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Commodus: But the Emperor Claudius knew that they were up to something. He knew they were busy little bees. And one night he sat down with one of them and he looked at her and he said, "Tell me what you have been doing, busy little bee..."
Dude.... The dolly shot starting at 2:09 was incredible, and the doll's arm moving? the hair on my neck stood up. Cudos to the FX team. Bee-El looks great in the reveal, reminds me of Darkness from Legend. Congrats on a quality short man. May you have all the success you deserve.
Chris, you've got an impressive film on your hands here and, whilst humility goes a long way, humility and talent are a commodity in short supply. I'm sure it's getting all kinds of positive ink. We wish you all the luck . Shout it from the rooftops. You earned the right. This is a great looking piece of work!