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spesh2k
Posted: April 11th, 2020, 2:40pm Report to Moderator
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It doesn't necessarily need an exchange -- I've been confined to my bedroom/office for roughly a month now and it's looking like it's going to stay that way for a while. So, I have a LOT of time on my hands. I'm willing to read features or shorts purely for leisure. With features (especially if it's just a recommendation w/ out the exchange), I prefer something easy-to-read, fast-paced, attention-grabbing, etc. So, if anybody has any suggestions (doesn't necessarily have to be YOUR script), just hit me up.

If you'd like to do an exchange, you can find my script under the feature horror section. It's a pretty fast read and you might enjoy it if you're a fan of Adam Wingard's work, Mickey Keating, Lucky McKee, Ti West and horror filmmakers of that ilk.

TITLE: Honey Mustard
GENRE: Horror
PAGE COUNT: 91
LOG LINE: A retro 80's style, home-invasion slasher about an unhinged waitress who stalks and torments a man and his family after not being tipped. But this isn't just any ordinary family....

Don't Breathe meets You're Next.


THE SUICIDE THEORY (Amazon Prime, 79% Rotten Tomatoes) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2517300/?ref_=nm_knf_i1
RAGE (Coming Feb. 2021) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8874764/?ref_=nm_knf_i2
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Just to add an endorsement and a bump since I already reviewed Honey Mustard.

I'd recommend the exchange to any SS peeps. You'll get good notes on yours and Honey Mustard is highly entertaining.

Make sure you hit me up Michael if you come out with a new one


My Scripts can all be seen here:

https://dlambertson.wixsite.com/scripts
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spesh2k
Posted: April 11th, 2020, 10:16pm Report to Moderator
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Thanks, man!


THE SUICIDE THEORY (Amazon Prime, 79% Rotten Tomatoes) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2517300/?ref_=nm_knf_i1
RAGE (Coming Feb. 2021) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8874764/?ref_=nm_knf_i2
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medstudent
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Michael,
Looking to do a review exchange for a script. I have an 83 page drama that I need feedback on if you are still interested. Let me know and I'll send you the script.

Joseph


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spesh2k
Posted: April 16th, 2020, 11:31am Report to Moderator
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Is it posted on Simply Scripts?


THE SUICIDE THEORY (Amazon Prime, 79% Rotten Tomatoes) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2517300/?ref_=nm_knf_i1
RAGE (Coming Feb. 2021) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8874764/?ref_=nm_knf_i2
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medstudent
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Not an updated version. I'd have to email it.


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spesh2k
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Sure thing, just send it here -- spesh2k@msn.com

My script, "Honey Mustard" is under the feature horror section.

-- Michael


THE SUICIDE THEORY (Amazon Prime, 79% Rotten Tomatoes) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2517300/?ref_=nm_knf_i1
RAGE (Coming Feb. 2021) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8874764/?ref_=nm_knf_i2
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medstudent
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Sent. I'll read yours and post (or email) a review on Honey Mustard this weekend.

Joseph


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spesh2k
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Cool, sent you an email. Your script looks to be very well written, so it should be a breeze.

-- Michael


THE SUICIDE THEORY (Amazon Prime, 79% Rotten Tomatoes) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2517300/?ref_=nm_knf_i1
RAGE (Coming Feb. 2021) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8874764/?ref_=nm_knf_i2
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Pale Yellow
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Hey Michael..
You may not need anymore notes.. but I'm avail to read on Monday and Tuesday this week. I am trying to write a script I want to enter in Nicholls if I get it finished in time... so I'll need a read real soon in return.
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spesh2k
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Hey Dena, absolutely. Let me know when you finish it.

-- Michael


THE SUICIDE THEORY (Amazon Prime, 79% Rotten Tomatoes) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt2517300/?ref_=nm_knf_i1
RAGE (Coming Feb. 2021) https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8874764/?ref_=nm_knf_i2
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Sarah
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Hi Michael!

It's been a while since anyone posted here, but was wondering if you're still looking for an exchange or scripts to read? I have an early draft of a feature I'm working on posted here recently called Psychodelic, would love some feedback!

Let me know

- sarah


"If it can be written or thought, it can be filmed."

- Stanley Kubrick
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LC
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Hi Sarah, feel free also to create a new thread for your script Psychodelic in Script Review exchange.

Add the link to your script:
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1624189681/s-0/highlight-/#num0

Any other queries PM me.




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Sarah
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Hey, will do!

Thank you!  


"If it can be written or thought, it can be filmed."

- Stanley Kubrick
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Zack
Posted: July 9th, 2021, 3:39pm Report to Moderator
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You still looking for reviews on this, Michael?


I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.

Check out my features!

PUMPKIN GUTS

THE POTEM

JEEPERS CREEPERS III
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