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Dustin
Posted: May 20th, 2019, 2:46am Report to Moderator
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They prey on the desperation of writers who crave recognition. I've been through all of this too. Working for free on numerous occasions, even writing two features from scratch. What a fucking idiot.


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Warren
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Holy hell, talk about rising from the dead.

Had an email from the filmmaker today with a link to the completed film. I was 100% sure this was never going to happen.

I think this was the second short I ever wrote, its pretty unoriginal and I don't think the quality of the story or the writing is anything near how I write today, but it's still nice to see your babies made.

When a version of it lands on YouTube or Vimeo I'll upload it to the site.


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Quoted from Warren
Holy hell, talk about rising from the dead.

Had an email from the filmmaker today with a link to the completed film. I was 100% sure this was never going to happen.

I think this was the second short I ever wrote, its pretty unoriginal and I don't think the quality of the story or the writing is anything near how I write today, but it's still nice to see your babies made.

When a version of it lands on YouTube or Vimeo I'll upload it to the site.


Very cool - looking forward to it.


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Kirsten
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Yay, looking forward to seeing it!


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Kirsten
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I remember this was one of the first scripts I read as a newbie on here, and was very impressed. I'm sure I commented on how this is how you write a script... I really liked that it was fast paced and had a good twist, and it taught me how to use white space and short action lines to keep the momentum in action scenes, so I'm really glad to see it got made, after a few years lol....


"Turn that off, our friend has just been killed in a fatal sunlight accident!"....

'What we do in the Shadows.'
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Warren
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Quoted from Kirsten
I remember this was one of the first scripts I read as a newbie on here, and was very impressed. I'm sure I commented on how this is how you write a script... I really liked that it was fast paced and had a good twist, and it taught me how to use white space and short action lines to keep the momentum in action scenes, so I'm really glad to see it got made, after a few years lol....


I was very much a newbie too, only my second short (now I'm up over 30 and 4 features). I reread it the other day and it is so far removed from how I write today. It's quite interesting to see the change, and a lot of that is definitely due to feedback from SS members.

Glad you got something out of it


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Warren
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Very cool - looking forward to it.


Thanks, Dave.


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Don
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So, what are you writing?

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Zack
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Congrats, Dude! I'll check it out as soon as I get home from work!


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eldave1
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I thought overall they did a really nice job with this.  Only m inor complaints - I thought the opening title fonts looked a little odd and a couple of scenes the lighting was a bit too dark - but overall - nice!!! Congrats on getting another in the can!


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Warren
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Thanks, Zack and Dave.

There are so many things I don't like about how this turned out, some really odd choices in places. The font and opening is terrible, the slow pace running, the overly telegraphed fall, the broken glass stuck to the window frame, the re-using of cuts out of order, the extremely badly acted doctor's dialogue (not in the original script). I think it had potential, but ultimately didn't get there.

The way this even all came about is a a bit strange in itself, but here we are

Kinda funny that this is a pursuer reversal script after the challenge we just had :p

This was the second short script I ever wrote.

I know this isn't great, but it's always sort of nice to see your words come to life.


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Warren
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Thanks for getting this up, Don. Much appreciated as always.


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MarkRenshaw
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Hey, that was pretty decent! I agree with all the points made by Warren and Dave, there are some odd choices and moments but it's always lovely to get a short produced.


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BarryJohn
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Nice... VERY NICE. well done Warren! The short move is great!


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Warren
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Thanks, Mark and Barry


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