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Don
Posted: January 7th, 2019, 11:36am Report to Moderator
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In Search of Hysterical Jesus by David Lambertson - Comedy - When a famous atheist comedian literally dies on stage, he makes a bargain with God to avoid damnation - make the bible funny. 108 pages - pdf format

CW: Would not recommend for anyone who might be offended by religious related humor.

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Hi David

I saw your thread about this a few days ago, so when this popped up I started giving it a read at work.

Unfortunately I have to stop at page 7 - I say unfortunately, because I am bloody loving it so far lol I only have to stop because my shift has actually finished and I have to drive home.

I can't wait to read more - I have nothing useful to add at the moment, I'm really liking the characterisations, the dialogue - so far I'm liking it all.

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Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Hi David

I saw your thread about this a few days ago, so when this popped up I started giving it a read at work.

Unfortunately I have to stop at page 7 - I say unfortunately, because I am bloody loving it so far lol I only have to stop because my shift has actually finished and I have to drive home.

I can't wait to read more - I have nothing useful to add at the moment, I'm really liking the characterisations, the dialogue - so far I'm liking it all.

Regards

Matt


Thanks,  Matt. Appreciate it.


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Dave, that was awesome. I think your writing went to a whole other level on this one. And before it was page finalist level so I don't even know what it's at now. So many great moves... Sharon's new boyfriend's occupation... the familiar faces at the wedding...

I should note I am beyond ignorant about any religious stuff or really most basic history. None of which interfered with my enjoyment of the script. In case you were wondering how it reads for someone who's not religious at all.

I hope I have time to do notes before you send this in to contests. Not that it needs it, but hopefully I can give some feedback in the next couple weeks or so.


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Thanks, mate. Much appreciated


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Comedy usually isn't my thing, but the logline definitely peaked my interest. I'll download it and read it at work whenever the boss isn't watching.

Zack


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Quoted from Zack
Comedy usually isn't my thing, but the logline definitely peaked my interest. I'll download it and read it at work whenever the boss isn't watching.

Zack


Thanks


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Would you say this is along the same lines as ‘The Life of Brian’ Dave?


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Will definitely read this. What’s CW stand for?

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Would you say this is along the same lines as ‘The Life of Brian’ Dave?


A little


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Will definitely read this. What’s CW stand for?

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CW?


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CW: Would not recommend for anyone who might be offended by religious related humor.
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CW?


Don't know what it stands for. It is my note when I posted


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CW?


Don't know what it stands for. It is my note when I posted


My Scripts can all be seen here:

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No problem then. Read 10 pgs. Will continue to read further.
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