Quoted from Ledbetter Don posted- Everything occurs in and around an abandoned, rundown house. When I wrote mine, I meant this to be an abandoned OR rundown house. James pointed out to me that I might be in violation of the guidlines of the script. My house is busted up and boarded up and run down but some one is in it. Is there a way to replace that script with a revised one? Shawn.....><

I think you'll be fine with it, Shawn.  As long as its some crappy house , we'll get the idea.

Just finished submitting my script. Hope people like it.

Quoted from Mr.Ripley Just finished submitting my script. Hope people like it.

I hate it!  Worst script ever!  

hahahaha. funny baltis.  

I'm trying to complete mine.  I hope people like mine as well, but chances of that are very, very slim.

I wasn't going to enter anything but I decided I couldn't pass this up.

Quoted from RayW Car lights for lightning. Garden hose for rain. Soundtrack for thunder and wind.

And don't forget Poor man's Process!

Quoted from Dreamscale mine's very, very slim

Well done buddy.  To quote yourself:

YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just submitted mine

Looking forward to reading these. Been a tough challenge.

I'm in. Thanks to Stevie and Shawn for suggestions. I did make changes.

Jeff, get your roto-tiller ready. You're gonna wanna tear this one up. Ha. Just kidding, actually, think you might like it.

To all else, cheers, I just did...

Now, where is that pamflet on drinking that screen sent me... Uhp, can't find it. Off to the pub.

James

Just starting on mine.  Came up with an idea last night.  Like Baltis' story, my idea is very backstory-heavy, so it's a real challenge to get those details across in ten pages.  Not really gonna have time to polish this if I finish.  Ah well, back to the script.  Time to start drinkin .'

Funny, Stevie. You are a master with the quotes.  I have to cheat.

Fuck it, I better start drinking as well.  I'm on page 6, so one way or another, it'll be submitted.  Mine is also very back-story heavy.  But the only way to get this written within 10 pages, was to throw out the back-story, and go right in for the jugular.

I have adhered to the rules, as far a I can see.

Don't worry, James, no roto tiller for me this go around.  I will love every script, just as everyone will love my script.

This could be my crowning achievement!

Quoted from Dreamscale Fuck me everyone

Quoted from jwent6688 Now, where is that pamflet on drinking that screen sent me... Uhp, can't find it. Off to the pub. James

Don't worry, James, I've got another one.   I'll send it your way.  

I need one too!!

Page 8!!!!

Jeff,
You want a quick read before you put er in?

Stevie, you were right, Don got back to me and said it would be Okay the way I used it.

James,
I went back and tweaked it and resubmitted it before I heard back from Don, and I actually owe you a thanks. I re-wrote a scene I wished I had after I submitted it. Don just emailed me back letting me know he accepted the second one, so I'm good.

By the way, thanks for the second set of notes today. I really apperciate it.

Shawn.....><