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JohnPaul
Posted: June 10th, 2020, 2:13pm Report to Moderator
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1.  When I have writers block sometimes it helps me to write fan fiction

2. It helped me a lot to get back into the swing of things and now Iīm writing an original found footage script.

3. It would be really helpful to get some feedback on dialogue and descriptions, so I donīt make the same errors in the next script.

4. I want to see if it grabs the attention.

5. Since the new original script has a lot of action, I want to know that I am writing action in a way that people can follow.

6.  Of course I am willing to read your scripts in exchange and give you feedback.

7. And of course I want honesty. Uh, by the way I have a Wonder Woman script up as well. But this was from some years ago. I wrote it before Wonder Woman 2017 came out, but some feedback on that would be appreciated too.

Thanks for hearing me out lol  
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Zack
Posted: June 10th, 2020, 11:13pm Report to Moderator
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Hey, John. Welcome to Simplyscripts. No need to be ashamed of writing fan-fiction.

I'll take a look at it for ya. Just have one stipulation, I won't force myself to read something that I'm not enjoying. Hope that sounds fair to you. I'll give it a peek and leave you some notes on the script thread.

Btw, here are some links that may help you out a bit:

https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-cc/m-1124159895/
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-screenwrite/
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LC
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Hey Zack, thanks for posting the links for JohnPaul!

You must be psychic and guessed I was out of action this morning.  



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Zack
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Hey Zack, thanks for posting the links for JohnPaul!

You must be psychic and guessed I was out of action this morning.  



Figured I'd help ya' out.
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JohnPaul
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Hi. Thanks.

I was supposed to get an email message letting me know that I got a reply.

Sorry for the late response.
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[quote=Zack_M._Akers]

Figured I'd help ya' out.   

Is there anything I can read of yours?

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Hey Zack, thanks for posting the links for JohnPaul!

You must be psychic and guessed I was out of action this morning.  


Link -Superman - https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/SUPERMANYEARONEAMERICANALIEN.pdf

-   Wonder Woman -      https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/WonderWomanDaughterOfDestiny.pdf


Can i read something of yours?
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