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Posted: January 19th, 2020, 7:09pm Report to Moderator

So, what are you writing?

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Forsaken by AJ Lovell - Short, Drama - A young mans heart is breaking after his girlfriend leaves him, his Father hatches a plan to help. 5 pages

contest: Winner of the SWN short script award 2020 - pdf format

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This is a very sweet (if sad) story. Very nicely told. If there were any formatting or spelling issues I missed them. Well done!
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This is a very sweet (if sad) story. Very nicely told. If there were any formatting or spelling issues I missed them. Well done!

Thanks for the read and the compliment. I have changed the names and waiting to upload the new version. I just felt the names are too similar.

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