Pia's masterpiece is up on atom films:

http://www.atom.com/funny_videos/3EFBFFFF01A4F62F001700A6C8A9/

Give it the thumbs up.

Rick, you need to fix the volume on this.  If I didn't read the script, I'd have no idea what was going on.

Nicely shot, though.


Phil

I feel sick... Well done Pia... I suppose! I was gonna grab some food just now, but noooo, Pia had to ruin it for me by her disgusting little movie! I'm not hungry anymore.

That's an excellent short.

As well as the short, the credits was a nice touch.

Great work Richard, and it's a great script Pia.

Volumes fine on mine.

I heard the commercial, before it, just fine.  Then the volume drops.


Phil

That's because they deliberately play commercials too loud. You'll notice it on TV as well.

It's an old trick to get you to pay attention.

The film is set to 0db, which is standard. Something I'll bear in mind in future though.

Sound seemed okay to me.

Nice job all around.

Pia, that was disgusting! You should be ashamed of yourself.

I laughed my boy boobs off. Very good, don't remember ever seeing this script.

Well done.

Oh I guess I missed this thread!!

Big congrats, Pia! This was fabulous, not to mention grosser than I expected. The sound effects and real maggots really made this one. The acting and credit sequence were on the money as well. I'm really glad someone with actual production value decided to do this. I'd actually considered filming this instead of CC but due to the lack of a suitable "hospital" set, let alone a friend who'd want to be seen as "that girl," I opted to go with the latter.

Who wouldn't want to play "that girl"??

I would have done it in a heartbeat if the character was supposed to be old.... actually that might have added too the grossness.  

Anyway, I think this looked really sharp!!

Can't wait to see Dog Run. That should be really good!

Great job Rick!!

Nicely done you two.  I thought it worked especially well in a British setting, somehow the Brits can really pull something like this off.  

Quoted from Grandma Bear Can't wait to see Dog Run. That should be really good!

I think Rick is still working on getting the sound up to Phil's specifications.

Sound is fine here, too.
Great job!

It's always such a treat to see simplyscripters scripts on film.

Cindy

I can't believe this script actually saw the light of day haha.  I remember when you posted this one.

I do not recall the doctor being a woman, but it makes perfect sense, and actually works better -- good job formulating that switch.  Excellent work on the credits, too.  Very creative.

Well done, Rick.

I thought it was a job well done. Directed well. Funny sometimes, especially the little coughs from the doctor. Like Bert, I thought the ending credits were good. The acting was good. I don’t really get the story. It seemed like it was gross just to be gross. Definitely not an expected ending, though -- haha.

Good job.


Breanne

Thanks for all the feedback. I'm glad it's gone down well, even if the subject matter isn't to everyone's tastes.

For those of you who saw it last night, were the credits working properly? They seem to stick now. I think atom have cut them. BOO. BOO.

Yes, your name did stick for about thirty seconds last night.  But I thought you wanted people to remember your name.

Bugger. There's a whole load of other credits.

They musn't allow them on their site.  Oh well. Hopefully it didn't spoil it too much.

Ha! Pia you dirty dirty girl! Congrats on getting it done. And done well!

Quoted from Shelton I think Rick is still working on getting the sound up to Phil's specifications.

You, sir, can suck my balls.


Phil

Eww...

Now I shall go read the script. Good job, people.

Quoted from dogglebe You, sir, can suck my balls.

Okay.  I really don't think it will cure your horrible sense of hearing, but I'm willing to give it a try in the name of science.

Science has nothing to do with it.  You just want to.

Everyone, please click on the above link and enjoy.....um....Unprotected Sex.



Phil

Daaa-aaamn. You two should get a room.

Anyway, Rick, this was top-dollar nice. Well, it wasn't really - it was fucking gross, like the script...but in a good way so to speak. I thought the production here was really good, just like the other one of Pia's scripts you did (I can't remember the name). The acting was good as were the...sounds (eew).

But do OBGYNs really cover the patients lower part with a towel...?

Good stuff - to bad about the credits freezing.

Cheers
Rob

Quoted from sniper But do OBGYNs really cover the patients lower part with a towel...?

Some do. Some don’t. My experience has been that most do usually cover you with something. It can feel very humiliating to have your feet in the stirrups and someone checking you out that way. Giving you some extra coverage is the least they can do for you.

Mike, so that’s why you grew the beard.


Breanne

Congrats both of you. This was a good, gross, funny short film.

Thought the acting from the nurse was really good and loved the credits, although they did freeze on my laptop too.

Anyways, good job!

Yeah I remember the script causing a bit of huffiing and frowning when it debut on SS.

Oh and shame on you Rick for not giving a screen credit to your maggots. I hope they're members of SAG and sue your ass off.

Slack mate, very slack.

SAG is just for nampy pampy Americans. Us Brits can treat "talent" like cattle all we want.

The Iron Lady sorted out the trade unions for us. : )