Quoted from Zack WTF? Is that really from a script you wrote?

Yes...an OWC!  About Vegans an d Carnivores.  I love that script!

Quoted from Dreamscale Yes...an OWC!  About Vegans an d Carnivores.  I love that script!

Lol You're crazy, Dude.

Had fun reading these. Thanks for the fun prompt, Steve. Inspired me enough to update my Final Draft from 7 to 11...and write my first screenplay in 4 years. And of course...thank you, Don Boose!!

Quoted from mmmarnie Had fun reading these. Thanks for the fun prompt, Steve. Inspired me enough to update my Final Draft from 7 to 11...and write my first screenplay in 4 years. And of course...thank you, Don Boose!!

You’re welcome. 4 years huh? Too long...

Quoted from SAC You’re welcome. 4 years huh? Too long...

Not saying this for sympathy...but this challenge landed almost 4 years to the day (Oct 15, 2015)...I stopped writing the day my husband of 20 years blindsided me and told me he wanted out. Soon after found out he was having an affair. Our lives were turned upside down me and our son moved from NJ to NC to start a new life. It was hard...but we did it. Finalized our divorce just a few months ago and really couldn't be happier with my life. And now it's time to start writing again.  

In the future, it would be helpful to know the voting criteria from the start. I didn't look at the scoring sheet until I was ready to vote and had to go back and look at my reviews to get the different categories in.

Votes are in now. This was fun. Nicely done Steve, and thanks as always Don!

Quoted from SAC That’s awesome. The good parts, that is. I enjoy seeing some of the older SS peeps pop out of nowhere, like Marnie and Andrew. I found this site six years ago and I started learning screenwriting and I’ve been obsessed ever since. This site is awesome, and I hope it continues on and on. Such good memories from back when, and even when I sold my first feature. Thanks Don

Here, Here on all accounts.

The Don is Da Man!!!

Quoted from mmmarnie Not saying this for sympathy...but this challenge landed almost 4 years to the day (Oct 15, 2015)...I stopped writing the day my husband of 20 years blindsided me and told me he wanted out. Soon after found out he was having an affair. Our lives were turned upside down me and our son moved from NJ to NC to start a new life. It was hard...but we did it. Finalized our divorce just a few months ago and really couldn't be happier with my life. And now it's time to start writing again.

That’s awesome. The good parts, that is.

I enjoy seeing some of the older SS peeps pop out of nowhere, like Marnie and Andrew. I found this site six years ago and I started learning screenwriting and I’ve been obsessed ever since. This site is awesome, and I hope it continues on and on. Such good memories from back when to this past Summer when I sold my first feature. SS has been there for all of us to share and post our work and get the most valuable thing we need - honest feedback. Where else can you get what you get here? There is nowhere else, to my knowledge.

Thanks Don

Quoted from ReneC In the future, it would be helpful to know the voting criteria from the start. I didn't look at the scoring sheet until I was ready to vote and had to go back and look at my reviews to get the different categories in. Votes are in now. This was fun. Nicely done Steve, and thanks as always Don!

Here, Here to this, too!  I had to look at my posts and determine where to score al 5 categories and I doubt I got it all right.

Quoted from ReneC In the future, it would be helpful to know the voting criteria from the start. I didn't look at the scoring sheet until I was ready to vote and had to go back and look at my reviews to get the different categories in. Votes are in now. This was fun. Nicely done Steve, and thanks as always Don!

I knew when you knew, Rene. I wasn’t expecting that either, so I’m glad I opened it first thing. Still, I should have given everyone a heads up because, like you and Jeff, peeps probably weren’t expecting that kind of scoresheet.

Quoted from SAC That’s awesome. The good parts, that is. I enjoy seeing some of the older SS peeps pop out of nowhere, like Marnie and Andrew. I found this site six years ago and I started learning screenwriting and I’ve been obsessed ever since. This site is awesome, and I hope it continues on and on. Such good memories from back when to this past Summer when I sold my first feature. SS has been there for all of us to share and post our work and get the most valuable thing we need - honest feedback. Where else can you get what you get here? There is nowhere else, to my knowledge. Thanks Don

Holy crap! You sold a feature??? Wowzer!! Congrats! I have a lot to catch up on! And Bill "Reef Dreamer" is back after a hiatus as well.

Quoted from mmmarnie Not saying this for sympathy...but this challenge landed almost 4 years to the day (Oct 15, 2015)...I stopped writing the day my husband of 20 years blindsided me and told me he wanted out. Soon after found out he was having an affair. Our lives were turned upside down me and our son moved from NJ to NC to start a new life. It was hard...but we did it. Finalized our divorce just a few months ago and really couldn't be happier with my life. And now it's time to start writing again.

Well, you've got my sympathy for what you went through. That's gotta be such a shock.  
Great to hear you're back writing again, Marnie, and that you are so happy with your life now.  Good for you!

Where's the Kraken?  HAHA!

Great job, everyone.  Hope no one was upset at my feedback.  Some great scripts here, by some great writers!

HOOT HOOT to Steven and The Don!

For all the up’s and down’s of an OWC it’s been great to be back.

Many thanks to Steven and Don for this.

If anyone feels my review was unfair, poor or have any queries, please do ask. I’m very happy to engage and re read afterwards.

I suppose I can reveal my script now, as voting is in...

Sickening Desires

A bit rough around the edges but as my first proper effort for a few years, it’s good enough for me. I will comment on it’s own thread, but I really appreciated the feedback

Good challenge. And although I didn’t like having to do the score sheet, I think it is good for the future.

Anyway I really needed to remind myself that writing can be fun. And I just flat out enjoyed writing mine. Maybe a little too much ...