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Warren
Posted: May 16th, 2019, 12:07am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


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Congrats John, you're smashing these out now!


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Philostrate
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Congrats, John. The story flows nicely and the artwork looks awesome.

Why the change of title? Just curious, Jack Noir was a good one IMO.


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Zack
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Bad-ass art and a pretty cool little story. Awesome stuff, Dude.


I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.

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Glad you all liked it. Writing three acts in three pages is a blast, almost addicting.


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Congrats, John. The story flows nicely and the artwork looks awesome.

Why the change of title? Just curious, Jack Noir was a good one IMO.


I also liked Jack Noir but thought it was a little too OTN. I figured the reader would either clue in to Jack the Ripper or they wouldn't. I don't know. Another case of second guessing myself?

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Hey John, makes sense. I like the original title, but It’s Me sounds good too. I don't think anyone's going to have problems to see the link between the two. You have that covered.

I also wanted to thank you for sharing the comic scripts. I am working with HE to adapt one of my shorts into comic, and they were very useful. It's awesome how you manage to tell these cool stories in so little space.


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