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stevie
Posted: June 7th, 2019, 11:38pm
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lol Frank we should do a collab
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Warren
Posted: June 7th, 2019, 11:41pm
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You're an evil, evil man!
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Dreamscale
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 12:22am
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khamanna
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 12:29am
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Lol. I want to get into your head, Sean. What's going on in there... sewer? Oh I have a friend whose last name was Sewer. She was my house agent. Can it be that Sewer?
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DustinBowcot
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 3:09am
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I'm seeing a lot more dishonesty than usual in the reviews this time around. Anyone else picking that up? Remember, comedy is subjective... that you didn't find it funny is most likely because you didn't want to. Also, just because you don't find it funny doesn't make it not a comedy. It just makes you unappreciative. It's a subtle difference... but one that may affect scoring.
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Scar Tissue Films
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 3:50am
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Vomit draft completed. Fecking comedy....
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jayrex
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 3:58am
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I like it! I might find Jeff's comedy ideas whilst I'm down there.
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Matthew Taylor
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 5:46am
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The sewer is cool, but the whistle is killing me... Hopefully inspiration will strike
Feature 42.2 Two steps to writing a good screenplay: 1) Write a bad one 2) Fix it
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jayrex
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 5:54am
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Is it an actual whistle or the ability to whistle?
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 6:05am
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Lol. I want to get into your head, Sean. What's going on in there... sewer? Oh I have a friend whose last name was Sewer. She was my house agent. Can it be that Sewer?
You don't really want a glimpse in there. But, unfortunately, that Sewer will not count.
Is it an actual whistle or the ability to whistle?
An actual, physical whistle.
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FrankM
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 6:35am
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Now... including
actual vomit .
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Philostrate
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 7:05am
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You're killing me, Sean... First bobble-heads, now a whistle and a sewer...
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khamanna
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 8:10am
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For me the comedy part is a problem. I can write a drama on that but not a comedy.
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DustinBowcot
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 8:13am
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For me the comedy part is a problem. I can write a drama on that but not a comedy.
Just exaggerate everything. If you find it funny, make sure you leave it in in the second draft... because twice around things stop being funny. Don't be offended when 'reviewers' tell you it's not a comedy... wtf do they know? If you find it funny, it's comedy.
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LC
Posted: June 8th, 2019, 8:20am
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For me the comedy part is a problem. I can write a drama on that but not a comedy.
Kham, you wrote that great comedy about an eccentric young boy - I can't remember the title and it's not in your Sig but you made it high up in contests with that one and I remember your comedic flair.
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