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I've really struggled with this one. I didn't have the room to build things like I wanted, but I've worked HARD on it to get it down to five pages. I already know what some of you miserable sods are going to say about it, but there's some great stuff in there!
Excellent! Now, can you make a 1 minute version for a Superbowl ad?
Good news and bad news — good news is my wife is getting discharged from the hospital this afternoon. Bad news is by the time I get her home and get her acclimated and comfortable, I’ll have maybe an hour to write something. But I’m going to do it, I think. Even a mess getting all 2’s is better than not entering if I understand the scoring. And even if I’m wrong I’d still rather enter something than not. Just be gentle with me!
Gary
Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
Good news and bad news — good news is my wife is getting discharged from the hospital this afternoon. Bad news is by the time I get her home and get her acclimated and comfortable, I’ll have maybe an hour to write something. But I’m going to do it, I think. Even a mess getting all 2’s is better than not entering if I understand the scoring. And even if I’m wrong I’d still rather enter something than not. Just be gentle with me!
Gary
Glad to hear the Good News part!
Now be sure to sanitize your hands before killing everyone on the airplane.
Good news and bad news — good news is my wife is getting discharged from the hospital this afternoon. Bad news is by the time I get her home and get her acclimated and comfortable, I’ll have maybe an hour to write something. But I’m going to do it, I think. Even a mess getting all 2’s is better than not entering if I understand the scoring. And even if I’m wrong I’d still rather enter something than not. Just be gentle with me!
Gary
So glad to hear she's going home.
I'll happily donate my full script... or points. (And, no... not because I think it's a stinker! Though, you never really know until the reviews roll in.)
But, I bet you can bang out 5 pretty good pages in an hour or two.
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Good news and bad news — good news is my wife is getting discharged from the hospital this afternoon. Bad news is by the time I get her home and get her acclimated and comfortable, I’ll have maybe an hour to write something. But I’m going to do it, I think. Even a mess getting all 2’s is better than not entering if I understand the scoring. And even if I’m wrong I’d still rather enter something than not. Just be gentle with me!
Gary
You got this Gary - a nice little one pager: I had a flight one time and the lavatory was out of hand sanitizer. It was horrible. The end.
Dead bodies everywhere. Even the cockroaches are dead.
In the foreground, an airplane had crashed into a billboard for hand sanitizer.
A tumbleweed blows by.
FADE OUT.
I want to lodge a protest, as apparently Frank has hacked into my computer and stolen my script.
Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
On vacation. Can hear the Atlantic ocean as I type. Got a script done. I love the idea, but need many more pages to make it work. Hopefully it works well enough for people to get through. Several didn't get through my last one!
I did not review 3 scripts. Sorry, ran out of time. Hopefully I will get to them after vacation.