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stevie
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lol Frank we should do a collab



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Quoted from stevie
lol Frank we should do a collab


DON'T DO IT, FRANK!!!!!!



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khamanna
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Lol. I want to get into your head, Sean. What's going on in there... sewer? Oh I have a friend whose last name was Sewer. She was my house agent. Can it be that Sewer?
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I'm seeing a lot more dishonesty than usual in the reviews this time around. Anyone else picking that up?

Remember, comedy is subjective... that you didn't find it funny is most likely because you didn't want to. Also, just because you don't find it funny doesn't make it not a comedy. It just makes you unappreciative. It's a subtle difference... but one that may affect scoring.
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Vomit draft completed.

Fecking comedy....
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I like it!

I might find Jeff's comedy ideas whilst I'm down there.


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The sewer is cool, but the whistle is killing me... Hopefully inspiration will strike


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jayrex
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Is it an actual whistle or the ability to whistle?


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Mr. Blonde
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Quoted from khamanna
Lol. I want to get into your head, Sean. What's going on in there... sewer? Oh I have a friend whose last name was Sewer. She was my house agent. Can it be that Sewer?


You don't really want a glimpse in there. But, unfortunately, that Sewer will not count.


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Is it an actual whistle or the ability to whistle?


An actual, physical whistle.


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Vomit draft completed.


Now... including actual vomit.


Feature-length scripts:
Who Wants to Be a Princess? (Family)
Glass House (Horror anthology)

TV pilots:
"Kord" (Fantasy)
"Mal Suerte" (Superhero)

Additional scripts are listed here.
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You're killing me, Sean...

First bobble-heads, now a whistle and a sewer...


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khamanna
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For me the comedy part is a problem. I can write a drama on that but not a comedy.
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DustinBowcot
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For me the comedy part is a problem. I can write a drama on that but not a comedy.


Just exaggerate everything. If you find it funny, make sure you leave it in in the second draft... because twice around things stop being funny. Don't be offended when 'reviewers' tell you it's not a comedy... wtf do they know? If you find it funny, it's comedy.
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Quoted from khamanna
For me the comedy part is a problem. I can write a drama on that but not a comedy.

Kham, you wrote that great comedy about an eccentric young boy - I can't remember the title and it's not in your Sig but you made it high up in contests with that one and I remember your comedic flair.



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