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Vultures by Yuvraj Rajwanshi - Short, Drama - For a farmer, nothing is worse than seeing his crops destroyed. But there is always something much worse. 4 pages - pdf format
Hi Yuvraj. I didn't see a story here. To me, it was much to poetry.
All the best.
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Even though there isn't any story here, this is well written. This will work as an opening for something bigger or a random scene from a bigger story.
On second thought, if I look at this story from an Indian perspective, this may work as a political satire too. Parasites (capitalism) are destroying the farmers (farming industry) for their own benefits. Perhaps, I am thinking too much. Lol.
Even though there isn't any story here, this is well written. This will work as an opening for something bigger or a random scene from a bigger story.
On second thought, if I look at this story from an Indian perspective, this may work as a political satire too. Parasites (capitalism) are destroying the farmers (farming industry) for their own benefits. Perhaps, I am thinking too much. Lol.
Good writing.
Thanks, Fais, for reading and commenting.
As for mentioning that there 'isn't any real story here', I would beg to differ. Since no writer writes without anything in his/her head.
This simply signifies the fact that when life hits you with bad luck, it hits really hard.
I like the tone and visuals, very gloomy and ambiguous. You've set the stage well for a story, I feel more along the lines of horror though for this one. Maybe it's because I just watched a new release last night called The Dark and the Wicked. Your script reminded me of that. Set on a isolated farm, a dying husband in bed, wife depressed, but in this instant it was the devil harassing them. The tone of that is similar to yours and it got 90% critics on rotton tomatoes. Although I thought the story was too simple. The scripts of yours that I have read are strong with tone and atmosphere which is great!
"Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....
I like the tone and visuals, very gloomy and ambiguous. You've set the stage well for a story, I feel more along the lines of horror though for this one. Maybe it's because I just watched a new release last night called The Dark and the Wicked. Your script reminded me of that. Set on a isolated farm, a dying husband in bed, wife depressed, but in this instant it was the devil harassing them. The tone of that is similar to yours and it got 90% critics on rotton tomatoes. Although I thought the story was too simple. The scripts of yours that I have read are strong with tone and atmosphere which is great!
Thank you, Kirsten, for reading and commenting! Really appreciate it!