I remembered this from the OWC. I see how you reworked this. You changed some of Philip's lines as a philosophy professor and removed the reference to a supreme being taking over Goran's body to offer Jeff a reward. I realize that ending was to fulfill the OWC criteria. I like this ending better. It gave a rather humorous moral to the story. Sometimes your reward for doing good is a flip-flop you don't want to wear in the house placed next to a chore to do in the morning. |