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Bury The Truth - Filmed! (currently 4965 views)
LC
Posted: October 7th, 2019, 7:54pm
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Zack! You'd be pretty chuffed with this I imagine. They did a great job on this, and your name on the end credits comes first, yay! The acting was top class and the music was suitably sinister too. Very impressive.
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Zack
Posted: October 7th, 2019, 8:11pm
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Zack! You'd be pretty chuffed with this I imagine. They did a great job on this, and your name on the end credits comes first, yay! The acting was top class and the music was suitably sinister too. Very impressive.
Thanks for the kind words, Libby. Definitely stoked with how this turned out.
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Fais85
Posted: October 8th, 2019, 4:27am
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Congratulations, dude. Looks good. The guy playing Jake is a good actor. The performance elevated the feel.
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Zack
Posted: October 8th, 2019, 10:42am
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Congratulations, dude. Looks good. The guy playing Jake is a good actor. The performance elevated the feel.
Thanks for watching, Dude.
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Matthew Taylor
Posted: October 8th, 2019, 11:00am
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Congrats Zack! you should be really proud! I echo the others on the actor, he is really good - the other doesn't seem like a natural smoker though lol Something strange happens at 2 minutes (when he throws the cigarette down), seems to freeze-frame. But overall a really good short, kudos to you
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Dreamscale
Posted: October 8th, 2019, 11:01am
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Zack, very impressed! I never saw this script, but the filmed version is strong. Nice job, brother!!!
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Zack
Posted: October 9th, 2019, 8:38pm
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Something strange happens at 2 minutes (when he throws the cigarette down), seems to freeze-frame. But overall a really good short, kudos to you
I noticed that too. Lol
Thanks for watching, Dude.
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Zack, very impressed! I never saw this script, but the filmed version is strong. Nice job, brother!!!
Thanks, Bro! Happy you like it. Feels good to finally have one of my scripts adapted into a good short film.
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Zack
Posted: April 26th, 2021, 5:52pm
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This has been produced again.
VIDEO
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LC
Posted: April 26th, 2021, 6:29pm
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Getting some good mileage out of this one, Zack. Nice touch this time with the snow. A terrific short script - simple, yet sinister - and both productions are really good. Great stuff.
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AnthonyCawood
Posted: April 26th, 2021, 7:23pm
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Two good productions of the script now Zack, congrats!
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Zack
Posted: April 26th, 2021, 7:46pm
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Thanks for the kind words, Libby and Anthony.
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Warren
Posted: April 27th, 2021, 12:01am
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Double congrats, nice little short you have here.
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Zack
Posted: April 27th, 2021, 12:28am
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Double congrats, nice little short you have here.
Appreciate it.
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BarryJohn
Posted: April 27th, 2021, 7:11am
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Well done Zack - Congrats.
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Yuvraj
Posted: April 27th, 2021, 7:21am
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Kudos my man!! Amazing short!
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