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I gave my amusing script to a writer friend for his review. Let’s just say he was... unamused. Yikes. Anyone got some punch lines to spare?
Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
I'm also pretty excited to read these. It's going to be a hoot!
I haven't looked at mine since finishing it. I showed it to my filmmaker friend and...well, he doesn't want to shoot it. I think it made him nauseated. But he's dead inside, so maybe I hit the nail on the head.
I gave my amusing script to a writer friend for his review. Let’s just say he was... unamused. Yikes. Anyone got some punch lines to spare?
This is part of why my little red boat is securely tied to the dock. I think someone could do a good story with the concept. I am convinced that someone is not me.
So...just let my girlfriend read what I had so far, and after 2 pages, she was obviously upset and tried to walk away. After my best romantic niceness, I begged her to just finish, which she did. I didn't have any roses or chocolate to giver her...
She's been really pissed ever since and said there's not 1 single funny anything in the script.
Well...I beg to differ. This could be a rough OWC, and I am prepared for it.
THERE IS NO POSSIBLE WAY I COULD "WIN", but let's remember this isn't a competition, and there are no losers. All who enter and take part in providing feedback are winners!
THERE IS NO POSSIBLE WAY I COULD "WIN", but let's remember this isn't a competition, and there are no losers. All who enter and take part in providing feedback are winners!
Okay, who are you and what did you do with Jeff? Lol. =)
THERE IS NO POSSIBLE WAY I COULD "WIN", but let's remember this isn't a competition, and there are no losers. All who enter and take part in providing feedback are winners!
Okay, first review here. Let’s see what we got. No title page. That’s a bad start. No FADE IN. An incomplete sentence right off the bat, and ending that with an ellipsis? This needs to get better quickly if I’m gonna read on.
What’s with the ALL CAPS starting the next line. Horrible grammar at work here, there’s no plot, and fewer characters.
Hate to say it bro, but I’m out.
Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
Okay, first review here. Let’s see what we got. No title page. That’s a bad start. No FADE IN. An incomplete sentence right off the bat, and ending that with an ellipsis? This needs to get better quickly if I’m gonna read on.
What’s with the ALL CAPS starting the next line. Horrible grammar at work here, there’s no plot, and fewer characters.
Hate to say it bro, but I’m out.
My favorite Jeff review of one of my OWCs: The good news...
Peeps seem to enjoy this for some reason.
The not so good news...
The bad news...
I'm out after the first passage. I cannot stand this smarmy style.
Obviously a pisser, with zero effort to meet the actual challenge.
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