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LC
Posted: October 7th, 2019, 7:54pm Report to Moderator
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Zack! You'd be pretty chuffed with this I imagine.

They did a great job on this, and your name on the end credits comes first, yay!
The acting was top class and the music was suitably sinister too.

Very impressive.


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Quoted from LC
Zack! You'd be pretty chuffed with this I imagine.

They did a great job on this, and your name on the end credits comes first, yay!
The acting was top class and the music was suitably sinister too.

Very impressive.


Thanks for the kind words, Libby. Definitely stoked with how this turned out.  
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Congratulations, dude. Looks good. The guy playing Jake is a good actor. The performance elevated the feel.
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Quoted from Fais85
Congratulations, dude. Looks good. The guy playing Jake is a good actor. The performance elevated the feel.


Thanks for watching, Dude.
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Congrats Zack! you should be really proud!

I echo the others on the actor, he is really good - the other doesn't seem like a natural smoker though lol

Something strange happens at 2 minutes (when he throws the cigarette down), seems to freeze-frame. But overall a really good short, kudos to you




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Zack, very impressed!  I never saw this script, but the filmed version is strong.

Nice job, brother!!!
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Quoted from Matthew Taylor

Something strange happens at 2 minutes (when he throws the cigarette down), seems to freeze-frame. But overall a really good short, kudos to you




I noticed that too. Lol

Thanks for watching, Dude.


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Zack, very impressed!  I never saw this script, but the filmed version is strong.

Nice job, brother!!!


Thanks, Bro! Happy you like it. Feels good to finally have one of my scripts adapted into a good short film.
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This has been produced again.

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Getting some good mileage out of this one, Zack.

Nice touch this time with the snow.
A terrific short script - simple, yet sinister - and both productions are really good.
Great stuff.


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Two good productions of the script now Zack, congrats!


Anthony Cawood - Award winning screenwriter
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Thanks for the kind words, Libby and Anthony.
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Double congrats, nice little short you have here.


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Double congrats, nice little short you have here.


Appreciate it.
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Well done Zack - Congrats.  


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Kudos my man!! Amazing short!


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