As always I enjoyed reading your script Mike. You perfectly convey the awkwardness of Barry's situation.

I'm not sure if the alternative ending is part of the story, sort of diffrent view point or if you just wrote two endings for anyone who will dislike the original ending.

I like the first ending. I laughed out loud at the unexpected strangeness of it and it is just pure Oddball Shelton fun.

Hey Impulse and Glenn,

Thanks for reading.  I like the first one better too.  I think it's because it's not as overused as the second one, which I've seen around a few times before.

As far as why there are two endings...I just happened to conceive both of them, thought they fit, and decided to put them in since the overall script isn't that long and I didn't think anyone would mind reading an additional page or so.