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Week 1 Discussion Thread. (currently 14113 views)
Dreamscale
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 2:26pm
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This is by far the most brilliant FADE IN I've ever written. I just keep staring at it.
Actually, that's a good idea. I need to open my software and put the FADE IN in. That will be a good start.
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Reef Dreamer
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 2:33pm
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Hey Kham
Hope you’re happy now. Seems like everyone is having a moan about their script
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khamanna
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 2:38pm
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Hey Kham
Hope you’re happy now. Seems like everyone is having a moan about their script
I’m pretty sure I have your collective backs with mine tho!
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ajr
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 3:08pm
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Submitted...
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mmmarnie
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 3:27pm
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Quoted from Dreamscale
Seriously...it was easy squeezy after the FADE IN.
FADE IN
EXT. LOCATION - DAY
A CHARACTER sells a counterfeit OBJECT to an unsuspecting person for lots of money.
FADE OUT
boop
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JEStaats
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 3:34pm
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Sorry, its already been done. Also doesn't meet the challenge since no genre was specified. Quit reading after FADE IN:
Zero Score
~Jeff
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Dreamscale
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 3:43pm
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I now officially have "FADE IN:"! I'm quite happy with this start.
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PKCardinal
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 4:02pm
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Good stuff. Held my interest all the way through. Though, maybe it would have had a bit more punch if you made me care about the unsuspecting person more. But, that's a nit. Overall, I liked it.
Thanks for sharing,
Paul
PaulKWrites.com60 Feet Under - Low budget, contained thriller/FeatureThe Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/FeatureWait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
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PKCardinal
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 4:08pm
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Oh, and... submitted.
PaulKWrites.com60 Feet Under - Low budget, contained thriller/FeatureThe Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/FeatureWait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
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khamanna
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 4:13pm
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Oh, and... submitted.
You forgot to say how awful it is.
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PKCardinal
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 4:28pm
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Oops! My bad. It's hideous!
(I actually feel okay about this one. Of course, I've felt okay about some of my lowest scoring scripts and felt poorly about some of my better-received scripts. So, you never know. All of you will get your say!)
PaulKWrites.com60 Feet Under - Low budget, contained thriller/FeatureThe Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/FeatureWait Till Next Year - Disney-style family sports comedy/Feature
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mmmarnie
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 4:29pm
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Lololol
You forgot to mention my SLUGS are horrendous!
boop
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DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 5:48pm
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Seems like everyone is having a moan about their script
Not everyone.
I think I made out alright.
stevie
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 6:40pm
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Hang on isn’t the deadline 1159pm? Why is it now saying 159pm?
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Mr. Blonde
Posted: July 6th, 2020, 6:51pm
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Hang on isn’t the deadline 1159pm? Why is it now saying 159pm?
Not sure what you're referring to, Stevie. Deadline is in just over four hours.
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