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Dreamscale
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:02pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Yes, that is my real hair...

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Quoted from Warren
Hmm... no comment.


Figures...you don't have time to make a real comments, right?



To ski or not to ski...that's not even a question.
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Dreamscale
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:03pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


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Okay - through 20 and am going to take a break for the day. A few solid ones and one stand-out so far for me.


17 down for me and 2 standouts.

The quality is much more than I expected and I'm impressed overall.



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Warren
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:12pm Report to Moderator
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Figures...you don't have time to make a real comments, right?



'Real comments',  that's what cracks me up. I do love reading your reviews, as I think most do, but 'real' is a step to far, IMO. I even enjoy your comments on my scripts for a bit of a chuckle

The majority of your feedback is based on screening rules or ideas that literally no one other that you cares about.

I'm happy with my level of participation, and like I said more than happy to give detailed feedback later.

Hopefully your script is as funny as your feedback :p

How's that for a detailed review?


To View All My Scripts Please Use The Link Below

My Website

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PKCardinal
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:22pm Report to Moderator
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This place can be harsh. Geesh.

40+ scripts. Reading all of them. Commenting on most. Offer to provide in-depth feedback on request and get slammed.

Sometimes the internet sucks.

Anyway... offer stands, and I'll carry on as I said. (I realize most will appreciate the offer.)


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60 Feet Under - Low budget, contained thriller/Feature
The Hand of God - Low budget, semi-contained thriller/Feature

Many shorts available for production: comedy, thriller, drama, light horror
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LC
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:43pm Report to Moderator
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To quote Don:

The scripts of the OWC are up. The expectation is that everyone will
read and comment on as many as possible over the next two weeks.
* If you
don't have a discussion board log in, let me know.

(omitted link cause I think it was updated)

Some new writers took part. You will know who they are. Be nice.
Pseudonyms. If you provided one, I used it. If you didn't, I created one
as indicated by a 'dash'. If you want to know the rationale, please let
me know. More often than not, it is random.

Score sheets will come out mid next week.

Good luck with your work,

Don

*I recognize that writing reviews may be hard for some. If that is the
case, answer these questions:
What I liked about this script is...
What didn't work is...


...
The Internet is a great place. Where else can you find a screenwriting forum like this. Rhetorical question btw from me, not Don (this last part).
SS is buzzing.


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eldave1
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:52pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from LC
To quote Don:

The scripts of the OWC are up. The expectation is that everyone will
read and comment on as many as possible over the next two weeks.
* If you
don't have a discussion board log in, let me know.

(omitted link cause I think it was updated)

Some new writers took part. You will know who they are. Be nice.
Pseudonyms. If you provided one, I used it. If you didn't, I created one
as indicated by a 'dash'. If you want to know the rationale, please let
me know. More often than not, it is random.

Score sheets will come out mid next week.

Good luck with your work,

Don

*I recognize that writing reviews may be hard for some. If that is the
case, answer these questions:
What I liked about this script is...
What didn't work is...


...
The Internet is a great place. Where else can you find a screenwriting forum like this. Rhetorical question btw from me, not Don (this last part).
SS is buzzing.


I didn't no we could submit our own.  Please change mine to:

Sue D. Man


My Scripts can all be seen here:

http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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Zack
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:52pm Report to Moderator
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Don't get it right. Get it written.

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Quoted from LC


*I recognize that writing reviews may be hard for some. If that is the
case, answer these questions:
What I liked about this script is...
What didn't work is...




Well said. I've always kinda sucked at reviews, but I try to be honest.

Zack


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Dreamscale
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:55pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Warren


'Real comments',  that's what cracks me up. I do love reading your reviews, as I think most do, but 'real' is a step to far, IMO. I even enjoy your comments on my scripts for a bit of a chuckle

The majority of your feedback is based on screening rules or ideas that literally no one other that you cares about.

I'm happy with my level of participation, and like I said more than happy to give detailed feedback later.

Hopefully your script is as funny as your feedback :p

How's that for a detailed review?


That's great, Warren.  You da man.  Thanks so much for your feedback.  It means so much to all of us.


To ski or not to ski...that's not even a question.
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LC
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:55pm Report to Moderator
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I didn't no we could submit our own.  Please change mine to:
Sue D. Man

Looking forward to seeing which one is yours, Dave



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eldave1
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 10:58pm Report to Moderator
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I think peeps are going to be pissed. I submitted 30


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LC
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Do you like to eat pie after a good movie?

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Quoted from Zack
Well said. I've always kinda sucked at reviews, but I try to be honest.

Exactly. Some add more, some add less in terms of comments.


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Warren
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 11:16pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from eldave1
I think peeps are going to be pissed. I submitted 30


That made me laugh.



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eldave1
Posted: February 2nd, 2019, 11:22pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Warren


That made me laugh.





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http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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Sandra Elstree.
Posted: February 3rd, 2019, 12:13am Report to Moderator
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Time for me to voice an opinion...

So far I feel disappointed with the scripts I've read. I guess I just opened the wrong ones at the start. There was no rhyme or reason in the ones I had chosen so don't worry. It's got nothing to do with title or logline.

My sincere and heartfelt feeling is this:

...(and please, I do know and understand people like to joke around. I'm bad for that myself...)

I must say, I did read one that was really good though it had realism problems, but that's not the script I'm referencing here.

The ones I'm disappointed with:

Those ones that completely disregarded the parameters of the challenge.

Please, please, please, people. I know you want to have fun, but we also want to learn here and if you do this kind of thing, it kind of brings Simplyscripts down a notch I'd say in respectability.

Sandra



A known mistake is better than an unknown truth.
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_ghostwriters
Posted: February 3rd, 2019, 12:18am Report to Moderator
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Quoted from Sandra Elstree.
Time for me to voice an opinion...


It's been a long time Sandra.  Nice to see you back in the fold.  You were missed.



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