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 Writers' Tournament Round Three (3) Scripts. (currently 9209 views) |
| leitskev |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 4:48pm |
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I joined in late 2008 I think The pinnacle for the Owc, IMO, was the October 2010 one. There was also a great one in Feb 2011.
A lot of the vets from when I joined aren’t around now and they were awesome writers |
Absolutely. But now virtually ALL of the scripts are done well. |
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| FrankM |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 4:59pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1446 Posts Per Day 0.52 |
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| Warren |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 5:30pm |
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Of The Ancients  A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3890 Posts Per Day 1.17 |
All this talk of what hand sanitiser can and can't do is really sucking the fun out of this round |
I know right!! |
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| Warren |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 6:02pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3890 Posts Per Day 1.17 |
Alright, round 3 reading, diving in! |
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| eldave1 |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 9:28pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6974 Posts Per Day 1.74 |
Nicely written for the most part. I'd pare back the number of characters - it's already an inherently confusing set-up - the less characters the better.
Felt like I was missing an ending - what did the Orbs mean? It'a only five pages so that is a tough bar to hit - I know |
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| LC |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 9:31pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts8691 Posts Per Day 1.42 |
Nicely written for the most part. I'd pare back the number of characters - it's already an inherently confusing set-up - the less characters the better.
Felt like I was missing an ending - what did the Orbs mean? It'a only five pages so that is a tough bar to hit - I know |
Dave, is this meant to be here, in this thread? |
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| Warren |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 9:38pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3890 Posts Per Day 1.17 |
Nicely written for the most part. I'd pare back the number of characters - it's already an inherently confusing set-up - the less characters the better.
Felt like I was missing an ending - what did the Orbs mean? It'a only five pages so that is a tough bar to hit - I know |
Excellent review of the thread, Dave :p |
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| Gary in Houston |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 9:50pm |
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I would tell you what the orbs mean, but it would give away which script I wrote. |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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| Dreamscale |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 10:07pm |
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Of The Ancients  It's all about the rum
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| PKCardinal |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 11:33pm |
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LocationKansas Posts1634 Posts Per Day 0.59 |
I think I’m offended. Am I offended? Can somebody tell me if I’m offended? |
| PaulKWrites.com
Ashes - Semi-contained psychological horror thriller/Feature
The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature
Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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| leitskev |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 11:39pm |
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You're offended. Outraged. |
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| Dreamscale |
| Posted: June 18th, 2019, 11:43pm |
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Of The Ancients It's all about the rum
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| PKCardinal |
| Posted: June 19th, 2019, 12:02am |
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You're offended. Outraged. |
I knew it! |
| PaulKWrites.com
Ashes - Semi-contained psychological horror thriller/Feature
The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature
Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror |
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| Scar Tissue Films |
| Posted: June 19th, 2019, 2:42am |
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Excellent review of the thread, Dave :p
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 Makes it even better that it actually was 5 pages. |
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| DustinBowcot |
| Posted: June 19th, 2019, 2:52am |
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Is my part going to be cut? |
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