Congratulations on getting this filmed. Great production value, good acting and she was very creepy! Love the choice of music in the titles.

I have to say I think they gave away the fact that the sister was dead way too early. From my reading of the script this is two young siblings experimenting with kissing and then it goes that extra WTF moment at the end when you realise she's kissing someone who's dead!

That element is lost here and it gives the audience too long to ask questions.

However, that's just my personal opinion. It's still awesome!

-Mark

Oh, they made quite a few changes to it but the story hasn't changed. Her being a girl - even creepier this way.
I really liked the kiss talk at the beginning - Mom says we have to try things together - I remember that at the beginning of the script.
But great job either way. Nice acting too.
Congrats.

Thanks Khamanna - agree, two girls is def creepier and works really well!

Read the script, though now that it's been produced I'm not sure how much weight this review will hold. Personally, I think the screenplay is far superior to the finished product. Definitely has more punch. As for the gender swap, I could take it or leave it. It's creepy as hell either way. Good stuff Anthony.

~Zack~

Thanks Mark/Zack

Mark, yep possibly so, but what ya gonna do

Zack - thanks, and glad you liked the script!

Anthony

And thanks Nolan!

(I got my responses out of order!)