Quoted from stevie Sorry CV, but recent reports suggest they've both been spotted in the Rams shower room, dropping soap for the O line....

Stevie, please, my friend.  You've alredy admitted your strange love for any man dressed in a 49er uniform...or what you love even more, any man who has already taken off a 49er uniform.

  LOL!!!!

Quoted from Dreamscale Stevie my friend...you have finally won. I am ready to tell the whole world about my secret fantasy about spending a night with Frank Gore wearing denim cutoffs. If he will allow me to slowly strip off my Rams underwear, I will pledge undying man-love to the Niner franchise.

If it is so easy to crush somebody's dream then they don't deserve to have the dream in the first place. I would honestly do it all the time if I knew for a fact that it wasn't a kid I was speaking to.

All of these people that believe screenwriting is an easy way to make money without the need for talent are bolstered every time they get a review telling them if they do this or that, it will help them improve. Not only that, but they also make the good ones harder to find. Piles and piles of crap to sift through just to find somebody that writes well.

I suppose the competitions do well out of it... which is why there are so many available to enter now. The business man in me has even toyed with the idea of setting one up myself. This industry is wide open to make cash from suckers. Trouble is, my ethics get in the way of that one.

Anyway, to sum up... the only reason I'm so nice ( ) is because I don't know who I'm talking to. The last thing I would want to do is crush some poor kid's ambition. Adults are fair game, they deserve it.. but kids still have some learning to do and a bad review just wouldn't be fair.

Been slamming out some of these scripts tonight.  I don't have a whole lot of time on my hands, kind of busy lately, feeling drained and exhausted with work... and a lot of other things.  Can't promise I'll read all of 'em, but at least I got to some of 'em.  

Quoted from Guest Been slamming out some of these scripts tonight.  I don't have a whole lot of time on my hands, kind of busy lately, feeling drained and exhausted with work... and a lot of other things.  Can't promise I'll read all of 'em, but at least I got to some of 'em.

Hey, great effort bro!  

But you haven't read mine yet, so...keep on going man!   Lol

Quoted from Guest Been slamming out some of these scripts tonight.  I don't have a whole lot of time on my hands, kind of busy lately, feeling drained and exhausted with work... and a lot of other things.  Can't promise I'll read all of 'em, but at least I got to some of 'em.

Good job, but like Stevie, you, like the vast majority of peeps, have neglected mine.

Keep reading!!!

To Stevie and Jeff:

Have I reviewed either of yours yet?

Even though it doesn't matter. I'm a horrible reviewer in terms of being constructive in because I tend to only notice positive things in writing, movies and so on. It's good for a person's self esteem I guess though.

And my name's Charlie by the way. Been trying to find a pseudonym since my actual full name is really common surprisingly. Still haven't settled on anything yet, but now I'm stuck with this one for this site I guess aha.

Charlie, you have not reviewed mine yet, and you're missing out on a what will surely make your entire weekend!  

Don't worry about Stevie's - his only concern is his odd love of the 49ers.  I heard he wore 49er briefs to bed the other night, and his wife commented, "Uh, Stevie...49er?  More like 1.9er, I'd say."

Six more to go.

Good grief, I haven't even looked at 19 of them. Time is not my friend. I'm still plugging away though.

I've looked at and commented on all 49 entries.  Obviously, I did not read start to finish on many, but I tried to say why and bring up the problems that held me back from finishing.

For my own purposes, I used a 1-5 grading scale, so I know what I had after the fact.

There were a number that did not meet the challenge requirements, but they still received a 1.

I actually gave 1 script a ZERO, because it wasn't completed, but the writer has already chimed in and made their apologies, so no reason to go on and on about that one.

Twenty of the scripts received a 1.  Many of these were not read in their entirety, but they were very poorly written.

Twelve received a 2.  These were also poorly written, with a dull story, possibly a pisser tone, etc.

Four received a 2.5.  These bordered on being decent, but either the writing or story pulled them down.

Seven received a 3.  A couple of these were decently written, but had other big issues.  A couple were decent stories, but had writing issues.

Two received a 4.  These were decently to well written and had decent to good stories.  Both had a major flaw that prevented them from being really good, but both were easily among the top 10%.

Three received a 5.  These were easily the best written scripts, the best structure, the easiest reads, and all had entertaining stories/plots that met the challenge completely.

I apologize to any and all who may have been hurt or upset by my feedback.  That is never my intention.  I simply mean to point out flaws and mistakes in the hopes of helping both the writer and all who read.  These are simply my own opinions and if you disagree, that's fine and totally cool.

Thanks to everyone who submitted an entry and those who did not, but still read some of the scripts.

Quoted from Dreamscale Blow job, just like Stevie likes. You, like the vast majority of peeps, have neglected mine. Keep blowing!!!

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WTF?  Is that Stevie or Led?  I think the two are one and the same, or maybe they're actually lovers.

Quoted from Dreamscale I  WTF Stevie or Led.  I think of the two as my actual lovers.

Shawn.....><

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