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steven8
Posted: January 25th, 2023, 3:57am Report to Moderator
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I love loglines and trying to write them.  Lots of good possibilities in this one!


...in no particular order
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Thank you all!  

I saved all the suggestions, but I think I'm going with this one since it best describes the script itself.

"A young, horror-obsessed couple convert an abandoned murder house into a supposedly haunted bed and breakfast, but find that something sinister resides within when their cat's pet-cam begins to capture strange happenings."



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I love loglines and trying to write them.  Lots of good possibilities in this one!


I totally suck at writing them. You'd think after all these years I would have a clue how to do it, but...  


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Quoted from Grandma Bear
Thank you all!  

I saved all the suggestions, but I think I'm going with this one since it best describes the script itself.

"A young, horror-obsessed couple convert an abandoned murder house into a supposedly haunted bed and breakfast, but find that something sinister resides within when their cat's pet-cam begins to capture strange happenings."



That works


My Scripts can all be seen here:

http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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That works


Agreed.


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Reef Dreamer
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Lovely work

Not sure how the script is crafted but i love the idea of their love/passion - horror - backfiring and coming to haunt them. Scares are all ok if there’s no risk or truth etc

Also, is it their cat, or one that turns up - quite like the ‘taking in a stray’ angle. Why is there? What has it seen? Why does it survive etc?

Best of luck, you have been a master at the contained low budget script before


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
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Hi Bill! Long time no see.

I was so happy to read your comment and then I started getting feedback on the script in question and apparently it sucks. Well, at least the second half.


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