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11:07 the short movie (currently 3590 views) |
irish eyes |
Posted: May 3rd, 2014, 8:20am |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
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Posted: May 3rd, 2014, 8:24am |
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Old Timer
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He finally got it to you! Nice! The early version I saw was great. I'm heading out the door now, but can't wait to check this out when I get back!
- Mark |
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SAC |
Posted: May 3rd, 2014, 11:17am |
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Of The Ancients … but some dreams do
LocationUpstate NY Posts3208 Posts Per Day 0.78 |
Hey Mark,
I'm working right now so at least I have an excuse to be perusing the boards on a Saturday!
I took another look at the film. Watched it once before if you remember, and wasnt quite taken with the second half, or the actors. But on a second viewing it was better actually. It seemed everyone involved really kinda got it, and it was touching--a vibe I didn't get on the first viewing.
But well done for you. Congrats, pal!
Steve
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DV44 |
Posted: May 3rd, 2014, 12:42pm |
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Been Around
LocationCalifornia Posts510 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
Mark,
The film turned out great! I remember reading the script awhile back and the seeing the emotion and comedy you had throughout the couples progression. IMO, the actors did a wonderful job portraying that and it's awesome to see something you took the time and effort to write come to fruition.
Congrats on future success! |
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irish eyes |
Posted: May 3rd, 2014, 5:07pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Quoted from Marsha He finally got it to you! Nice! The early version I saw was great. I'm heading out the door now, but can't wait to check this out when I get back! |
No probs, I figured you might not have any time now, maybe you check it out on your private jet
Quoted from Steve I took another look at the film. Watched it once before if you remember, and wasnt quite taken with the second half, or the actors. But on a second viewing it was better actually. It seemed everyone involved really kinda got it, and it was touching--a vibe I didn't get on the first viewing.
But well done for you. Congrats, pal! |
Yeah it does have a better feel to it and I particularly like the Mother Theresa quote.
Quoted from Dirk The film turned out great! I remember reading the script awhile back and the seeing the emotion and comedy you had throughout the couples progression. IMO, the actors did a wonderful job portraying that and it's awesome to see something you took the time and effort to write come to fruition.
Congrats on future success! |
DIRK!!! How you been buddy? Do you have anything new out? Thanks for the kind words, you were one of the first to comment on the script. He did a nice job and was pleasure to work with. Mark |
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Mr.Ripley |
Posted: May 3rd, 2014, 11:38pm |
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LocationNew York Posts1979 Posts Per Day 0.30 |
Congrats on getting this made. I've always loved the short. The film...is different on how I envisioned it to be but at least you got it made. The red headed woman did a fine job. The guy doesn't look much like a nerd to me but he is funny in here. Lol.
Is this going to any film festivals?
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irish eyes |
Posted: May 5th, 2014, 6:17am |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Hey Gabe thanks for checking it out. I believe he's gonna enter it into a festival.
Hope all is well buddy
Mark |
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Toby_E |
Posted: May 5th, 2014, 6:21am |
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Been Around
LocationLondon, UK Posts872 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
Solid stuff, Mark |
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DV44 |
Posted: May 5th, 2014, 10:27am |
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Been Around
LocationCalifornia Posts510 Posts Per Day 0.12 |
No probs, I figured you might not have any time now, maybe you check it out on your private jet Yeah it does have a better feel to it and I particularly like the Mother Theresa quote. DIRK!!! How you been buddy? Do you have anything new out? Thanks for the kind words, you were one of the first to comment on the script. He did a nice job and was pleasure to work with. Mark |
Doing well over here on my side of the country. Nothing new out but I'm continuing to write a feature, hoping to be finished sometime this century. Have you got around to watch Sixteen Candles yet? |
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irish eyes |
Posted: May 5th, 2014, 11:44am |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Thanks Toby. Dirk... good to see you keeping busy. I still haven't watched " The sixteen wish cow candles" It's on my list : Mark |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: May 5th, 2014, 1:00pm |
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wow, very nice. Could have been better here and there but you work with what you can get on a budget. Hopefully this leads to bigger and better things. Well done, mate. |
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irish eyes |
Posted: May 6th, 2014, 6:52pm |
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January Project Group There`s too much blood in my alcohol
LocationUpstate New York Posts1865 Posts Per Day 0.36 |
Thanks a lot Dustin, glad you liked it.
Mark |
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Nomad |
Posted: May 7th, 2014, 4:28pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts721 Posts Per Day 0.15 |
Mark, I read your script a while ago and I remember it tugging on the heartstrings, so I congratulate you there. Plus just getting to see your work come to life is a feat in and of itself. However, while I can't fault any of the actors for their performance, because acting is difficult, the editing and directing left much to be desired. Here are a few things I noticed:
- At one point early on, the letterbox shifts slightly.
- The ADR for the older actress' voice was distracting.
- The shots lingered too long.
- There weren't enough extreme close ups of the clock showing "11:07", the title of the movie.
- The font for the editor's name changes in the credits.
Please don't think I'm being unnecessarily harsh with my critique. I'm just pointing out some things that could improve the movie before it goes out to any festivals. Jordan |
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Forgive |
Posted: May 7th, 2014, 6:06pm |
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Old Timer Let The Sky Fall
LocationVarious, exotic. Posts1373 Posts Per Day 0.27 |
Hey Mark! Congrats! Congrats! Well done - I didn't even know this had been picked up - you've had a really good job done on this - could've gone wrong in lots of ways, but it's been nicely envisioned - and most of the dialogue's been stuck to, 'cept most peoples' favorite... he wanted to see the score?? Boo!! He found the remote! Well - this has got to make up for the season that can no longer be mentioned - I couldn't even listen to the Man C game today, but I heard the result... But what is the sweet without the bitter? Now didn't I read that in some script somewhere?? Great stuff - well done. |
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Posted: May 7th, 2014, 7:12pm |
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LocationVancouver, British Columbia, Canada Posts2023 Posts Per Day 0.28 |
Script was excellent. Film was up and down for me, but some key moments from the actors and some particularly good-looking shots kept me going. As Jordan notes above, the editing's a little slow-paced and the film becomes unnecessarily long.
A credit to the strength of your work, Mark. Absolutely not my kinda thing at all, but I happily sat and watched it. Good stuff. |
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