Robe). Unnecessary capping. and having sluglines with CONT. and NEXT as opposed to the more traditional Night and Day confuses things.
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AndyJ
Posted: November 9th, 2019, 8:45am
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I actually thought it was going to be a switch. I was thinking Man#4 was Jesus and someone had switched with him sacrificing their life. When the truth was revealed I was disappointed and immediately wondered how that would work as a film.
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