I expect there will be a lot of scripts I don't find funny.

But I expect all the scripts will meet the genre criteria.

I'm going to spend a lot less time on this from this point forward. Other work is suffering. I'll still read every script though.

Quoted from leitskev I expect there will be a lot of scripts I don't find funny. But I expect all the scripts will meet the genre criteria. I'm going to spend a lot less time on this from this point forward. Other work is suffering. I'll still read every script though.

You're not writing for this one, Kevin?

Thanks for encouragement guys but the idea that came to me is very dramatic. It even made me feel sick in the stomach. I'll try to go with it and if not then not. There's no time for another idea.

Oh, I plan to, Khamanna, I'm sure I will. Just saying I won't be able to as much time into it. I'm working on a novel and it really suffered this past week.

And thanks for straightening me out on that script I misunderstood!

Comedies shouldn’t be edited too much   One draft is enough   If you read it back and it’s not that funny then scrap it and think of a new one

And timing is so vital even for a script that is just been read and not actually spoken.

(beat) is your friend

Quoted from stevie Comedies shouldn’t be edited too much   One draft is enough

Stevie, Stevie, Stevie... You're hurting my feelings when you say things like that. Why do you want to hurt my feelings?

Lol sorry Blondie ( I think)  I only do one draft of all my scripts  I handwrite then edit as I copy into the laptop    Keeps it fresh  

Quoted from stevie Lol sorry Blondie ( I think)  I only do one draft of all my scripts  I handwrite then edit as I copy into the laptop    Keeps it fresh

Ah... a treekiller.

Quoted from leitskev Oh, I plan to, Khamanna, I'm sure I will. Just saying I won't be able to as much time into it. I'm working on a novel and it really suffered this past week. And thanks for straightening me out on that script I misunderstood!

Well, I'm glad your reread it. I'm def a fan of that one.

Quoted from khamanna Well, I'm glad your reread it. I'm def a fan of that one.

It's so easy to miss things reading through so many stories. I am notorious for it. That's why I keep checking back on other peoples notes.

I hope someone does a riff on Ed Norton from the Honeymooners who worked in a sewer who'll be  played in the reboot by Ed Norton the actor who's career has gone in one.

Is sewer interior or exterior?

Quoted from khamanna Is sewer interior or exterior?

It's an indoor location.

Quoted from khamanna Is sewer interior or exterior?

Might want to use INT/WEIMLP. “Interior, wrap equipment in multiple layers of plastic”

Quoted from eldave1 I hope someone does a riff on Ed Norton from the Honeymooners who worked in a sewer who'll be  played in the reboot by Ed Norton the actor who's career has gone in one.

Dave, you're killing me. Probably not too many peeps on here that remember that.