Day 3 of reading, should be able to knock the rest over today.

I had one reader say the bobblehead wasnt essential to my story in round one. Which was true, you could have replaced it with a puppet or doll. But now that I see what script is his, the same could be said: the bobblehead could be replaced by...I won't say, that would give it away.

These three days have been too busy for me. I read five so far, will surely get through all in time.

Hey Kham - check your pm;)

I just went looking for the next script to read of R2.
Done, read and reviewed all.  

I'm done as well - Well done all, this one was tough and personally, I struggled with it.

There was a wide range of stories so everyone should find something they love.
Hats off to you all

I'm not going to guess writers this round, I'll just give things away lol

Quoted from Matthew Taylor I'm done as well - Well done all, this one was tough and personally, I struggled with it. There was a wide range of stories so everyone should find something they love. Hats off to you all I'm not going to guess writers this round, I'll just give things away lol

C'mon, Dude. You gotta make a couple guesses. I'm curious if you were able to spot mine this round.

Quoted from Zack C'mon, Dude. You gotta make a couple guesses. I'm curious if you were able to spot mine this round.

Yours was the first I spotted lol... you gotta make it harder for me

Quoted from Matthew Taylor Yours was the first I spotted lol... you gotta make it harder for me

Damn. Lol. I'm gonna try my best to mix it up for round 3.

I’m done and I apologize to those to whom I was less than kind to in my reviews. Uncalled for. I also apologize to those who had to read my entry this round. Also uncalled for.

Gary

Quoted from Gary in Houston I’m done and I apologize to those to whom I was less than kind to in my reviews. Uncalled for. I also apologize to those who had to read my entry this round. Also uncalled for. Gary

I did enjoy your entry last round. I thought it was the only script that separated from the pack.

Quoted from leitskev I did enjoy your entry last round. I thought it was the only script that separated from the pack.

You’re far too kind Kev, but greatly appreciated!

Oh, no one here would call me kind! My review comments said pretty much the same thing I just did. This was one of 3 scripts I gave an N on criteria, and it STILL scored higher than any of the others on my board.

I just read a script that tries something outside the box. And that's what OWC type events should be all about. What better place to experiment? No, I don't know who the writer is.

But this is what he did: he used a flashback memory in which he saw himself as muscle city, but in reality he looked nothing like that, and we don't realize it til the flash ends.

Did the writer pull it off? Maybe not quite. I'm not sure the contrast was great enough. The viewing audience might be confused. They might think he USED to be muscle city.

I once saw a cartoon drawing that showed a fat, middle age man daydreaming at his desk. In his dream, he's a knight in shining armour fighting a dragon. This reminded me of that.

I'm sure in the long history of film everything has been done. But I myself never thought of this, so the writer stretched my mind a little, and it's much appreciated. We have to open to some mind stretching!

Heading to the airport   Is the scorecard available yet?