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eldave1
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Bravo. Congrats, Dave. That's pretty damn consistent performance. But I just had a funny feeling about your script as I read it. Call it women's intuition or whathaveyou’s. Speaking for both of us -- all the best going forward.-A


Thanks, Andrea - very kind of ya!


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Grandma Bear
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Congrats Dave!

I feel bad I never wrote up a review. I read up to page 75 or so, but due to being really busy this spring, I was only able to read it in bits and pieces, so I wasn't really able to think of the story in a complete way. It looks like you're doing well with the script though. Next time you have a script, send it to me when you have a first draft. I'm pretty sure I owe you one.  


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eldave1
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Quoted from Grandma Bear
Congrats Dave!

I feel bad I never wrote up a review. I read up to page 75 or so, but due to being really busy this spring, I was only able to read it in bits and pieces, so I wasn't really able to think of the story in a complete way. It looks like you're doing well with the script though. Next time you have a script, send it to me when you have a first draft. I'm pretty sure I owe you one.  


Thanks - no worries at all - I got several reads on it so I'm good on feedback.  



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Good on ya, mate! Must feel good.

I would expect no less. Good luck going forward!  


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Quoted from LC
Good on ya, mate! Must feel good.

I would expect no less. Good luck going forward!  


Gracias


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No wonder it got in, Dave! Congrats!

I read it shortly after it was posted, but you know Covid didn't make things easy. So I wasn't able to give my thoughts on this.

Nonetheless, way to go my man!


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Quoted from Yuvraj
No wonder it got in, Dave! Congrats!

I read it shortly after it was posted, but you know Covid didn't make things easy. So I wasn't able to give my thoughts on this.

Nonetheless, way to go my man!


Thanks, buddy


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eldave1
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Morning email

Hi DAVID,

Good news: your script, Baggage, is advancing to the Semifinalist round of the 2021 ScreenCraft Comedy Competition. Congratulations!


Onwards!


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Nice one, Dave. I'm sure it's the first of many notifications like this for Baggage.


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Yuvraj
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Terrific news, Dave!! Congrats!


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eldave1
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Thanks, guys.


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Blatant self-promotion.  Just got the Scriptapalooza email. Here is where Baggage stands as of this morning:

SCRIPTAPALOOZA = into quarterfinals, semi's late August
PAGE = Into quarterfinals - semi's to be announced 8-15
SCREECRAFT = into semi-finals. Finals to be announced 8-3
NICHOLLS = awaiting results
LAUNCHPAD = awaiting results
THE SCRIPTLAB = awaiting results.

So, I am getting somewhat optimistic about the broad-based results. That normally doesn't happen (i.e., I'll do well in what contest, not in others). Maybe this is the one. Maybe.....????


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Yuvraj
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Dave, you'll blast through all of these!!

If I'm been quite realistic.  


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Quoted from Yuvraj
Dave, you'll blast through all of these!!

If I'm been quite realistic.  


Thanks!


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Exciting stuff, Dave! Congrats and good luck moving forward! I'm sure you will do well. Keep us updated!
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