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Writers' Tournament Round FIVE (5) Scripts (currently 4661 views) |
Don |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 7:38pm |
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LocationVirginia Posts16438 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
Off Grid by A Prime Customer - When it's either Prime or premium for basic services. - Short, Sci Fi Close Encounters of the Nerd Kind by Richard Doofus - When their construction truck breaks down, two workers pass the time by playing with their tools. - Short, Sci Fi The Bridge by Wells Farrago - Be careful what you wish for. - Short, Sci Fi Unforeseen Changes by Loyal Subject - Humphries has served His Majesty faithfully for years. There is no risk too great to fulfill his duty. - Short, Sci Fi The Cold Invasion by A Fellow Human - After aliens wipe out all electronics, one woman braves wildlife, freezing cold, and the invaders to survive alone. - Short, Sci fi Duel in the Desert by Hermann Buhl - Never invade a planet whose inhabitants are crazier than you. - Short, Sci Fi Husks by Anonymous 70 - There is something very wrong with Earl. Something... Strange. - Short, Sci Fi, Horror A New Present by Somebody I Used To Know - After a horrific accident, a father's undying love drives him to achieve the impossible. - Short, Sci Fi, Drama A Message of Hope by I Wish I Was Asleep - An orphaned alien on Earth has given up all hope of finding home, but his homemade friend has not. - Short, Sci Fi To the Poor by Carson Sawmill - In order to meet a logging tycoon for business relations, a rich couple follows a futuristic motorway that leads them deep into the wild. - Short, Sci Fi, Satire Loophole by Anonymoust 75 - Two old men have a very bad plan. But, it just might work. - Short, Sci Fi SimplyScript Fest by Dr. Draper - Don hosts a SimplyScripts film festival to showcase the overall winning script. That has been filmed for us all to view. - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy, Comedy, Action |
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Zack |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 7:46pm |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4500 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
11! I called it! In your faces! |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 7:47pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1306 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
As always, Don is the man!
11 entries this round -- a good finish! |
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Warren |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 7:54pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
11 isn’t bad at all, it’s been a tough challenge.
Thanks Don, thanks Sean. |
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LC |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 8:00pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7630 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
There's one entry with an incomplete logline which I've notified Don about, so the writer need not panic. ...
Funny, I thought the entry count would be higher. Some of you have obviously been analytical with your guesses. |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 8:28pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
There's one entry with an incomplete logline which I've notified Don about, so the writer need not panic. |
Don’t see one that’s incomplete, so Don must have already fixed it. Because he’s awesome... or an army of clones, which would also be awesome. |
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Grandma Bear |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 8:34pm |
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LocationThe Swamp... Posts7962 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I can probably read a couple tonight before bed. Hit me up if you want a read. |
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LC |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 8:38pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7630 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
Don’t see one that’s incomplete, so Don must have already fixed it. Because he’s awesome... or an army of clones, which would also be awesome. |
Yep, fixed already! Awesome all round. |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 9:28pm |
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LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
All right, let's do this one last time. |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 9:34pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
11 isn’t bad at all, it’s been a tough challenge.
Thanks Don, thanks Sean. |
Sounds like we got a football team going here. Someone here can play goalkeeper, right? Dibs on left fullback. |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 9:36pm |
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LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Sounds like we got a football team going here. Someone here can play goalkeeper, right?
Dibs on left fullback.
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: July 2nd, 2019, 9:36pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1306 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Sounds like we got a football team going here. Someone here can play goalkeeper, right?
Dibs on left fullback.
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I'm a full on striker. Some people might even call me... Ted? Boy it's been a long day. I'll show myself out. |
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 3:53am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
11 entries - Not bad at all after 5 weeks - also means I have a good chance at top 10 which was my goal when it all started lol
P.s I'll play right wing |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 8:56am |
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LocationTexas Posts1306 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
And we’re up to 12 scripts! I was right! Suck it Zack!!! |
| Some of my scripts:
Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 8:58am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
And we’re up to 12 scripts! I was right! Suck it Zack!!! |
lol!!! just spat out my tea |
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Don |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 8:58am |
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LocationVirginia Posts16438 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
12. One script got caught in the works. I've freed it and it is posted. Apologies.
Don |
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PrussianMosby |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 9:38am |
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12. One script got caught in the works. I've freed it and it is posted. Apologies.
Don |
Ahh, it's legit. Don, I just saw this one only has a Y/N possibility for criteria on the scoresheet. Not sure if that matters, just saying... |
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Zack |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 10:12am |
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LocationErlanger, KY Posts4500 Posts Per Day 0.69 |
Not making excuses, but for whatever reason my writing software spazed out and saved multiple different versions of the PDF of my script. The draft I submitted is not the one I meant to. Will take my lumps and resubmit once the tournament is over. |
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khamanna |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 12:29pm |
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I bow to the writers who lived up to the very end.
I feel like I have to read the last round. Since it's the 4th of July festivities I think I'll get to them this Friday or Sat. |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:07pm |
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What does the 4th of July mean? |
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JEStaats |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:14pm |
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LocationTucson, AZ Posts1736 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
It's generally between the 3rd and 5th. |
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Don |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:17pm |
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LocationVirginia Posts16438 Posts Per Day 1.94 |
Ahh, it's legit.
Don, I just saw this one only has a Y/N possibility for criteria on the scoresheet. Not sure if that matters, just saying...
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Thanks for the catch, I’ll fix it. Don |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:19pm |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
Quoted from DustinBowcot What does the 4th of July mean? |
It means we don't rule their lands anymore |
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DustinBowcot |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 1:34pm |
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Yeah, I'm just kidding. We don't celebrate that here - for obvious reasons. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 3rd, 2019, 5:38pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Back for another day of reviews. I see there has been a new entry, intriguing I think I know where I'll be starting. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 4th, 2019, 7:57pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Does anyone know when the whole tournament ends?
Has Sean or Don said when the round 4 standings will go up?
There are so many threads now, it's hard to stay on top of it all. |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 4th, 2019, 8:00pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Does anyone know when the whole tournament ends?
Has Sean or Don said when the round 4 standings will go up?
There are so many threads now, it's hard to stay on top of it all. |
There's no countdown, but I'm guessing on Monday Eastern US time. I think that's sometime Thursday for you guys in Australia |
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Warren |
Posted: July 4th, 2019, 8:04pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I think that's sometime Thursday for you guys in Australia |
Seems legit. |
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LC |
Posted: July 4th, 2019, 8:10pm |
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LocationThe Great Southern Land Posts7630 Posts Per Day 1.34 |
...I'm guessing on Monday Eastern US time. I think that's sometime Thursday for you guys in Australia |
Well, we are from the future. |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 4th, 2019, 8:11pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Late 2014 into 2015 I was working on a project with someone in Australia and I texted just after midnight her time... "Are there hoverboards and flying cars? We were promised hoverboards and flying cars in 2015!" |
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eldave1 |
Posted: July 5th, 2019, 10:48am |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
An interesting batch of scripts so far - good job to all. Five rounds, tough parameters and you're churning out some solid stuff. Hats off to all. |
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JEStaats |
Posted: July 5th, 2019, 1:00pm |
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Old Timer No sh*t, there I was....
LocationTucson, AZ Posts1736 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Woohoo! Done. A lot of talent on this site. Think about how many shorts were written in the last five weeks and how few duds there were. For this tourney to be 'all in fun' and just for bragging rights, everyone brought there A-game.
Nice work, everyone. Proud to be associated with this group. Even when I'm cussing someone out for a scathing review, it's usually warranted. |
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AnthonyCawood |
Posted: July 5th, 2019, 3:03pm |
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LocationUK Posts4323 Posts Per Day 1.13 |
Is it just me, probably is, but I'm gonna miss not trying to find a covincing narrative to fit Sean's brutal criteria, keep it under 5 pages... oh and write it in 72 hours.
It's been a fun! |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: July 6th, 2019, 3:27am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
Finally finished all of my tournament reads! Bravo to all
*Mic drop*
*Exits stage left* |
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JEStaats |
Posted: July 6th, 2019, 11:44am |
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LocationTucson, AZ Posts1736 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Has anyone received their scorecard yet? |
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eldave1 |
Posted: July 6th, 2019, 11:52am |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Despite a house full of visiting relatives - managed to get through them all - way to grind it out mates. Huge kudos to all of you making it until the end. |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 6th, 2019, 12:28pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Has anyone received their scorecard yet? |
You should have received a PM from Don with a heads-up that the Round 5 scripts are up... that has the link to the scorecard. Just for a change of pace, I remembered to put in my email address the first time this week. |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 6th, 2019, 1:48pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
So, for “Round 6” we’ll have criteria based on what everyone’s been mentioning...
Genre: drama Location: online forum Object: shoehorn |
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JEStaats |
Posted: July 6th, 2019, 2:49pm |
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Old Timer No sh*t, there I was....
LocationTucson, AZ Posts1736 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
You should have received a PM from Don with a heads-up that the Round 5 scripts are up... that has the link to the scorecard.
Just for a change of pace, I remembered to put in my email address the first time this week.
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 7:30pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Am I right in thinking that voting closes in approx. 4.5 hours? |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 7:36pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
In the meantime, some guesses:
Off Grid - Matthew/Anthony Close Encounters of the Nerd Kind - Frank The Bridge - Gary Unforeseen Changes - Anthony/Matthew The Cold Invasion - Rene Husks - Zack A Message of Hope - Alex To the Poor - Hank
What have you got for the final round Matthew? |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 7:56pm |
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In the meantime, some guesses:
Off Grid - Matthew/Anthony Close Encounters of the Nerd Kind - Frank The Bridge - Gary Unforeseen Changes - Anthony/Matthew The Cold Invasion - Rene Husks - Zack A Message of Hope - Alex To the Poor - Hank
What have you got for the final round Matthew? |
Interesting. So no choice for Paul? Hmmm. And there were 4 you didn't choose, so one of those is yours, by default (unless you're doing a fake out). |
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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LC |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 7:58pm |
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Warren, you think Hank's back in? I see no reviews... I'm with you re The Cold Invasion. I'd be mighty surprised if that's not Rene's. Looking forward to an OWC now. |
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Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:00pm |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:03pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Interesting. So no choice for Paul? Hmmm.
And there were 4 you didn't choose, so one of those is yours, by default (unless you're doing a fake out).
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I have been known to do a fake out, I've done it in this very tourney It’s all a bit of fun. No guess for Paul this round, I really struggled to see his writing in any of the scripts. I know it will be one of the better ones, but there is usually a trait of his I can spot, this time it wasn’t clear to me. It could very well be one of the better scripts I’ve already guessed, I just think it’s more than likely not, who knows To be clear, I don’t know any for sure!! |
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Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:05pm |
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Warren, you think Hank's back in? I see no reviews... I'm with you re The Cold Invasion. I'd be mighty surprised if that's not Rene's. Looking forward to an OWC now. |
Hanks been in a few rounds with little to no reviews so I wouldn’t be surprised, it could just as easily be Alex's script... maybe. An OWC, that's a joke right? |
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Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:08pm |
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No confirming or denying, folks. |
All very much speculation on my end. Looking at all the previous rounds, this should all end really soon, I think. |
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Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:14pm |
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Speculation is allowed. P.S. And no, I wasn't joking about an OWC. I have no idea, and it may be put forward, but there is currently a place-holder for July. Ooh, it's since changed. Perhaps writer-fatigue has been noted. |
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Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:24pm |
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Rene -- Cold Invasion. Javier -- Duel in the Desert Warren -- A New Present Paul -- Loophole, maybe?? John -- The Bridge Anthony -- Unforeseen Changes Matthew -- Off Grid
Total guesses on all those.
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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FrankM |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:27pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Speculation is allowed. P.S. And no, I wasn't joking about an OWC. I have no idea, and it may be put forward, but there is currently a place-holder for July. Ooh, it's since changed. Perhaps writer-fatigue has been noted. |
It’s still labeled as a placeholder for July, just the board name got changed to “Just Ignore This” To be clear, I have no insider knowledge about this. Just sure that I’m not running an OWC in July. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:28pm |
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P.S. And no, I wasn't joking about an OWC. I have no idea, and it may be put forward, but there is currently a place-holder for July.
Ooh, it's since changed. Perhaps writer-fatigue has been noted.
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I mean if there was one I'd definitely play, it was one of my goals this year to do all the OWCs, but damn haha. Even a small break would be nice, or it would just feel like round 6 |
Drama. Online forum. Shoe-horn. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:33pm |
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LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Rene -- Cold Invasion. Javier -- Duel in the Desert Warren -- A New Present Paul -- Loophole, maybe?? John -- The Bridge Anthony -- Unforeseen Changes Matthew -- Off Grid
Total guesses on all those.
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Interesting, the Anthony/Matthew one seems good to me, just unsure of who owns what. John for The Bridge is also one I'd entertain. I think Rene has made a bit of a name for himself this tourney as an excellent world builder, but time will tell. I’d like to see what he could do with a feature. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 8:34pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Drama. Online forum. Shoe-horn. |
There surely has to be a shoe-horn in a challenge one day! |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 9:38pm |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Sorry all, I'm off to bed. Please let me know which one I wrote, okay? |
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eldave1 |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 9:54pm |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Warren, you think Hank's back in? I see no reviews... I'm with you re The Cold Invasion. I'd be mighty surprised if that's not Rene's. Looking forward to an OWC now. |
I don't think I've seen a Hank review since round 1 |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 10:55pm |
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LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
I think Rene has made a bit of a name for himself this tourney as an excellent world builder, but time will tell. I’d like to see what he could do with a feature.
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Be careful what you wish for. I've written a few features. Only one is really world-building. My TV pilot is much more so. I have some truly epic world-building for a few features I'm still developing. But most of my world-building comes out in Dungeons & Dragons. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 11:14pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I've written a few features. Only one is really world-building. My TV pilot is much more so.
I have some truly epic world-building for a few features I'm still developing.
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Will they eventually make their way to SS? |
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Warren |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 11:14pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
So are we done? All over red rover? |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 8th, 2019, 11:19pm |
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Old Timer
LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Will they eventually make their way to SS?
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Possibly. When I have time to rewrite them. They're all first draft, except the TV pilot. Well, one is finished but that's the one that I sold, so it won't be posted. |
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Matthew Taylor |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 3:36am |
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LocationShakespeare's county Posts1770 Posts Per Day 0.88 |
In the meantime, some guesses:
Off Grid - Matthew/Anthony Close Encounters of the Nerd Kind - Frank The Bridge - Gary Unforeseen Changes - Anthony/Matthew The Cold Invasion - Rene Husks - Zack A Message of Hope - Alex To the Poor - Hank
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Hank's not in round 5 - guarantee you that A New Present - Warren Husks - Zack The Cold Invasion - Rene Duel In the Desert - Paul Unforeseen Changes - Frank Simplyscript Fest - Jayrex The Bridge - Anthony Surely Warren must be banned from entering the next OWC.... gotta give the rest of us a chance |
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FrankM |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 7:50am |
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LocationBetween Chair and Keyboard Posts1447 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
Surely Warren must be banned from entering the next OWC.... gotta give the rest of us a chance |
“Aaaaaand now, the award for Best Short Script Not Written by Warren iiiiiiiis:” |
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khamanna |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 9:24am |
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Oh wow, but Hank was in the first 3. Someone said he/she saw his reviews in the first round, but I haven't. I may sound unethical or something but it's such poor form on his part. I don't know how he does that. |
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eldave1 |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 10:56am |
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LocationSouthern California Posts6874 Posts Per Day 1.93 |
Oh wow, but Hank was in the first 3. Someone said he/she saw his reviews in the first round, but I haven't. I may sound unethical or something but it's such poor form on his part. I don't know how he does that. |
Agree |
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jayrex |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 11:42am |
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Old Timer Cut to three weeks earlier
LocationLondon, UK Posts1420 Posts Per Day 0.22 |
I've been quite slow for the last round. I'm back from a three day stag party and I'm bruised all over. |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 12:12pm |
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Old Timer
LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
I've been quite slow for the last round. I'm back from a three day stag party and I'm bruised all over. |
Sounds like you were doing it right... |
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Gary in Houston |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 1:52pm |
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LocationTexas Posts1306 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
While we’re waiting for results, if you want to go check out my short film that was recently made out of one of my OWC scripts (“Skip”), Don posted a link to it, along with the password, in the OWC threads.
I like how it turned out - was filmed at an actual nursing home with pretty much an entirely minority cast. Again, it just goes to show that there are people out there looking at these Challenge scripts with an eye on finding something to film.
Thanks as always to Don for posting it and for providing this site as a way to expose our work!
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Bounty (TV Pilot) -- Top 1% of discoverable screenplays on Coverfly I'll Be Seeing You (short) - OWC winner The Gambler (short) - OWC winner Skip (short) - filmed Country Road 12 (short) - filmed The Family Man (short) - filmed The Journeyers (feature) - optioned
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Warren |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 5:47pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
Is the WT over? Votes cast and just waiting for results? |
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Warren |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 5:49pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
“Aaaaaand now, the award for Best Short Script Not Written by Warren iiiiiiiis:”
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This cracked me up But I don’t think this is over just yet, I think the top spot is very much up for grabs. |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 9:37pm |
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Old Timer
LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
Is the WT over? Votes cast and just waiting for results? |
I think we killed Sean. |
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Warren |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 9:52pm |
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Of The Ancients A man who has taught his mind to misbehave
LocationSydney, Australia Posts3897 Posts Per Day 1.35 |
I think we killed Sean. |
I was thinking the same thing He's been a stranger for a while now. |
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JEStaats |
Posted: July 9th, 2019, 10:01pm |
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Old Timer No sh*t, there I was....
LocationTucson, AZ Posts1736 Posts Per Day 0.62 |
I think we killed Sean. |
That's a good title. I need to write that down. |
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ReneC |
Posted: July 10th, 2019, 2:03am |
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Old Timer
LocationVancouver, BC Posts1435 Posts Per Day 0.31 |
That's a good title. I need to write that down.
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It has to include the emoji. |
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