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leitskev
Posted: June 18th, 2019, 4:48pm Quote Report to Moderator
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I joined in late 2008 I think   The pinnacle for the Owc, IMO, was the October 2010 one. There was also a great one in Feb 2011.

A lot of the vets from when I joined aren’t around now and they were awesome writers


Absolutely. But now virtually ALL of the scripts are done well.
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FrankM
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Quoted from leitskev


Absolutely. But now virtually ALL of the scripts are done well.


Not ALL of them...


Feature-length scripts:
Who Wants to Be a Princess? (Family)
Glass House (Horror anthology)

TV pilots:
"Kord" (Fantasy)
"Mal Suerte" (Superhero)

Additional scripts are listed here.
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Warren
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All this talk of what hand sanitiser can and can't do is really sucking the fun out of this round


I know right!!


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Warren
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Alright, round 3 reading, diving in!


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Nicely written for the most part. I'd pare back the number of characters - it's already an inherently confusing set-up - the less characters the better.

Felt like I was missing an ending - what did the Orbs mean? It'a only five pages so that is a tough bar to hit - I know


My Scripts can all be seen here:

https://dlambertson.wixsite.com/scripts
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Nicely written for the most part. I'd pare back the number of characters - it's already an inherently confusing set-up - the less characters the better.

Felt like I was missing an ending - what did the Orbs mean? It'a only five pages so that is a tough bar to hit - I know

Dave, is this meant to be here, in this thread?



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Warren
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Quoted from eldave1
Nicely written for the most part. I'd pare back the number of characters - it's already an inherently confusing set-up - the less characters the better.

Felt like I was missing an ending - what did the Orbs mean? It'a only five pages so that is a tough bar to hit - I know


Excellent review of the thread, Dave :p


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Gary in Houston
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I would tell you what the orbs mean, but it would give away which script I wrote.


Some of my scripts:

Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly
I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner
The Gambler (short) - OWC winner
Skip (short) - filmed
Country Road 12 (short) - filmed
The Family Man (short) - filmed
The Journeyers (feature) - optioned

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Dreamscale
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If there are "orbs", I would think I may have wrote it, but I'd be referring to "large, shapely orbs".  
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If there are "orbs", I would think I may have wrote it, but I'd be referring to "large, shapely orbs".  


I think I’m offended. Am I offended? Can somebody tell me if I’m offended?


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Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature

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leitskev
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You're offended. Outraged.
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Dreamscale
Posted: June 18th, 2019, 11:43pm Quote Report to Moderator
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I'm sure all or most are outraged and offended.  Sorry.

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You're offended. Outraged.


I knew it!


PaulKWrites.com

Ashes - Semi-contained psychological horror thriller/Feature
The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature
Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature

Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror
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Scar Tissue Films
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Excellent review of the thread, Dave :p




Makes it even better that it actually was 5 pages.

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Is my part going to be cut?
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