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Zack
Posted: August 18th, 2023, 3:45am Report to Moderator
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An outgoing woman and her reserved fiancee stumble on a brutal ritual and must race through the forest from a blood-thirsty ancient fiend!

This is a short script based on my feature The Potem. I'll be producing this short early next summer as a proof-of-concept, then pitch the finished short film to potential investors with plans to produce the feature version the following summer. I've got a long road ahead of me, but I'm both ready and excited to face the challenge! This is what I was born to do.

Will submit the short script soon, as well as an updated draft of the feature.

Any suggestions on the logline for this short are much appreciated!


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JEEPERS CREEPERS III

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When a newly-engaged couple stumble on a terrifying blood-ritual deep in the forest, they're forced to flee for their lives from an ancient, blood-thirsty fiend!
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Zack
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When a newly-engaged couple stumble on a terrifying blood-ritual deep in the forest, they're forced to flee for their lives from an ancient, blood-thirty fiend!


Nice! I like it. Definitely an improvement. Thanks, Steven.


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steven8
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Quoted from Zack


Nice! I liked it. Definitely an improvement. Thanks, Steven.


You're quite welcome.
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Matthew Taylor
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That sounds far too scary and thrilling to be honest Zack. Maybe tone it down for the Disney crowd, here I will help...

A lovely woman and her devoted fiancee stumble on a gentle ritual and must move briskly (but safely) through the forest from a slightly miffed ancient sprite!



Sounds awesome Zack, looking forward to reading it!


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kcranford
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Throwing in my two cents:

When an unsuspecting couple stumble upon a terrifying blood ritual deep in the forest, an ancient malevolent presence forces them to flee for their life.





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Zack
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All great suggestions! Thanks, everyone!

Can't wait to share the script with you. Will throw it up here just as soon as the submissions have opened back up.


I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.

Check out my features!

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THE POTEM

JEEPERS CREEPERS III
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Zack
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor


A lovely woman and her devoted fiancee stumble on a gentle ritual and must move briskly (but safely) through the forest from a slightly miffed ancient sprite!


LMAO!

Somehow I missed your comment, Matt. Sorry about that! The script is up now.


I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.

Check out my features!

PUMPKIN GUTS

THE POTEM

JEEPERS CREEPERS III
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