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Thanks for reading, Libby. Good point about the sniffle not really being enough. That should be an easy fix.
Happy you enjoyed this version better.
An example of my writing...
FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
Goodbye has been picked up for production. More info soon.
An example of my writing...
FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
Thanks, Dude. Just gonna keep writing and see where it takes me.
An example of my writing...
FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
I didn't read the original draft but this one hits hard.
Being a short on here I was expecting some twist ending, but alas, it never came.
My only critique would be to change SNIFFLES to SOBS.
-Jordan
Thanks for the read, Jordan. Yeah, hard to put a good twist in a short. I actually tried to with the first draft of this one, but it just didn't come together like I wanted it to. Much happier with the more blunt approach of this draft. And I totally agree about the SNIFFLES at the end. Needs more punch. I'll fix that. Thanks again.
An example of my writing...
FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.