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Don
Posted: May 24th, 2024, 12:54pm
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Pink Feet by Sean Elwood - Short, Horror - A skeptical teen ventures into a cursed house for a dare, only to confront the terrifying legend of "Pink Feet." 6 pages
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Don - May 24th, 2024, 4:08pm
Zombie Sean
Posted: May 24th, 2024, 4:14pm
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Thanks for getting this up, Don. This was an idea I conjured up after Zack gave me a title name "Pink Feet" and let me run with it. So, this is the story I came up with. Hope y'all enjoy. Sean
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Zack
Posted: May 28th, 2024, 10:09am
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I threw the title "Pink Feet" at you and challenged you to write a fucked up short script around it. I'd say you met that challenge.
Great work here as usual, dude. Fun, creepy take on a familiar tale. And I love the twist on the title at the end. Gross. Lol.
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LC
Posted: June 1st, 2024, 10:45pm
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Yo how do i make this a movie? Its really good. I need copyright permission right?
Yes, you need to contact Sean, the writer.
His email address is on the title page of the script.
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Zombie Sean
Posted: June 2nd, 2024, 3:43am
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Yo how do i make this a movie? Its really good. I need copyright permission right?
Hey Charlie,
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it. Send me an email (email on title page of script), or a PM on here. I'd be happy to talk to you more about this project.
Sean
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SAC
Posted: June 2nd, 2024, 10:49am
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Sean, Nice little tale here. I enjoyed that, in the end, no matter what he tried, he couldn’t escape. Just kept getting worse and worse. To me, that’s the heart of the story, and I think it deserved a little more time to really bring out the tension in that scene. Either way, good stuff. Good luck with it! Steve
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Zombie Sean
Posted: June 2nd, 2024, 4:07pm
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Sean, Nice little tale here. I enjoyed that, in the end, no matter what he tried, he couldn’t escape. Just kept getting worse and worse. To me, that’s the heart of the story, and I think it deserved a little more time to really bring out the tension in that scene. Either way, good stuff. Good luck with it! Steve
Hey Steve,
Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed this tale. It was actually closer to 10 pages, but most of it was character development at the first half of the kids shootin' the shit and whatnot. The second half was still the same as it is now.
I wonder how I can stretch out the dread....
Thanks again!
Sean
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