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Zack
Posted: July 10th, 2021, 10:50am Report to Moderator
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Thanks for reading, Libby. Good point about the sniffle not really being enough. That should be an easy fix.

Happy you enjoyed this version better.


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FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
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Zack
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Goodbye has been picked up for production. More info soon.


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FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
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LC
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Excellent news, Zack!
Audio only, or you don't know yet?


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Warren
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Quoted from Zack
Goodbye has been picked up for production. More info soon.


Congrats, mate! You're on a roll!


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Nomad
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Well done!

I didn't read the original draft but this one hits hard.

Being a short on here I was expecting some twist ending, but alas, it never came.

My only critique would be to change SNIFFLES to SOBS.

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Zack
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Quoted from LC
Excellent news, Zack!
Audio only, or you don't know yet?


Thanks, Libby. I believe they are going with the audio-only approach. I'll get back to you as soon as I know for sure.


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Congrats, mate! You're on a roll!


Thanks, Dude. Just gonna keep writing and see where it takes me.


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FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
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Zack
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Quoted from Nomad
Well done!

I didn't read the original draft but this one hits hard.

Being a short on here I was expecting some twist ending, but alas, it never came.

My only critique would be to change SNIFFLES to SOBS.

-Jordan


Thanks for the read, Jordan. Yeah, hard to put a good twist in a short. I actually tried to with the first draft of this one, but it just didn't come together like I wanted it to. Much happier with the more blunt approach of this draft. And I totally agree about the SNIFFLES at the end. Needs more punch. I'll fix that. Thanks again.


An example of my writing...

FOR SATAN - short, horror, 14 pgs (revised draft) - A group of thrill-seekers explore a creepy old house on Halloween night. Think you know this story? Think again.
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