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Chris Ramos
Posted: October 21st, 2012, 12:34pm Report to Moderator
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Awesome script. Awesome. Awesome. =)


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Thanks, Chris, glad you liked it.


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Before I even say anything, I'm just going to announce that I was sidetracked for about five minutes before I even opened this up. Brandon's avatar is just too amusing to ignore

A script all the way from '07. It certainly shows how far you've come as a writer, Anthony. The formatting was great (was expecting a few hiccups, with this being an earlier script of yours). Thought the dialogue could have used a little more work, but otherwise I liked this. The punchline is awesome. Had me chuckling away to myself.

Good job on completing the OWC.

Dan

EDIT: Just realised this isn't a OWC script. It seems I just got used to saying it lol



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Hey Dan, yeah I don't know how this has resurfaced but it's a nice surprise.

If it had you chuckling then it did what it was intended to do.

As for the OWC, I thought you were trying to test me to see if I admitted to a OWC script lol.  I didn't enter by the way.

Cheers anyway, Dan and welcome to the Idiot Club


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Hi

pretty nice....I donīt know but for me it could be little more funnier..you know just more things that go wrong, in that short time... more drama...but in a funny way...

good one..
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Hey Haris, thanks for giving this little script a read.  This was actually a joke I heard and thought I could write it as a script, hence the pay off at the end.  Glad it entertained you though.  Give me a shout if I can repay the read.


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Normally I avoid shorts like the plague but thought I'd check a few out.

Well written, well formatted, well explained.

Would make a nice feature for a sketch show for sure. Maybe not with a real lion though...

I don't agree with Harris too much, what more could you really put into a 3 page script haha for what it was it was set up and delivered well!


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Cheers, Goose

Thanks for the read and I too think it would be funny as a sketch...without a real lion.


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Hey Anthony,

Well done. Have to say this was well written and I enjoyed the read even though the punch line has been done many times before. Still laughed though.

Good luck at getting it optioned, as I think any producer would struggle to get Lions as props. Hee Hee.

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Cheers Alex, funny how this has popped up on the  boards again; I wrote this a few years ago now.  Glad you enjoyed it and as for it being produced...the lion might be a problem...lol.


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This was fun to read. I liked how they started arguing from the very beginning - could feel the tension between the two, which is great.

I do recognize the joke - but you built up to the culmination and that's what matters.
Could be turned into a cartoon perhaps. Or maybe they can use the footage of the lion already in existence...
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khamanna, thanks for the read.  Glad you enjoyed it.  I guess it would be pretty funny as a cartoon.


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very funny...  
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