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Sorry, Zack. I haven't realized it's so soon - I'll most probably pass on this one. My finals are on the 19th - and if you follow my blabberings here I have to have the dress ready (stitching it all by myself).
Too bad cause it sounds like a great challenge. And I love the psychological factor of it. After the 19th I'll be able to read the entries so I'll read and comment. Hopefully the stupid adress won't kill me by that time.
So, looks like I was right after all on the "anticipation not quite being the right word", huh?
Your Hitchcock example is a classic screenwriting technique...the only problem here is that since this is the challenge, it's going to be next ti impossible to pull off the suspense, as it's known going in that each script (including Anon's 2 pager with a single orphan on Page 3) should be focused on this.
But, it's a fun challenge and I look forward to it, bro!
Sorry, Zack. I haven't realized it's so soon - I'll most probably pass on this one. My finals are on the 19th - and if you follow my blabberings here I have to have the dress ready (stitching it all by myself).
Too bad cause it sounds like a great challenge. And I love the psychological factor of it. After the 19th I'll be able to read the entries so I'll read and comment. Hopefully the stupid adress won't kill me by that time.
Bummer you can't join, Kam. But good luck on your dress! And if you are looking for a quality model, Jeff is available.
I like my stories Simple. Straightforward. A to B. No C.
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Does the vehicle have to be man made / alien made?
A vehicle is just a way to transport from A to B. It could be anything, right?
“The majority of your screenplay must heavily feature some sort of vehicle AND have at least one sequence of prolonged suspense.”
The term vehicle is also used for something that is only important because of what it’s carrying... such as an action movie functioning as a Steven Seagal vehicle, or baked potatoes serving as a butter vehicle.
Not sure how to get prolonged suspense into a baked potato.
(To be clear, I’m pretty sure Zack did not intend either of these possibilities)
Oh, boy. Got two projects that I'm focused on. I really should skip this one.
Then again, it's a challenge... and a lonely mug needs a good home.
But, I'm soooo bad at horror.
Then again... it's a chance to practice horror.
But, I'm reaaaaally bad at horror.
Then again, I've never written a potato-based vehicle script. So, that might be fun.
What to do...
PaulKWrites.com
Ashes - Semi-contained psychological horror thriller/Feature The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature Wait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror