Quoted from Grandma Bear I didn't used to, but nowadays I do. I find the scripts easier to write as a result, but also much better. I'm actually starting to like the plotting better than the actual writing of the script itself.

Thanks Pia. Good to know.

Quoted from Grandma Bear Nope. I have mine plotted out though.

Well, I'm interested in seeing what you come up with.

That one feature you sent me a while back when I was looking for stuff to read wasn't my cup of joe, but damn your character development was fucking IMPRESSIVE.  I don't think I ever took a liking to a character as fast I did with the one you created.  You really breathed life into her.  I'm still amazed.

Pia always amazes me.  She rocks the fucking house.  SWEDE POWER!!!!!

Quoted from ArtyDoubleYou I plan to officially reveal myself on Friday anyway so I can respond to the comments.

Everyone already knows which script I wrote, lol.  

-Lee

I thought you had two in there Lee - mind you I noticed another script missing from the original tally, apart from Led's. And btw, I'm yet to have it confirmed by you, if I was right?

Quoted from Leegion Everyone already knows which script I wrote, lol.   -Lee

I'm not sure I know??? Have I missed something?


Anyway, I'm putting out a small cry for help...

I'm currently writing a fight scene, something that I've never done before, so at the moment I'm pretty much just winging it. But I was wondering if there are any good fight scenes somewhere here on these boards, or that you know of in any pro scripts? I'd like to take a look at how others tackle them and maybe pick up a few hints or tips along the way.

So far, my fight has taken up about three pages, and still isn't quite done yet. I have a pretty sweet finishing move though, one I doubt you'd see it in WWE anyway.

Well, if you know of any such scripts and you can, please direct me to them or send them over to me at... artywhale(at)hotmail.co.uk. It would be most appreciated.

Quoted from LC I thought you had two in there Lee - mind you I noticed another script missing from the original tally, apart from Led's. And btw, I'm yet to have it confirmed by you, if I was right?

I only entered one.  I was a little surprised when you mentioned a second, lol.  

Quoted from ArtyDoubleYou I'm not sure I know??? Have I missed something? Anyway, I'm putting out a small cry for help... I'm currently writing a fight scene, something that I've never done before, so at the moment I'm pretty much just winging it. But I was wondering if there are any good fight scenes somewhere here on these boards, or that you know of in any pro scripts? I'd like to take a look at how others tackle them and maybe pick up a few hints or tips along the way. So far, my fight has taken up about three pages, and still isn't quite done yet. I have a pretty sweet finishing move though, one I doubt you'd see it in WWE anyway. Well, if you know of any such scripts and you can, please direct me to them or send them over to me at... artywhale(at)hotmail.co.uk. It would be most appreciated.

I have a very distinctive writing style.  

I've sent you a PM.  No need to bump my own stuff.

Quoted from Leegion I only entered one.  I was a little surprised when you mentioned a second, lol.

Maybe you wrote one in your sleep... you do tend to churn them out.  

Quoted from LC Maybe you wrote one in your sleep... you do tend to churn them out.

Never rule out that possibility, haha.  I'm half-asleep most of the time.

Did I read yuors, Lee?  I didn't even realize you changed your name and avatar.  Interesting...

Were you celebrating, Jeff?  

Lee, I have no idea which one you wrote. I'm planning on reading all. Just going up the list from the bottom. I see a few have been removed though.

Arty, are you looking for how to write action fight scenes or do you have a question about the fight scene itself?

Quoted from Dreamscale Did I read yuors, Lee?  I didn't even realize you changed your name and avatar.  Interesting...

You certainly read it.  Gave me some pretty great feedback too.  

Yep, new username and avatar, new me.  I was getting tired of "Leegion".

Quoted from Grandma Bear Arty, are you looking for how to write action fight scenes or do you have a question about the fight scene itself?

How to actually write them.

Quoted from ArtyDoubleYou How to actually write them.

Ok. What kind of fight? Fist fight? Gun? Martial arts?...

Quoted from Grandma Bear Ok. What kind of fight? Fist fight? Gun? Martial arts?...

That's a good question. The scene I'm currently writing is a straight up fist fight, though there will be guns, and perhaps a bit of martial arts on the way as well.

So examples of each would be great thanks.