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No Trespassing by Jesson Kinder - Comedy, Horror - The host of a popular YouTube horror channel and his friends find more than they bargained for when they break into a mysterious house with a dark history. 23 pages - pdf format
I think this belongs in the shorts section, lol. Mistakes happen.
Review:
Like the writing, just needs some tweaks on screenplay formatting like physical character descriptions (tall, ugly, etc.), specific headers (emphasize the mystery machine is a car; i picked up on it due to scooby doo but I don't think other readers will get the reference in the beginning).
As I was reading this, I think this would work better if you shot it as if they were shooting live. For instance, when Will says "after this break" , show a commercial, and then we return back. Have them interview Hearst etc.
Hope this helps, Gabe
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