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Don
Posted: June 28th, 2020, 4:40pm Report to Moderator
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From Before by James Austin McCormick - Short, Horror - An ambitious university professor finds the things he’s done to come so far so quickly come back to haunt him, quite literally. 12 pages - pdf format

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Very well written. For all the action that was short and to the point - VISUAL

Nice page turner - story. The ending... Let's just say; Hell have no furry like a woman scorned.

Well done.    


Who am I? A man with a hundred stories.. You want to hear one?

I live in the most beautiful country of South Africa. I'm a self employed electronics security technician. I'm four years into script writing ~ trying to make it in this ever competitive  industry.  
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Hi, James,

Nice story with clean writing.


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His attention rests on MICHAEL, a future academic if ever there was on.


I think it has to ONE not ON.

A little of a wobbly start but still worth the read.

Good luck.


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