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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    January 2019 -  One Week Challenge  ›  Scripts of the Rom Com 2019 OWC
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irish eyes
Posted: February 4th, 2019, 2:34pm Report to Moderator
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Ok I'm done

All read and accounted for.

A great challenge  thank you Don and Pia

Very talented writers on here.
Hopefully everyone gets the same balance of scripts read by the end!


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eldave1
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Quoted from irish eyes
Ok I'm done

All read and accounted for.

A great challenge  thank you Don and Pia

Very talented writers on here.
Hopefully everyone gets the same balance of scripts read by the end!


Good on,ya - nice effort


My Scripts can all be seen here:

http://dlambertson.wix.com/scripts
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Dreamscale
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Quoted from irish eyes
Ok I'm done

All read and accounted for.

A great challenge  thank you Don and Pia

Very talented writers on here.
Hopefully everyone gets the same balance of scripts read by the end!


Yeah, but you shitted on mine!  I thought  for sure, at least you would find it funny.

Alas, moral of the story is, "don't get too stoned when conceiving and writing a script, as it may seem very funny to you, but won't to the masses".

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Zack
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Quoted from Dreamscale



Alas, moral of the story is, "don't get too stoned when conceiving and writing a script, as it may seem very funny to you, but won't to the masses".



At least reviewers aren't calling out your character. Fairly certain at least one reviewer believes I might be a serial killer. Lol. His review alone was worth entering this challenge.  

Zack
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irish eyes
Posted: February 4th, 2019, 3:23pm Report to Moderator
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Yeah, but you shitted on mine!  I thought  for sure, at least you would find it funny.


sorry bro, there's a lot of scripts I shit on(apologies to those) and there were quite a few that I laughed out loud, but did not see any link to romanticism.

I'm just glad i don't have to see "Valentine's Day" anymore I've moved my percentage up to 85% of the entries



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Warren
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There was one script that I really thought was well done - other than the fact it was not really a Rom-com. It was a Rom-drama.  I had to downgrade that one.  It would have been a 5 on my scale of 1 to 5. Instead it is a 4.




This is exactly the issue I'm talking about. For me, and I think for most people, a drama is easier to write than a comedy. I believe I could have put up a better rom drama than a rom com, or even a better rom horror, but my script may have suffered because I tried to play within the parameters.

If a rom com isn’t the Writer's Choice that would be pretty odd, and in my opinion defeats the purpose of the challenge, which was to write a rom com.

In saying that, I still think there are probably a few ways you could write one, but if it isn’t comedic and romantic, then it isn’t a rom com. Or maybe it is and I just have no idea what a rom com is




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This is exactly the issue I'm talking about. For me, and I think for most people, a drama is easier to write than a comedy. I believe I could have put up a better rom drama than a rom com, or even a better rom horror, but my script may have suffered because I tried to play within the parameters.

If a rom com isn’t the Writer's Choice that would be pretty odd, and in my opinion defeats the purpose of the challenge, which was to write a rom com.

In saying that, I still think there are probably a few ways you could write one, but if it isn’t comedic and romantic, then it isn’t a rom com. Or maybe it is and I just have no idea what a rom com is




Concur  with you here


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Dreamscale
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At least reviewers aren't calling out your character. Fairly certain at least one reviewer believes I might be a serial killer. Lol. His review alone was worth entering this challenge.  

Zack


  WOW...that's funny!

One reviewer's comments on mine, who I'll keep nameless for the time being, were so completely crazy, I seriously have no idea what he was even trying to say...and I mean that in complete seriousness.  I actually am looking forward to asking what his comments were supposed to mean.  

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At least reviewers aren't calling out your character. Fairly certain at least one reviewer believes I might be a serial killer. Lol. His review alone was worth entering this challenge.


Pretty sure I know your script and who you're talking about  


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Pretty sure I know your script and who you're talking about  


I considered DQing mine like Sean did with his, but I honestly did TRY to put my own spin on the romcom genre. It's a dark and twisted spin on the genre, for sure, but I did try. According to the reviews, my script couldn't be further from a romcom. Oh well. I tried.    

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Quoted from irish eyes


Pretty sure I know your script and who you're talking about  


Me too.


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Dreamscale
Posted: February 4th, 2019, 4:22pm Report to Moderator
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Quoted from irish eyes


Pretty sure I know your script and who you're talking about  


Me 3!
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Zack
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I guess the cat's out of the bag now. Oh well.

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Warren
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I can't do that. I always get hung up on errors and I'm actually disappointed nobody pointed out the four errors I've found in mine thus far. Lol. But, believe me, if I had the time (and if we didn't have 43 entries), I'd have reverted to my old style for this challenge. I liked doing it that way because I felt like it could be legitimately helpful.



I am happy to be this nit-picky after the OWC finishes.

I have a few reasons why. I believe some of the entries will be throw away scripts intended only for the OWC. I don’t want to spend time going over it with a fine-tooth comb if the script is never going to be looked at again. I also think that, in most OWC's, there are some writer's that do a dump and run.

By offering to give detailed reviews after the challenge I feel that the people that ask actually want me to go in-depth.

This would be different if there were 10 or 15 entries, but there are over 40.



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Dreamscale
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By offering to give detailed reviews after the challenge I feel that the people that ask actually want me to go in-depth.


I don't think you need to worry about getting too many takers, there, Warren.  

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