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If I was going to nitpick, it would be as an occasional filmmaker who knows nothing, lol. I always watch with headphones when I want to watch seriously, but that also makes tiny flaws stand out when it comes to sound. It was hollow. It needed more layers of sound. I would also say they should have filmed the writer from more angles. They did with the other two, but not him. Like I said, very tiny nitpicks.
Great casting, (a bit of a Ryan Gosling thing happening with the main character - which is nice ) and the vibe is spot on. I laughed out loud in a few places.
I think your punchline was a bit lost in this longer version with the GF's death but it was very entertaining nonetheless.
Glad you liked it! I see what you’re saying about my punchline, though I knew from the get go this director wanted to add more to this. Feel he did a pretty decent job. Said he wanted a Coen brothers type thing going on, and I can see a little of that, too.
If I was going to nitpick, it would be as an occasional filmmaker who knows nothing, lol. I always watch with headphones when I want to watch seriously, but that also makes tiny flaws stand out when it comes to sound. It was hollow. It needed more layers of sound. I would also say they should have filmed the writer from more angles. They did with the other two, but not him. Like I said, very tiny nitpicks.
Good show. I like the parody of the infamous Matrix interview. I've often wondered if the feds are watching when I Google some very odd stuff in the name of research for a story. Last week I searched how to make a hangman's noose for a prop and was greeted with multiple notifications to contact the suicide hotline.
I thought the actors did well. Audio could've been better, but I understood what they were saying. Nice to have another one on your resume. Thanks for sharing it.
Good show. I like the parody of the infamous Matrix interview. I've often wondered if the feds are watching when I Google some very odd stuff in the name of research for a story. Last week I searched how to make a hangman's noose for a prop and was greeted with multiple notifications to contact the suicide hotline.
I thought the actors did well. Audio could've been better, but I understood what they were saying. Nice to have another one on your resume. Thanks for sharing it.
Thanks for watching the new version, which I personally think is the best thing anyone has ever done with one of my scripts. This film came out great. The filmmaker asked me to write a one hour pilot for this as a couple prodcos showed some interest. We’ll see what comes of that, if anything.
The language you’re hearing is Russian, and the filmmaker is currently trying to leave the country and maybe head to the US, so I wish him good luck there.
I’ll post the pilot once it’s revised, which basically follows the story of the characters from this particular version of my script. Which are actually his (filmmakers) characters. He just liked the script, but what he literally did was film a whole new version “based” on my story and did some amazing things with it.
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) and the vibe is spot on. I laughed out loud in a few places.
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