Quoted from Warren Hmm... no comment.

Figures...you don't have time to make a real comments, right?

Quoted from eldave1 Okay - through 20 and am going to take a break for the day. A few solid ones and one stand-out so far for me.

17 down for me and 2 standouts.

The quality is much more than I expected and I'm impressed overall.

Quoted from Dreamscale Figures...you don't have time to make a real comments, right?

'Real comments',  that's what cracks me up. I do love reading your reviews, as I think most do, but 'real' is a step to far, IMO. I even enjoy your comments on my scripts for a bit of a chuckle

The majority of your feedback is based on screening rules or ideas that literally no one other that you cares about.

I'm happy with my level of participation, and like I said more than happy to give detailed feedback later.

Hopefully your script is as funny as your feedback :p

How's that for a detailed review?

This place can be harsh. Geesh.

40+ scripts. Reading all of them. Commenting on most. Offer to provide in-depth feedback on request and get slammed.

Sometimes the internet sucks.

Anyway... offer stands, and I'll carry on as I said. (I realize most will appreciate the offer.)

To quote Don:

The scripts of the OWC are up. The expectation is that everyone will
read and comment on as many as possible over the next two weeks.* If you
don't have a discussion board log in, let me know.

(omitted link cause I think it was updated)

Some new writers took part. You will know who they are. Be nice.
Pseudonyms. If you provided one, I used it. If you didn't, I created one
as indicated by a 'dash'. If you want to know the rationale, please let
me know. More often than not, it is random.

Score sheets will come out mid next week.

Good luck with your work,

Don

*I recognize that writing reviews may be hard for some. If that is the
case, answer these questions:
What I liked about this script is...
What didn't work is...

...
The Internet is a great place. Where else can you find a screenwriting forum like this. Rhetorical question btw from me, not Don (this last part).
SS is buzzing.

Quoted from LC To quote Don: The scripts of the OWC are up. The expectation is that everyone will read and comment on as many as possible over the next two weeks.* If you don't have a discussion board log in, let me know. (omitted link cause I think it was updated) Some new writers took part. You will know who they are. Be nice. Pseudonyms. If you provided one, I used it. If you didn't, I created one as indicated by a 'dash'. If you want to know the rationale, please let me know. More often than not, it is random. Score sheets will come out mid next week. Good luck with your work, Don *I recognize that writing reviews may be hard for some. If that is the case, answer these questions: What I liked about this script is... What didn't work is... ... The Internet is a great place. Where else can you find a screenwriting forum like this. Rhetorical question btw from me, not Don (this last part). SS is buzzing.

I didn't no we could submit our own.  Please change mine to:

Sue D. Man

Quoted from LC *I recognize that writing reviews may be hard for some. If that is the case, answer these questions: What I liked about this script is... What didn't work is...

Well said. I've always kinda sucked at reviews, but I try to be honest.

Zack

Quoted from Warren 'Real comments',  that's what cracks me up. I do love reading your reviews, as I think most do, but 'real' is a step to far, IMO. I even enjoy your comments on my scripts for a bit of a chuckle The majority of your feedback is based on screening rules or ideas that literally no one other that you cares about. I'm happy with my level of participation, and like I said more than happy to give detailed feedback later. Hopefully your script is as funny as your feedback :p How's that for a detailed review?

That's great, Warren.  You da man.  Thanks so much for your feedback.  It means so much to all of us.

Quoted from eldave1 I didn't no we could submit our own.  Please change mine to: Sue D. Man

Looking forward to seeing which one is yours, Dave

I think peeps are going to be pissed. I submitted 30

Quoted from Zack Well said. I've always kinda sucked at reviews, but I try to be honest.

Exactly. Some add more, some add less in terms of comments.

Quoted from eldave1 I think peeps are going to be pissed. I submitted 30

That made me laugh.

Quoted from Warren That made me laugh.

Time for me to voice an opinion...

So far I feel disappointed with the scripts I've read. I guess I just opened the wrong ones at the start. There was no rhyme or reason in the ones I had chosen so don't worry. It's got nothing to do with title or logline.

My sincere and heartfelt feeling is this:

...(and please, I do know and understand people like to joke around. I'm bad for that myself...)

I must say, I did read one that was really good though it had realism problems, but that's not the script I'm referencing here.

The ones I'm disappointed with:

Those ones that completely disregarded the parameters of the challenge.

Please, please, please, people. I know you want to have fun, but we also want to learn here and if you do this kind of thing, it kind of brings Simplyscripts down a notch I'd say in respectability.

Sandra

Quoted from Sandra Elstree. Time for me to voice an opinion...

It's been a long time Sandra.  Nice to see you back in the fold.  You were missed.