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It shouldn't be reads that concern you. You should only be concerned about sales. Writing something in the hope of reads on a forum seems pretty sad to me. You'd be better of writing novels. At least you can self-publish.
You end up fixing things based on comments from readers here for nothing. If the idea is a good one, then pitch it to people that actually care. If they want changes then you have far more incentive to make them.
The probability of NBC rebooting Family Ties with that specific, unsolicited, unrepresented script is roughly the same as being struck by lightning while carrying a winning lottery ticket. But the initial writing and the revision were useful practice.
In the case of Round One here, just planning on posting a link to the script I had before I performed an all-the-important-parts-ectomy to get it down to five pages.
They may not want to make yours... but if you can prove that you can write for the show then maybe they have a reboot planned. I've never seen it. I have no idea what it is and I can't be bothered to Google it. You can also use it to prove that you can do reboots. Maybe not Family Ties... maybe they have another show in mind.
Tha Package - Zack Head Space - Anthony Cawood Dr Schnederly - PKCardinal Just Stop - Hawkeye I'm Being Watched - Philostrate Virtual Vengeance Container - Warren (Although you just guessed someone else, so I must be wrong) The Doc is out - JEStaats Never Know what you'll get - Dreamscale Where did he touch you - Jayrex Sprung - Henb
Tha Package - Zack Head Space - Anthony Cawood Dr Schnederly - PKCardinal Just Stop - Hawkeye I'm Being Watched - Philostrate Virtual Vengeance Container - Warren (Although you just guessed someone else, so I must be wrong) The Doc is out - JEStaats Never Know what you'll get - Dreamscale Where did he touch you - Jayrex Sprung - Henb
Never know what you’ll get — my gut says Jeff, but it could be a wild card like Stevie Dr Schnederly - this has Paul written all over it Virtual Vengeance Container - could be Warren or Rene Melt - because it was over the limit and Zack was mentioning how much he had to cut, I’m going with Zack Need to think about some of these other ones.
An utterly mediocre writer who somehow still falls bass ackwards into getting some of his scripts produced.
Can't take credit for Melt. Dena did not participate. I don't think Rick did Melt, his comments were too enthusiastic. I think he just genuinely really liked it.
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