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Posted: September 17th, 2021, 5:44pm Report to Moderator
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Stop him! by Niall Byrne - Short, Horror, Comedy - A man finds out sometimes its better not to be a hero. 3 pages - pdf format

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Shouldn't this be in the horror shorts section?


WITCH HUNT - horror, 77 pgs

THE 1997 TEXAS CHAIN SAW MASSACRE - horror, 82 pgs

HERE COMES THE BOGEYMAN - horror, 24 pgs
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Shouldn't this be in the horror shorts section?


Yes. Yes it should.

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Hey, Niall, gave this a read.

Overall, I liked the use of a loop pattern here to convey the moral of the story that - not everything is true that meets the eye. The writing was also nice and easy to follow. No hiccups there. Although, the title page alignment is slightly off in regards to the margins, easily fixable.  

A decent effort, I would say.

Good luck.  


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Liked the concept of this one. Short and sweet.
Writing was good. Flowed well!
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