Everyone reading is going to be expecting a twist or surprise, so the trick is to make that twist so wide open it could be anything. Or so out of left field it knocks the reader out. And not cheesy.

I think I hate this challenge, lol. I keep thinking I'm clever and keep getting reminded it's all in my head.

Submitted.

Bring it.  

Quoted from ReneC Submitted. Bring it.

Consider it brought. Me speak real good:0

So looking forward to this. I could read 30 entries of 1-2 pages. With the genre, there could be quite the spectrum of little tales.

Quoted from ReneC Everyone reading is going to be expecting a twist or surprise, so the trick is to make that twist so wide open it could be anything. Or so out of left field it knocks the reader out. And not cheesy.

What do you mean and not cheesy? I may have to reconsider my odds of winning this thing.

Nah, they're still bad.

Everyone is so hung up on delivering a twist, which is near impossible in just two pages. Don't forget, you can also choose to shock your audience, OR provide a sting in the tail.

Submitted.  That's about all I can say at this point.  I had to spray Febreze on my keyboard, it stunk so bad.

Hang on can I just double check on the cheese rules as I'd not spotted this in the criteria and I'm banjaxed if cheese isn't allowed!

Quoted from Zack Everyone is so hung up on delivering a twist, which is near impossible in just two pages. Don't forget, you can also choose to shock your audience, OR provide a sting in the tail.

The frolicking feline phrenologist was actually a dog in a cat suit this whole page and a half! And after a mild electrical shock, she got a beesting in the tail.

How hard is this?

Quoted from FrankM The frolicking feline phrenologist was actually a dog in a cat suit this whole page and a half! And after a mild electrical shock, she got a beesting in the tail. How hard is this?

I'm in, double royale with cheese!

I just got an email alert that everyone's talking about cheese...

Anyone bring up Velveeta yet? Love that stuff.

Velveeta isn't proper cheese!

Anyone had the email saying their submission has been received? Getting worried now that I didn't submit properly lol

Me neither Matt, just assumed Don is having a nap

Quoted from AnthonyCawood Velveeta isn't proper cheese!

How dare you! I demand you take that back.

Just because it has a 232-year shelf life and could function as an apocalyptic alternative power source doesn't make it less of a cheese.