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An outgoing woman and her reserved fiancee stumble on a brutal ritual and must race through the forest from a blood-thirsty ancient fiend!
This is a short script based on my feature The Potem. I'll be producing this short early next summer as a proof-of-concept, then pitch the finished short film to potential investors with plans to produce the feature version the following summer. I've got a long road ahead of me, but I'm both ready and excited to face the challenge! This is what I was born to do.
Will submit the short script soon, as well as an updated draft of the feature.
Any suggestions on the logline for this short are much appreciated!
I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.
When a newly-engaged couple stumble on a terrifying blood-ritual deep in the forest, they're forced to flee for their lives from an ancient, blood-thirsty fiend!
When a newly-engaged couple stumble on a terrifying blood-ritual deep in the forest, they're forced to flee for their lives from an ancient, blood-thirty fiend!
Nice! I like it. Definitely an improvement. Thanks, Steven.
I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.
That sounds far too scary and thrilling to be honest Zack. Maybe tone it down for the Disney crowd, here I will help...
A lovely woman and her devoted fiancee stumble on a gentle ritual and must move briskly (but safely) through the forest from a slightly miffed ancient sprite!
Sounds awesome Zack, looking forward to reading it!
When an unsuspecting couple stumble upon a terrifying blood ritual deep in the forest, an ancient malevolent presence forces them to flee for their life.
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A lovely woman and her devoted fiancee stumble on a gentle ritual and must move briskly (but safely) through the forest from a slightly miffed ancient sprite!
LMAO!
Somehow I missed your comment, Matt. Sorry about that! The script is up now.
I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.
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