Agreed - got caught up a little in being able to 'film' my own script without a camera etc

Anthony

Top marks for that mate. With a little work I think you should be cheeky and enter it into a couple festivals. Maybe cut it to 5 minutes or so.

Great idea, will look into that, thanks mate.

Anthony

Saw this knocking around here for a while and to be honest didn't read it because I thought it wouldn't be my cup of tea.

Read it today though, and must say I enjoyed it. Something a little different but at the same time familiar.

The ending did confuse me a bit but I think, from reading the comments, I get it now.

The way the dialogue flows between the two and the way you use your action lines is very impressive.

Nice tale. I'll have to check out more of your stuff.

Hi Glenn

Thanks for the read, appreciated and really glad you liked it.

Hope you feel similar about any others you read

And if I can return the favour with any of yours, just let me know.

Anthony

Just noticed you wrote "Father, Come Quick" as well.
Really enjoyed that one too.
I lurk around reading quite a bit so have probably read more.
From these two though, I can say, I do like your style.

I'm only starting out myself so reading good stuff like this will hopefully have a positive effect on my writing.

Hi Glenn

Glad you liked 'Father...' too, slightly unusual for me as I wrote it for a Director from their idea, rather than one of my own. Still seemed to come out ok though, another draft or two and I thin it'll be there.

I'm pretty new too, discovered SS a few months ago and have found it extremely helpful with my education as a screenwriter.

I'd also point you at the first of (hopefully) a series of articles I've started on here that will hopefully help new writers get their scripts made. It's on the homepage - http://www.simplyscripts.com/

Thanks again.

Anthony

Thanks a million mate. I'll have a look.

Good luck with that. And I'll make sure to read your stuff as I see it.

By the way, could you take a look at this..

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1409276473/

Its my first short.
Any thoughts are welcome!!