SimplyScripts Discussion Board
Blog Home - Produced Movie Script Library - TV Scripts - Unproduced Scripts - Contact - Site Map
ScriptSearch
Welcome, Guest.
It is May 6th, 2024, 6:35am
Please login or register.
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login
Please do read the guidelines that govern behavior on the discussion board. It will make for a much more pleasant experience for everyone. A word about SimplyScripts and Censorship


Produced Script Database (Updated!)

Short Script of the Day | Featured Script of the Month | Featured Short Scripts Available for Production
Submit Your Script

How do I get my film's link and banner here?
All screenplays on the simplyscripts.com and simplyscripts.net domain are copyrighted to their respective authors. All rights reserved. This screenplaymay not be used or reproduced for any purpose including educational purposes without the expressed written permission of the author.
Forum Login
Username: Create a new Account
Password:     Forgot Password

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board    One Week Challenge    October 2014 One Week Challenge  ›  October OWC?
Users Browsing Forum
No Members and 3 Guests

 Pages: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17 : All
Recommend Print
  Author    October OWC?  (currently 18324 views)
Grandma Bear
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 1:15pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35
There's only one week left of this month, then it's time for one of my favorite months. October! Usually, there's a OWC in October and usually, but not always the OWC is horror or Halloween related. Anyone but me wishing for a spooky OWC?  


Logged
Private Message
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 1:19pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
Always think the October one should be spooky.

I'll be in, regardless.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 1 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 1:23pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scar Tissue Films


I'll be in, regardless.


Seconded.

I'm actually mulling over horror stories at the moment as the guys I'm working with want to make a supernatural horror. From what I've been reading too they seem the most likely to be picked up by distributors.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 2 - 254
DS
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 1:38pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
359
Posts Per Day
0.10
I'd be in regardless as well. I do like the idea of something spooky being the theme, though. Would be my first OWC.. first for any writing challenge actually, should prove to be interesting.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 3 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 1:40pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
Good way I've found of coming up with horror stories is going through a list of non-horror films and imagining telling the story as a horror.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 4 - 254
kev
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 2:49pm Report to Moderator
New



Location
Toronto, Ontario
Posts
383
Posts Per Day
0.05
I don't know what it is about Hallowe'en season but it really gets my creative juices flowing. I'm all about the horror genre, yet can never bring myself to write anything horror-related except for these OWC's, so I'm all in if this one gives me an opportunity to get freaky.


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 5 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 3:29pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scar Tissue Films
Good way I've found of coming up with horror stories is going through a list of non-horror films and imagining telling the story as a horror.


Cheers mate. I'll give that a go.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 6 - 254
CameronD
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 3:32pm Report to Moderator
Been Around



Posts
542
Posts Per Day
0.14
Currently writing a horror film. Not sure if it will fit into the OWC's theme and it definitely won't be done in a week. But we'll see........


http://www.TheFilmBox.org Movie reviews, news, and fun!
http://www.screenplaywritenow.com Write a screenplay. Write. Now.
http://www.SchismSEO.com Separate from your competition. Affordable SEO services
http://www.MyEasyGifter.com Because nobody likes receiving gift cards
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 7 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 4:47pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
Please Lord...I need an OWC. Time to get focusedon this writing  for a minute.

Funny, I was going to post the same question.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 8 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: September 24th, 2014, 7:23pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
VERY much in the mood for horror. Bring it on.


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 9 - 254
khamanna
Posted: September 25th, 2014, 12:54am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.78
I don't know if I'd be in but I'd like to read a few to get spooked - that's for sure. And maybe an idea will visit, and if the mood is right, then.... I don't want to jinx it - I believe in jinx. Horror would be definitely my choice as well.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 10 - 254
LC
Posted: September 25th, 2014, 4:23am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from DS
I'd be in regardless as well. I do like the idea of something spooky being the theme, though. Would be my first OWC.. first for any writing challenge actually, should prove to be interesting.


I look forward to reading something of yours DS. You make some very insightful comments on other's scripts.

Looking forward to hearing what the Halloween theme might be too.    I don't see 'A Drum... ' yet, but here's hoping.




Logged
Private Message Reply: 11 - 254
Leegion
Posted: September 25th, 2014, 9:40am Report to Moderator
New


Location
England
Posts
491
Posts Per Day
0.10
I've tried to participate, both with a script and reading, in the last few OWC's...

Unfortunately, with things going on in my life at the minute, I have no time to write, no time to read and zero time to give to anything, and for that I apologize (especially in the 7WC features, which I've not even responded to yet).

If I had the time, I'd be happy to participate.  But at the moment, I just can't.  
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 12 - 254
DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: September 25th, 2014, 10:47am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
Michigan.USA
Posts
1522
Posts Per Day
0.31
I'm still plugging away at the last challenge,(7wk) but I'm having several unexpected roadblocks with it. But if there was a horror themed Oct OWC, I wouldn't mind going back to the old wheelhouse.

But only under the following conditions: no witches, zombies, vampires, werewolves, psycho hillbillies, mummies, ghosts and man eating chubracabras.

Slashers, superstitions and scarecrows please.


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
my scripts on ss : http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1095531482/s-45/#num48
The Art!http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/m-1190561532/s-105/#num106

Revision History (1 edits)
DarrenJamesSeeley  -  September 25th, 2014, 10:18pm
Logged Offline
Site Private Message AIM YIM Reply: 13 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: September 25th, 2014, 12:35pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20
I might give this OWC a go. Especially if it's horror as I favour the genre.
Hopefully I have the time. It's been pretty limited lately.


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 14 - 254
DS
Posted: October 1st, 2014, 4:22pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
359
Posts Per Day
0.10
Andddd it's October. Bumping this hoping it'll generate some more interest and perhaps an actual OWC thread.  
Logged
Private Message Reply: 15 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 1st, 2014, 4:47pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



We could just organise it ourselves.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 16 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 1st, 2014, 6:16pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Genre: Horror     (Duh!)
Theme: Crows &/or Rats
Challenge: Ten page/minute lo budget horror involving crows &/or rats

Available at your local dollar store this season!


http://www.dollartree.com/seas.....ex.pro?method=search
http://www.dollartree.com/catalog/search.cmd?form_state=searchForm&keyword=rat


Go crazy.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 17 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 1:16am Report to Moderator
Guest User



I've already written a horror feature about crows.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 18 - 254
DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 11:45am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
Michigan.USA
Posts
1522
Posts Per Day
0.31
Already done the Rat. Kind of.

Are you gonna head up this one Ray?


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
my scripts on ss : http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1095531482/s-45/#num48
The Art!http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/m-1190561532/s-105/#num106
Logged Offline
Site Private Message AIM YIM Reply: 19 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 12:19pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Head it up?!
Pfft.
Haaaaail, no.

I'm taking a big break from screenwriting and indie/am filmmaking.
Just got my head too stuck inside the business part of it, was getting foul and pissy, needed to step back and find my creative witty humor side again.

I'm just watching this October tradition from afar.
Participated (beyond par) in the last three years.
Miiiiight (likely) take a break on this fourth year of mine around these here parts.

I just don't wanna watch a good thing goto waste.
Don't know what caused "The Fall of Movie Poet", would hate to see something similar happen here.
http://www.moviepoet.com/error.aspx?aspxerrorpath=/home.aspx

I might just wanna watch some "football" instead of play "football" this year.
Might just watch the "superbowl", juno?



Logged
Private Message Reply: 20 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 1:36pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



If it needs somebody to head up an OWC, I wouldn't mind stepping up to the plate. I could handle it all myself... but scripts would need to be sent to me where I could host them from my server. Or use dropbox and send me a link. I wouldn't even need any special powers, aside from maybe the ability to start a thread in the correct section if it isn't available already.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 21 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 4:32pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



One year, the genre/theme to the Halloween OWC was comedy/carving pumpkins (or something like that).  A lot of people went ballistic over it.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 22 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 4:40pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36


I think with sufficient creativity ANYTHING can be turned into a horror story of sorts.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 23 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 8:42pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



I need an October Horror OWC, as I absolutely hate San Antonio, TX.  It's slumsville/ghettoville, with the ugliest, fattest peeps I've ever seen.  Disgusting.

Please, Don, give us soemthing to look forward to.  
Logged
e-mail Reply: 24 - 254
LC
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 8:56pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from dogglebe
One year, the genre/theme to the Halloween OWC was comedy/carving pumpkins (or something like that).  A lot of people went ballistic over it. Phil


By ballistic, I take it you mean it didn't go down that well? What were the entries like? I imagine there were many so-so scripts and piss-takes. Comedy is hard.

I'd love to see a straight horror micro short with minimal dialogue or restrictions on dialogue. The entries would be fast reads and the ingenious ones would shine through and hopefully pack a punch. Just a thought.


Quoted from Dreamscale
I need an October Horror OWC, as I absolutely hate San Antonio, TX.  It's slumsville/ghettoville, with the ugliest, fattest peeps I've ever seen.  Disgusting. Please, Don, give us soemthing to look forward to.  


Oh, dear. Looks like a another move might be on the cards?


Logged
Private Message Reply: 25 - 254
stevie
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 10:07pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients



Location
Down Under
Posts
3441
Posts Per Day
0.61

Quoted from Dreamscale
I absolutely love living in San Antonio TX!  Some of my new friends may be fat and amazingly ugly but they are always ready to accommodate - and indeed experiment with - my unusual sexual tendencies. Cowboy fans in particular have become a delicacy for me I look forward to each night.   Suffice to say that I may not have time to participate in a new OWC



That's my buddy Jeff. Always willing to take one for the team...



Logged
Private Message Reply: 26 - 254
Ryan1
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 10:40pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer



Posts
1098
Posts Per Day
0.21

Quoted from Dreamscale
I need an October Horror OWC, as I absolutely hate San Antonio, TX.  It's slumsville/ghettoville, with the ugliest, fattest peeps I've ever seen.  Disgusting.


Sadly, Jeff's new job is with the San Antonio board of tourism.

Hopefully we get a drumbeat tomorrow.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 27 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 10:43pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from Dreamscale
I need an October Horror OWC, as I absolutely hate San Antonio, TX.  It's slumsville/ghettoville, with the ugliest, fattest peeps I've ever seen.  Disgusting.

Please, Don, give us soemthing to look forward to.  


If you feel that passionate about it, why not just write about it anyway? Do you need permission to write? Regarding your description of where you live, I think you will fit in just fine.

Regarding the OWC -bit of a flat idea, with all due respect.  Bit bland.
I remember a film from the 80s, some Italian thing, where people were trapped in an apocalyptic world and had to enter the sewers to survive, as the nuclear fallout wouldn't really benefit their health.

They encountered the nasty rodents several times -- and many were killed in various ways. Although, VHS quality never really revealed how anyone died... just people laying in puddles with rats on them and pounding music blaring out with the accompanying screams of HELP ME! RATS ARE EATING ME ALIVE! AHHHGGGH!

The ending nearly made me shit my pants. The whole movie had been a dud, then all of a sudden they lay this on me.
I was 7 or 8 years old, mum and dad both had fallen asleep. I did like the film but I was pleased to see anything over a PG rating at the time.
The shock was -- biological scientific soldiers have come to save our two heroes as they emerge from the sewers. The world is great again! Everything is fine!
Oh... But wait. GAS MASK removes his apparatus and low and behold -- he�s a giant RAT!
Lol. It was awesome at the time.




Revision History (2 edits; 1 reasons shown)
Scoob  -  October 2nd, 2014, 11:13pm
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 28 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 2nd, 2014, 11:49pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
Would it be "Cat's Eyes- The movie" with the giant rat as the end segment?
I always felt sorry for the rat...

Or "Nightmares" 1983.

Can't remember which was which.

I think in both segments, the rat was somewhat angry, but had a reason. She/he just wanted her dead baby back. I can't watch those segments, it upsets me. Animals and kids -- nah, I'm out. Too many tears. I can watch adult actors being destroyed in a fictional world, but nothing to do with animals or kids.  I think it's because they are largely defenceless, and they depend on us to help them. When you see such a trust betrayed... it's just soul destroying.  




Revision History (5 edits; 1 reasons shown)
Scoob  -  October 3rd, 2014, 2:23pm
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 29 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 3:03am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scoob

I remember a film from the 80s, some Italian thing, where people were trapped in an apocalyptic world and had to enter the sewers to survive, as the nuclear fallout wouldn't really benefit their health.

They encountered the nasty rodents several times -- and many were killed in various ways. Although, VHS quality never really revealed how anyone died... just people laying in puddles with rats on them and pounding music blaring out with the accompanying screams of HELP ME! RATS ARE EATING ME ALIVE! AHHHGGGH!


I remember that. It was really bad.

I was pretty sure they made James Herbert's The Rats into a film.... but I did read the book so maybe I'm just thinking of that. It was actually where I got the idea for the white crow in my Murder of Crows story. The lead rat was the one causing all the bother, once he was taken out the rats stopped killing people. Quite a cool way to get out of the situation without an ending where every rat in the country needs to be exterminated.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 30 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 4:43pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
Come on Don....put us out of our misery. We need an OWC


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 31 - 254
wonkavite
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 4:51pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from DustinBowcot

The lead rat was the one causing all the bother, once he was taken out the rats stopped killing people. Quite a cool way to get out of the situation without an ending where every rat in the country needs to be exterminated.


Oh, you mean like Ben?    (Sorry, couldn't resist.)
Logged
e-mail Reply: 32 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 5:18pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
Maybe Don is changing it up a bit and instead of a Halloween challenge, it's a Christmas/holiday challenge. The market for holiday movies is huge.


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 33 - 254
Ryan1
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 6:01pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer



Posts
1098
Posts Per Day
0.21

Quoted from mmmarnie
Maybe Don is changing it up a bit and instead of a Halloween challenge, it's a Christmas/holiday challenge. The market for holiday movies is huge.


Nah, the October OWC is a grand tradition around here.  Biggest of the year by far.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 34 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 6:25pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scoob
If you feel that passionate about it, why not just write about it anyway? Do you need permission to write? Regarding your description of where you live, I think you will fit in just fine.


If I feel that passionate about what?  The Hallowed October OWC?  WTF?

Do I need permission to write something?  No, but thanks for asking.

Thanks for that last comment.  That's very sweet of you, Scooby Doobie.

I'm sure we'll hear something soon, as it is a tradition around here and hopefully, this ghost town will awaken, like a mighty sea creature coming straight Up from the Depths.  

Logged
e-mail Reply: 35 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 7:21pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35
I need to write more shorts! They are my passion! I want something dark and moody for this Oct OWC. No comedy. Not slasher crap, but something sinister. Psychological. An MA rating would be cool, but I don't think Don and I have the same ideas...  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 36 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 9:41pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Grandma Bear
but something sinister. Psychological. An MA rating would be cool


YES!!!

Balls out, no holds barred.  No punches puleed.  Real deal, take no prisnors HORRER.

Who's in, damnit?

Let's wake the fucking dead, damnit!!!

BWOOOOOHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Logged
e-mail Reply: 37 - 254
wonkavite
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 9:46pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



Wake the F**king dead?  Please, no more zombie flicks!!  (Sorry.  Besides - everything considered - I shouldn't bitch about zombies...)  
Logged
e-mail Reply: 38 - 254
LC
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 10:02pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34
I'm with Pia on this. Dark, psychological horror - but I'm still pushing for the minimal dialogue micro-short like I said before.

I love the way Don lets the conversation flow on a thread like this too, lets us speculate and gives no clue at all. Let them all work themselves up in a frenzy of possibilities. Suspense at its best.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 39 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 10:33pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
Yes! Something dark and twisted, demented...all that stuff!!  


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 40 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 3rd, 2014, 10:50pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from LC
I'm still pushing for the minimal dialogue micro-short

We did a no dialogue thing back in Feb -06. I treasure that one as it taught me how to write visually and not rely on dialogue.

Maybe time for a new one?...


Logged
Private Message Reply: 41 - 254
khamanna
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 2:14am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.78

Quoted from mmmarnie
Maybe Don is changing it up a bit and instead of a Halloween challenge, it's a Christmas/holiday challenge. The market for holiday movies is huge.


Christmas 7WC and Horror OWC - that would be grand!!
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 42 - 254
stevie
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 4:44am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients



Location
Down Under
Posts
3441
Posts Per Day
0.61

Quoted from LC
I'm with Pia on this. Dark, psychological horror - but I'm still pushing for the minimal dialogue micro-short like I said before.


Have found a way to combine the two, Lib: based on the San Antonio neighbourhood where Jeff lives now, it would be ripe for all sorts of freaks and debased creature horror shorts. And of course there would be minimal if any dialogue apart from howling at the full moon or screaming Cowboy cheerleaders used as Human Centipedes in Jeff's...um, I mean his neighbour's basement.




Logged
Private Message Reply: 43 - 254
LC
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 6:14am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from stevie
Have found a way to combine the two, Lib: based on the San Antonio neighbourhood where Jeff lives now, it would be ripe for all sorts of freaks and debased creature horror shorts. And of course there would be minimal if any dialogue apart from howling at the full moon or screaming Cowboy cheerleaders used as Human Centipedes in Jeff's...um, I mean his neighbour's basement.


Poor old Jeff. Sounds like Texas Chainsaw meets Deliverance.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 44 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 9:13am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from LC
Poor old Jeff. Sounds like Texas Chainsaw meets Deliverance.


Thanks for the "old" part in there, Lib!  

The only thing I need a chainsaw for around these parts is to cut off the bellies of all the obese pigs stumbling about.

I swear and I'm not embellishing, the average weight of the females in San Antonio must be north of 225, and probably closer to 250 - Stevie would be in hig heaven here!

Logged
e-mail Reply: 45 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 3:14pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from LC
Poor old Jeff. Sounds like Texas Chainsaw meets Deliverance.


That sounds like a romcom for Jeff.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 46 - 254
Grey
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 7:18pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
38
Posts Per Day
0.01

Quoted from Dreamscale


Thanks for the "old" part in there, Lib!  

The only thing I need a chainsaw for around these parts is to cut off the bellies of all the obese pigs stumbling about.

I swear and I'm not embellishing, the average weight of the females in San Antonio must be north of 225, and probably closer to 250 - Stevie would be in hig heaven here!


*sings*
Yeah, it's pretty clear, I ain't no size two
But I can shake it, shake it
Like I'm supposed to do
'Cause I got that boom boom that all the boys chase
And all the right junk in all the right places...

Sorry...had to..they've been playin' that song to death 'round here!


Logged
Private Message Reply: 47 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 4th, 2014, 9:53pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
Guess I should move to San Antonio and join my herd. Or whatever you call a group of hogs. Be careful Jeff. Insult enough of us and you'll be trampled.


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 48 - 254
Grey
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 12:10am Report to Moderator
New



Posts
38
Posts Per Day
0.01
Fist bump to Marnieml....Dreamscale doesn't know what he's missing.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 49 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 12:11am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from Dreamscale


If I feel that passionate about what?  The Hallowed October OWC?  WTF?

Do I need permission to write something?  No, but thanks for asking.

Thanks for that last comment.  That's very sweet of you, Scooby Doobie.

I'm sure we'll hear something soon, as it is a tradition around here and hopefully, this ghost town will awaken, like a mighty sea creature coming straight Up from the Depths.  



I didn't mean to offend you Dreamscale, (and I don't think I have) but I should have put a smiley face at the end of my sentence. However, reading it back, it did seem like a bit of a dig, so I'll apologize.  I should have made it more obvious it was intended as a bit of banter, and in all fairness, you've taken it as such.

I should not have said it at all baring in mind our recent history, so I know that's a bit silly on my behalf, and I apologize.

Hope you all do well with the OWC. The Halloween one is the "biggie", so good luck to everyone!



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 50 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 2:13am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
I note the portal page has altered - the 6WC has been taken down.

Getting closer, let's hope


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 51 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 3:26am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43
If memory serves, it started in the second week of October last year.

I only know that as there was this business with the bald fat bloke down the road finding me asleep in his garden. Again.

I probably shouldn't have pointed out how much he resembled Charles Laughton.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 52 - 254
Ryan1
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 6:05am Report to Moderator
Old Timer



Posts
1098
Posts Per Day
0.21
October 2014 OWC thread is up.  Sound the alarm.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 53 - 254
LC
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 7:01am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from Ryan1
October 2014 OWC thread is up.  Sound the alarm.


Someone's on the ball. Good spotting.

The plot thickens...



Logged
Private Message Reply: 54 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 7:40am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Honestly, I think it would be good for the industry and consumers for filmmakers to cast for nontraditional female roles.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:45pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 55 - 254
wonkavite
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 8:31pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



Oh, but the Dress Barn of Horror - surely it is the epitome, the Asylum Sharknado of true horror...  Why settle for 4P of jumps and scares, when one mightest have 18W - an ample girth of pure terror, that grabs one in its ample bosoms in bright, blossoming floral colors of sheer evil...!

...I *seriously* have to stop drinking after 9PM.  Carry on, folks...   As you were.  
Logged
e-mail Reply: 56 - 254
Gum
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 9:28pm Report to Moderator
Been Around



Location
Some travelling Circus...
Posts
832
Posts Per Day
0.41

Quoted from RayW
Write a product for a market...

... Honestly, I think it would be good for the industry and consumers for filmmakers to cast for non-traditional female roles.


I think you hit the nail on the head. Keeping a watchful eye on what society is pushing, as well, will give you a fairly good idea as to what the film studios are ready to push out.

My two cents are 'Death' and the 'Glamorization' of those particular media headlines. Simply put, death is on the rise (Ebola) and I'm seeing quite a bit of glamorization of that said media vice via 'Dia de los Muertos' (Day of the Dead) theme. That and the theme itself coupled with 'Sexy Sirens' or the elaborate 'Sugar Skull' face painting. That's the media of course trying to deflate the concept of death itself by forcing an altered perception via cute and sexy... effed up right?

I mean, I've seen the entire theme enshrouded within the 'Day of the Dead' holiday previously, but never as prominent as I'm seeing this Halloween. I'll admit... I'm totally enamored by it, so much to the extent that I'm already buying into it tooth and nail. Perhaps I shouldn't think out loud on this because I'll blow my cover if I script into the October OWC, but meh... tis' not that anonymous when everyone knows you write from inside a rabbit hole. Anyways, I couldn't help but jump on this bandwagon and start creating artwork based on this ideology. Here's a poster I created (for a script not yet in production), perhaps it will inspire someone else (OWC... hint, hint) to push the concept, LOL... or not.






Revision History (1 edits)
Gum  -  October 5th, 2014, 9:40pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 57 - 254
stevie
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 9:31pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients



Location
Down Under
Posts
3441
Posts Per Day
0.61
Logline: when a plus size Aussie model - Robyn Lawley (google her, she's hot) wakes up in a San Antonio basement under the house of noted Arizona sheep rooter Jeff Bush, the Australian government must utilise the services of an  Aussie backpacker  who is shagging his way alphabetically through the cheerleading personnel of NFL teams. By chance, he is up to 'D' and in the area. An epic race against time ensues. Will the denim shorts prevail? Or will Jeff introduce Robyn to the rest of his 'family' who live as Human Centipedes?  




Logged
Private Message Reply: 58 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 5th, 2014, 10:12pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
Here's a high concept idea. Like "Snakes on a Plane"...no logline required:

"TEETH. PLUS SIZE."


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 59 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 1:44am Report to Moderator
Guest User



Movie posters, nor the design of them push me into writing. For me, all that bullshit comes after the script is written. Seems to me that a lot of supposed writers spend more time designing posters for their scripts than actually writing them.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 60 - 254
LC
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 4:25am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from Webmaster-Don

Yes, Virginia. There will be an October, 2014 One Week Challenge. I'm thinking Pumpiking Rom Com


Well now, this is interesting...


Logged
Private Message Reply: 61 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 7:21am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36



Logged
Private Message Reply: 62 - 254
Gum
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 10:17am Report to Moderator
Been Around



Location
Some travelling Circus...
Posts
832
Posts Per Day
0.41

Quoted from DustinBowcot
Movie posters, nor the design of them push me into writing. For me, all that bullshit comes after the script is written. Seems to me that a lot of supposed writers spend more time designing posters for their scripts than actually writing them.


Touché…

That makes sense I guess… it’s like trying to ice a cake when there’s no cake. I think inspiration comes from a few different avenues though when writing. Music, art, writing… for me, it’s all interwoven as some strange symbiotic evolution during the design process. QT himself has even written scenes solely based on the fact he could incorporate a certain song into it for continuity. This shows he is not just a writer/director, he is an artist, a savant if you will, and does not limit himself to just one medium during the creation process.

At the end of the day, I believe most, if not all the writers on this site have the knack for other avenues of approach when trying to tame their writing muse. If you can inspire someone to write about something via artwork or music, then what’s wrong with the ideology of stoking your own inspiration with other mediums? Another way of looking at it is, if you’re a writer and have not tried to work with any other medium, then you really are putting a cap on the imaginative process.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 63 - 254
DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 10:39am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
Michigan.USA
Posts
1522
Posts Per Day
0.31

Quoted from Dreamscale


YES!!!

Balls out, no holds barred.  No punches puleed.  Real deal, take no prisnors HORRER.

Who's in, damnit?

Let's wake the fucking dead, damnit!!!

BWOOOOOHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




I'm in. I'm waiting.
Anyone PM Don?
Are we burned out over the 7wker a while ago (I never did finish mine, and I doubt it will be anytime soon) ?



"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
my scripts on ss : http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1095531482/s-45/#num48
The Art!http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/m-1190561532/s-105/#num106
Logged Offline
Site Private Message AIM YIM Reply: 64 - 254
DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 11:19am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
Michigan.USA
Posts
1522
Posts Per Day
0.31

Quoted from Grandma Bear

Pm Don about what? There will be an October OWC. There's even a board for it up now. It's going to happen.  

About the 1+6WC. I finished mine. Wrote three drafts, I think, and sent it of to the prod-co, but never heard back, so it was another clunker.  


Saw that after I wrote it. And I wondered about PM's Don because some (including me) asked to help run the OWC in recent times.

As for my own 1+6, I'm still writing and shaping it up, but it's something I'm taking some time on- a personal choice. I did, however, out myself on that thread ("Balancing Act") not that anyone gives a hoot.


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
my scripts on ss : http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1095531482/s-45/#num48
The Art!http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/m-1190561532/s-105/#num106
Logged Offline
Site Private Message AIM YIM Reply: 65 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 6:54pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I look forward to some good entries!  




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:46pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 66 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 7:14pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35
Most of my shorts that have been produced and sold for actual real money, has had a twist at the end.

Even my own little Pumpkin Nightmare in my sig.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 67 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 6th, 2014, 8:15pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43

Quoted from Grandma Bear
Most of my shorts that have been produced and sold for actual real money.


Most of my shorts are produced in China. I know this cos it says so on the label. I did want to borrow Stevie's. But they were sticky.

Most of my short film scripts have not been produced. Come to think of it, neither have the long ones. Woe is me.

Ho hum.  At least I have my goat. Alas, it cost me my sofa.

Now, I'm off to see a man about some magic beans.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 68 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 7th, 2014, 1:38am Report to Moderator
Guest User



I like them all. With a twist, without a twist, slow burn, fast burn... a good writer just tells stories. Don't get bogged down with bullshit.

I'm already writing a horror feature... completely different to what anyone else is doing right now. Took me a while to come up with something new. Not sure I could do it again so soon, but we'll see.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 69 - 254
DS
Posted: October 7th, 2014, 3:43pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
359
Posts Per Day
0.10
Well I'm late to the party, but... looks like the sub-forum is up!

Is there a specific time to except the challenge to be announced? Has there been a pattern of a specific day of the week for example in the past or is it random?


Quoted from DustinBowcot


I'm already writing a horror feature... completely different to what anyone else is doing right now. Took me a while to come up with something new. Not sure I could do it again so soon, but we'll see.


Hopefully you'll manage to churn something out for the OWC as well, was quite looking forward to reading your entry. Best of luck with the feature.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 70 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 7th, 2014, 3:52pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



The genre and theme is usually announced on a Friday night.  There will be advanced notice.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 71 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 7th, 2014, 11:06pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
What would be nice to do next... ?

2006 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-shorthorror/
Something to do with milk I'm guessing.


2007 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-oct07owc/
Something to do with pumpkins.


2008 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-1008OWC/m-1223662756/s-0/
(Hup, Don's really getting a good organizational handle on this thing
It is October 31st and a community is being invaded, however everyone thinks it's a hoax.  Two kids know the real truth...


2009 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-oct09/m-1255139998/s-0/
At this year's Halloween Festival, strange things are happening.


2010 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-10OWC/m-1286589906/s-0/
It was a dark and stormy night

Limitations: You only have three human actors - two male and one female. (adults who can play between the ages of 18 to 80).  One male is in a wheelchair.  All events must occur sometime between October 30th to November 1st.  You can't use the word Halloween.  Everything occurs in and around an abandoned, rundown house.  You can do anything to the house, except burn it down.


2011 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-OCT11/m-1318039238/s-0/
Ghosts are not bad, just misunderstood

One character must be a ghost.  By the end of the story, the reader must understand that the ghost isn't "the bad guy".


2012 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-Oct12/m-1350101457/s-0/
Odd but interesting character(s) take refuge from a hurricane in a beat-up motel and are forced to make a choice between good or evil in order to survive the night.

Each character must have some history involving a supernatural event in their lives that factors into their choice. Genre is open. This is a micro-budget short, so no destruction of the motel, no children or animals and minimal special effects.


2013 http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-Oct13/m-1381543317/s-0/
Modern Witches (or Warlocks)




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:47pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 72 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 7th, 2014, 11:11pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35
What would be nice to do next? Horror. No dialogue?  


Quoted from RayW

Each character must have some history involving a supernatural event in their lives that factors into their choice. Genre is open. This is a micro-budget short, so no destruction of the motel, no children or animals and minimal special effects.

I wrote A Mime Is A Terrible Thing To Waste for that one.  

Let me know if you would like to see the film. They did a great job with it.  



Revision History (1 edits)
Grandma Bear  -  October 7th, 2014, 11:22pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 73 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 1:44am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
But when is it?

In the last few OWC Don has given a weeks notice. If so, it means it would start on the 17th not this Friday.

Just a guess.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 74 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 1:51am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from DS

Hopefully you'll manage to churn something out for the OWC as well, was quite looking forward to reading your entry. Best of luck with the feature.


I'm sure I will. I really can't help myself. Even were I writing to a deadline, I'd still find time to enter a short for this contest.

And thanks for wishing me luck on the feature.

I quite like Pia's idea of a no-dialogue horror. There's no better way to exercise the writing muscles. I'd also add a 5 page minimum... just for that extra bit of a challenge.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 75 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 5:57am Report to Moderator
Guest User



You don't think it's a challenge writing a three page short, Dustin?


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 76 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 7:30am Report to Moderator
Guest User



10-12 pages, real horror.  No pissers.  No writing so piss poor it comes off like a pisser.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 77 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 8:27am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Those submitting pissers should be outed, vilified, marked for extreme literary persecution, and inserted into the next crop of LIMITS OFF rewrites!




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:47pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 78 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 8:48am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Good morning, Pia!


Quoted from Grandma Bear
I wrote A Mime Is A Terrible Thing To Waste for that one.  

Let me know if you would like to see the film. They did a great job with it.  


Yes, I would.  
Thank you.




Logged
Private Message Reply: 79 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 9:45am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Dreamscale
No writing so piss poor it comes off like a pisser.


Sorry to hear you're not going to be entering this one.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 80 - 254
DS
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 1:29pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
359
Posts Per Day
0.10
No-dialogue horror is definitely my favourite idea brought up so far. Besides just being an interesting concept, there's probably a lot to gain from it as a writer.

In agreement with Dustin about a relatively high pagecount, if it was to be no-dialogue I'd like it to be 8-12 pages. It's definitely a challenge to come up with a good 3-pager, but aren't those almost always action-line heavy? If the concept is avoiding dialogue.. I'd say doing it for 3 pages would be much easier than doing so for 8 or more.


Quoted from RayW


EXTREEEEME
>> sex <<

against

genuine leather shoes!



Pass.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 81 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 2:25pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Reef Dreamer
But when is it?

In the last few OWC Don has given a weeks notice. If so, it means it would start on the 17th not this Friday.

Just a guess.


October 7th, 2011, 9:00pm
This month's theme and genre are...

October 12th, 2012, 11:10pm
The October 2012 One Week Challenge Theme is...

October 11th, 2013, 9:01pm
The October '13 One Week Challenge topic and genre are...



I'm gonna guess.. we'll hear something this Friday night before midnight.
Just a guess, tho.






Logged
Private Message Reply: 82 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 8th, 2014, 6:26pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from DustinBowcot
Sorry to hear you're not going to be entering this one.


Oh, I will be, Dustin...I will be.

But, as I said, I'm honestly hoping that readers of your script won't think it's a big old pisser, as most seem to do every blind entry you submit.  We can only hope and pray for you.

Best of luck.

Logged
e-mail Reply: 83 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 9th, 2014, 6:29am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Dreamscale

Oh, I will be, Dustin...I will be.


It's been exactly a year since you last entered, what can only be described as, a very tragic script... and I'm not talking about genre. Since then you've either entered pissers or not entered at all. I had you down as being scared to take it seriously for fear of ridicule from the noobs you regularly used to bash due to your Tourette-like dyslexia.

Anyway, it seems you're finally getting somewhere. Ledbetter has taken you under his wing as his bitch. I'd be careful though mate, if I were you.

It may just start out as the occasional hand or blow job, but who knows what else there is in store for you. It's like bullying, it starts out as the occasional shove, moves onto headlocks, maybe an attempt drowning, finally your head cut off in a local park...
Logged
e-mail Reply: 84 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 9th, 2014, 7:26am Report to Moderator
Guest User



Thanks for the words of warning, Dustin.  I really apprecaite your helpfullness.

Speaking of tragic scripts, bro, c'mon now.  I don't think a single person has ever favorably reviewed any of your OWC entries.  Not only are they downright terrible, but worse for you, they're downright embarrassing.

Here's hoping to 2 things for you this October OWC...

First that your effort is taken seriously, and not thought to be a pisser because of the abysmal writing on display.

Second that you can place in the top 80%.

I highly doubt eitehr will be the case, but I'm hoping for you, Dustin.  You're such a helpful chap, you deserve it.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 85 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 9th, 2014, 7:38am Report to Moderator
Guest User



Thanks mate. It makes me feel a lot better knowing that I have you rooting for me.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 86 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 9th, 2014, 5:51pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



We're all rooting for you.  Now, just deliver, damnit.  
Logged
e-mail Reply: 87 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 10th, 2014, 1:29am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Dreamscale
We're all rooting for you.  Now, just deliver, damnit.  


Very thoughtful of you to point that out.

I've been wondering what to get you for xmas this year and I happened to be clearing out my attic when I came across this.



It's got you written all over it.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 88 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 10th, 2014, 7:27am Report to Moderator
Guest User



That too is very thoughtful of you, Dustin, but I don't t quite get it...I'm not dyslexic, never have been, and have always excelled in English, writing, and the like, so giving me such a thoughtful Christmas gift wold really be a complete waste.

Here's my advice...you had this in your attic for a reason - you obviously had to use this antique back in the day.  You still should be using it, based on your current writing.  Do us all a favor and start using it again, mate.

Trust me, it really can't hurt, and hopefully, could actually help.  Try it out for this coming OWC, and maybe, just maybe, you won't be accused of writing another pisser.

You get me?  
Logged
e-mail Reply: 89 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 10th, 2014, 8:16am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Dreamscale
...and have always excelled in English, writing, and the like...


It doesn't count if you were raised in a foreign country. Even the most retarded English person would seem quite knowledgeable about the language in the Congo.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 90 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 10th, 2014, 9:25am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
and you two haven't even started writing!!!

only with an OWC!

i suppose tonight we find out that it starts in a  weeks time





My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 91 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: October 10th, 2014, 11:48am Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20
So, will this be horror orientated?

And will we definitely hear something today?

Eager to try a OWC out..


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 92 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 5:59am Report to Moderator
Guest User



I'm glad if it means I've got six more days or whatever to prepare as I'm 60+ pages into my horror feature and will finish it in a few more days! It's not your average horror, the tone is perfect and it's all story. Up there with some of the best stories I've written, if not better. I could make it for under 350k... no problem, and that's with some decent names attached. As you can tell, I'm very excited about this one. Be a bit of a buzz kill having to stop for a week to work on a short right now.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 93 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 8:14am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Waaaaa... !
No overnight Oct OWC announcement.

It's like anti-Christmas.

Waaaa... !



Logged
Private Message Reply: 94 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 8:17am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35
I was kind of hoping there would've been an announcement last night too. I really really want to participate. I'm going leaf gazing in the smokies next week so I don't now if I'll have time.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 95 - 254
LC
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 8:21am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34
Perhaps there's a little indecision behind the scenes about what it'll be.

Or maybe it's going to commence mid week. Talk about keep 'em keen.

... More speculation after the break.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 96 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 9:17am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Sci fi horror
Animal horror
Horror in a forest
Possessed object
Cannibals
Involving a car
Slasher
PG rated
Involving a baby
Doll or toy horror
Trapped in a __________
Hostage
Tables turned
Dark fable
_________ gone wrong
Medical horror
Hardware
End of the world
Significant other is a vampire/werewolf/Frankenstein's monster/etc
Clergy horror
Shallow grave

Goto TV tropes .com and let a couple randomly generated letters lead the way!



Logged
Private Message Reply: 97 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 10:46am Report to Moderator
Guest User



There are quite a few scripts being uploaded... so the OWC will have to wait. Here's one for you all to get started on.

The log: An alien princess accidentally takes a young man back with her to her home world, 2 million light years across space. 264 pages - pdf, format

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/Xeronisscriptrtf.pdf

What a joy it sounds. I'll get started on the shorts, I'll leave this to you pro's.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 98 - 254
DS
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 10:56am Report to Moderator
New


Posts
359
Posts Per Day
0.10

Quoted from DustinBowcot
There are quite a few scripts being uploaded... so the OWC will have to wait. Here's one for you all to get started on.

The log: An alien princess accidentally takes a young man back with her to her home world, 2 million light years across space. 264 pages - pdf, format

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/Xeronisscriptrtf.pdf

What a joy it sounds. I'll get started on the shorts, I'll leave this to you pro's.


That script has the best twist I have ever read.

SPOILER ALERT


Quoted Text
BEN (V.O)
There is life out there and I have made contact.
But the story of the princess of planet Xeronis
does not end here. This is just the beginning.
The end is still to come.

END OF EPISODE ONE


The 264 page feature is actually a pilot. Watch out M. Night Shymalan. Okay, well... it can be a saga like Star Wars, but I scrolled to the end and it got a decent chuckle out of me. I'll seriously read a few pages of it later.

No friday night announcement then. This thread has been moved to the October 2014 OWC sub-forum though. Getting closer, perhaps.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 99 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 4:37pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
Come on Don - when is it going to be?


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 100 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 5:00pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



I'm at 75 in my feature and will likely finish over the next two days. I'd do it tomorrow only I've got a meeting for a few hours.

Anyway, I'm good for whenever. Looking forward to it... or not, I'm easy either way. I don't need an excuse to write... but it's always nice to have one, I suppose.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 101 - 254
DS
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 5:48pm Report to Moderator
New


Posts
359
Posts Per Day
0.10
!

http://www.simplyscripts.com/2014/10/11/a-drum/

Theme and genre announced on the 17th.

What kind of a turnout do you all reckon there will be (amount of entries)?
Logged
Private Message Reply: 102 - 254
LC
Posted: October 11th, 2014, 7:30pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from DS
!

http://www.simplyscripts.com/2014/10/11/a-drum/

Theme and genre announced on the 17th.

What kind of a turnout do you all reckon there will be (amount of entries)?


Well, if you look at the last one the turnout was forty-plus. Lots of reading and critiquing to be done during that week - if you're dedicated.  

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-Oct13/m-1382196742/s-0/

The October OWC's generally bring everyone out of the woodwork.

Good to see it's looming - hope it's a goody.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 103 - 254
Don
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 12:16am Report to Moderator
Administrator
Administrator


So, what are you writing?

Location
Virginia
Posts
16449
Posts Per Day
1.93

Quoted from LC

hope it's a goody.



Me, too.  I hope it's about witches.  I like witches.  Who doesn't like witches?


Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site.

-------------
You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
- Wayne Gretzky
Logged Offline
Site Private Message Reply: 104 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 2:20am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from DS
!

http://www.simplyscripts.com/2014/10/11/a-drum/

Theme and genre announced on the 17th.

What kind of a turnout do you all reckon there will be (amount of entries)?


Sweet. I like the way that works out. Scripts will be in by the 24th and we have Halloween 'week' to read through them. There's usually over 20 for the OWC, could be over 30 or even 40.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 105 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 2:56am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I like sandwitches!




Logged
Private Message Reply: 106 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 4:08am Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20

Quoted from DustinBowcot
I'm at 75 in my feature and will likely finish over the next two days. I'd do it tomorrow only I've got a meeting for a few hours.

Anyway, I'm good for whenever. Looking forward to it... or not, I'm easy either way. I don't need an excuse to write... but it's always nice to have one, I suppose.


Will you be posting this here?

I'm intrigued..


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 107 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 5:12am Report to Moderator
Guest User



Yeah... I'll post it here, see if I can get some feedback on it.

Damn... have you seen Pia's new Av'? HoTT.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 108 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 5:18am Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20
Well, I'll give it a read. Definitely.
Sounds like you're happy with how it's turning out. Good stuff.


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 109 - 254
LC
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 5:38am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from DustinBowcot
Damn... have you seen Pia's new Av'? HoTT.


I feel partially responsible. I told her the other one scared the heck out of me.  



Logged
Private Message Reply: 110 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 9:22am Report to Moderator
Guest User



Maybe, for this OWC, people won't try so hard to bash scripts.  Newer, inexperienced writers who try to challenge themselves don't need to be discouraged by those who who comment that they've stopped reading after half a page.  Or just to criticize a clunky logline.

Might be good rules in general.


Phil

Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 12th, 2014, 9:39am
Logged
e-mail Reply: 111 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 3:01pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from LC


I feel partially responsible. I told her the other one scared the heck out of me.  



Good for you. And good for Pia for thinking of you. There's not enough consideration for others around these days, IMO.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 112 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 5:31pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
FREEEEE Celtx screenplay tab & margin formatting:
http://m.download.cnet.com/Celtx/3000-13631_4-10850080.html

Anyone else wanna lump out their technical pet peves that prevent the story from being read?




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:49pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 113 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 5:52pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
Holy hotness, Pia!

My tech pet peeves...I can't stand Cut to's, Smash Cuts, Dissolves...that will stop me from reading. It's not the writer's place to add camera directions. I find them obnoxious.

"We sees, we hears" also drive me nuts but it won't stop me from reading. It's more of an annoyance of lazy writing...or newbie writing.


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 114 - 254
LC
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 6:28pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34
So, Phil says this:


Quoted from dogglebe
Maybe, for this OWC, people won't try so hard to bash scripts.  Newer, inexperienced writers who try to challenge themselves don't need to be discouraged by those who who comment that they've stopped reading after half a page.  Or just to criticize a clunky logline.

Might be good rules in general.  Phil


Sound advice. If you can't get past the first page/half page - you're better off not commenting at all imh.

If you publicly comment that you couldn't read on cause it's a load of crap that's not constructive in any way and is just a way of blowing your own trumpet re how knowledgeable you are.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 115 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 6:35pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Basic slug format:

INT. = interior
EXT. = exterior

space

One to three word physical description, all caps

dash

DAY
NIGHT

Examples:
INT. CABIN BEDROOM - DAY
EXT. CORN FIELD - NIGHT
INT. CAVE - DAY
EXT. MOUNTAIN LAKE - NIGHT
INT. CARNIVAL HAUNTED HOUSE - DAY
EXT. RURAL HIGHWAY - NIGHT



Logged
Private Message Reply: 116 - 254
EWall433
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 7:18pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
423
Posts Per Day
0.11
I always come out of self-induced "writer's exile" for these. I don't even try to kid myself anymore.


Quoted from DustinBowcot
There's usually over 20 for the OWC, could be over 30 or even 40.


I think the last October challenge had a low bar of entry. 6 page minimum, something to do with a witch, in a genre that seems to be a favorite around here. A no-dialogue challenge might be a bit more of a hurdle. It'll be interesting to see what the criteria yields.

One thing that was a bit unfortunate to see was, despite the high entry count, the number of reviews per script stayed more or less flat. There was a small group reading a lot that week, and a larger group reading only a few or not at all.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 117 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 8:54pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from RayW
Although I could care less about log lines as I believe producers have more practical considerations I will cop to telling a writer I've ditched a submission on page one or two due to A) DIY homemade tab & margin formatting is industry unacceptable, at least use Celtx for free, or B) gross violations of multiple spec screenplay format conventions.


Saying that you stopped reading after two pages is discouraging to the writer.  It doesn't matter why.  

Another option would be to not write anything at all.  There will be people who read the entire short who will include whatever you would say after reading one or two pages.



Quoted from RayW
New writers, please don't be a skank writer.


Problem is, they don't know they're 'skank' writers when they submit.  But when they read reviews of their work, calling their scripts abortions, then they will probably leave.  And that doesn't help anyone.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 118 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 12th, 2014, 8:59pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
If I can't be constructive I just don't leave a comment. And I try to be respectful in my constructive comments. No reason to be a pr1ck. Unless you are a pr1ck and just can't help yourself.


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 119 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 2:30am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from dogglebe

Problem is, they don't know they're 'skank' writers when they submit.  But when they read reviews of their work, calling their scripts abortions, then they will probably leave.  And that doesn't help anyone.



Survival of the fittest.

Decent writers find it difficult to get a look in and that's because there's a HUGE pile of shite to wade through first. I'm not going to encourage bad writing.

I usually read all the way through. I read all 10 features at the last contest... however, they were all written to a decent standard... aside from one. I even read the bad one though and gave my honest opinion on it.

I'll read every script this time too... but if it's written really badly I will stop and say why. Sometimes it only takes one action block, and a writer can learn so much from it being corrected. Rather than leaving them to their ignorance.

I'm honest. I find it really difficult to tell lies. I don't see the point in them. I don't see the logic in lying just to avoid hurting their feelings, when the truth could actually help cure the issues. Lies perpetuate, truth heals.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 120 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 2:37am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from mmmarnie
If I can't be constructive I just don't leave a comment. And I try to be respectful in my constructive comments. No reason to be a pr1ck. Unless you are a pr1ck and just can't help yourself.


I actually edit my posts for prickishness these days. The odd one still slips by though.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 121 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 3:45am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

  • Spec screenplays are submitted in black only 12 point courier font, title page included.
  • Title page begins with the title in all caps, two lines down, "By", two lines down, author's name... However...
  • For OWCs only include the title. Resubmissions after the challenge has concluded may include author's name.
  • Last line on title page is "Copyright 2014.






Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:50pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 122 - 254
khamanna
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 6:07am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.78
I try to see something in each script - and usually there's something if a writer cared to put it down on paper. It's just he couldn't get his thought through. Saying I didn't go past 1 or 2 page - no it doesn't help in my experience. It discourages a writer, puts a writer off and sometimes for days.
OWC's go fast - sometimes we get to write it on the last day. Mistakes are a common thing in them.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 123 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 7:29am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:51pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 124 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 11:19am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from DustinBowcot
Survival of the fittest.


Since when is belittling others part of survival of the fittest?



Quoted from DustinBowcot
Decent writers find it difficult to get a look in and that's because there's a HUGE pile of shite to wade through first. I'm not going to encourage bad writing.


And I'm sure you put yourself in the top one percent, don't you?

You don't have to encourage bad writing.  But there's a difference between that and beating people mercilessly because their loglines are awkward or because they used the word lay when they should'bve used lie.



Quoted from DustinBowcot
Lies perpetuate, truth heals.
  

Where does encouraging come in to this?


Phil

Logged
e-mail Reply: 125 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 1:04pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from dogglebe


Since when is belittling others part of survival of the fittest?


I didn't say anything about belittling. I responded to the argument that we shouldn't read just half a page and should just not write anything at all. I'd rather give advice on an action block than nothing at all.


Quoted from dogglebe
You don't have to encourage bad writing.  But there's a difference between that and beating people mercilessly because their loglines are awkward or because they used the word lay when they should'bve used lie.


Beating people mercilessly is a strong choice of words. You're adding drama to something that isn't very dramatic. Writers need a thick skin and none thicker than when presenting their stuff to other writers. Personally, I don't care what anyone else does with their review... what is more annoying is those that don't review at all. I was very disappointed to find that not all the contestants from the contests actually review other scripts.


  

Quoted from dogglebe

Where does encouraging come in to this?


I find the truth encouraging.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 126 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 1:18pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from RayW

Alright, then.
Let's help them BEFORE they start heading down the wrong path INSTEAD of waiting until they've taken XX hours to go down the wrong path only to say "Sorry, chap. You should've done A, B, and C like X, Y, Z."


Many of them have started down that path before they got here.  They format their script based on what a book tells them to or--God forbid--model their script after a shooting script they find online.

And when their scripts are posted, the first comments they get are useless snide remarks like I started reading this but put it down after seeing FADE IN: on the right side of the page.

or

I was going to read this but I saw a typo in your logline.  If you can't take your writing seriously enough to run your script through a spellchecker, then I'm not going to waste my time with your amateur shit.

People come here to learn, among other reasons.  When they read such snide remarks, they learn that an asshole has looked at their scripts.

I'm not saying that I've never slammed some scripts because I know I have.  But I try helping them out.  It's a shame that not everyone does so.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 127 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 1:47pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from DustinBowcot
I find the truth encouraging.


It's not encouraging when you frighten new writers away.


Phil

Logged
e-mail Reply: 128 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 1:57pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
In defence of Dustin (If one is at all necessary)...he is an excellent reviewer imo.

Criticism is fine as far as I'm concerned, it should just be presented in a constructive and polite manner.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 129 - 254
bert
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 2:04pm Report to Moderator
Administrator


Buy the ticket, take the ride

Location
That's me in the corner
Posts
4233
Posts Per Day
0.61
I believe it might have been Alffy -- or some other brit, at any rate -- who first put forth the "pub criteria."

You should not say anything to an author on these boards that you would not say in person, to their face, over a pint.

Some reviewers here would run the risk of a punch in the nose, for sure.

And tacking on a patronizing "congratulations" for entering does nothing to diminish what went before.  In fact, quite the opposite.


Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!
Logged
Private Message Reply: 130 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 2:41pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
I've only been a round a few years but in all the OWC's I've taken part in there is usually someone who loses the plot with their reviews.

Too little sleep, too many to read....just too angry. Not always the same person, in fact a decent variety over the years.

Whilst not great, and indeed it often hurts to read such harsh comments, it does set the OWC apart. Adds a degree of spice.

What always amuses me, until it affects my script, is that we all accept they are rushed and we have to be understanding...except when we start reading them. Then we all forget it all and start to consider them as final works.

What we should be trying to find out is those with the best potential - they all need work.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 131 - 254
EWall433
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 3:42pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
423
Posts Per Day
0.11

Quoted from Reef Dreamer
Too little sleep, too many to read....


I really think it’s this more than anything. Like it or not, giving good feedback takes effort. Effort that dries up eventually. It’s not always as simple as writing your thoughts in a stream of consciousness. If people could see how much I laugh at and deride my own work when I go over it, they’d realize 1) nothing’s ever personal and 2) It takes me quite a lot of effort to put my thoughts into “socially acceptable” order.

Start with something positive is always a good rule. I haven’t always followed it, but that goes back to effort.

One thing I really try not to do is be the first thread post if I know my review is mostly negative. I’d prefer to give the script a chance to find it’s audience before chiming in. And if you have a completely negative review and you didn’t even finish the script, there’s really no excuse. Just wait. It’s literally the least you can do.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 132 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 4:17pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



I try not to read other reviews before posting my own.  It can, sometimes, sway your opinion.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 133 - 254
EWall433
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 4:54pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
423
Posts Per Day
0.11
I generally write up the review first, then read the thread before posting. I want to form an opinion first, but sometimes things will be brought up that I didn't think about or want to weigh in on. If my opinion can be swayed after already putting it into words, then there's a good chance I'm just wrong.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 134 - 254
irish eyes
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 5:52pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group


There`s too much blood in my alcohol

Location
Upstate New York
Posts
1865
Posts Per Day
0.36
Well my entry is in.

11 pages about a drum. I thought there would be more entries by now.

Mark


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 135 - 254
LC
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 6:06pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from bert
... And tacking on a patronizing "congratulations" for entering does nothing to diminish what went before.  In fact, quite the opposite.


So true.

I'm out, sorry, I couldn't get past two pages, I tried, but your writing and formatting is a disgrace and I've read more interesting characters on the back of a cereal packet. Plus, you call that a good idea for a plot? All in all, a big ol' snooze-fest.

But hey, you did it! Congrats on submitting an entry to the OWC.




Logged
Private Message Reply: 136 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 7:17pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I look forward to a sheaf of OWC submissions.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:52pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 137 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 7:47pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
http://en.softonic.com/s/celtx-2.9.1

Get it.
Learn it.
Use it.
It's free.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 138 - 254
LC
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 9:40pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from RayW
... Nube writer has all effing year to "learn" how to write in proper spec screenplay format.

You don't show up for a CHALLENGE to learn.

You show up for a CHALLENGE to learn just how good or not you are COMPARED TO YOUR COMPETITION.

Community workshop time is before the challenge, not at the challenge.


Really? This ain't Nichol or Project Greenlight - no one's paying an entry fee or auditioning for anything. It's an OWC run by Don a few times a year to help aspiring writers hone their craft.

Thank God, Don doesn't turn people away because their formatting is all wrong and they can't spell for peanuts.  I think quite a few newbs come across the challenges and think: this'll be a bit of fun.

And I don't see anything wrong with that.

If it turns out they really want to get into screenwriting proper, perhaps a small percentage (based on prev. challenges) will become regular members, learn a lot - least more than they knew before, and and make some friends in the process.

Good on you Ray for giving out formatting advice but I doubt many non-regulars will even be following this thread. If they are that's great, the info you've given will help.

But really, what's the harm in a few entries being below par or formatted incorrectly etc?

It's been said before but it's worth saying again that what's so great about SS (and Don, in particular) is that anyone can be a part of it.  There are no joining fees, no uppity conditions, reading quotas, or pre-qualifications for joining.

I maybe being a little melodramatic but Long Live Simply Scripts and its no-prejudice policy!


Logged
Private Message Reply: 139 - 254
CrusaderVoice
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 10:27pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
159
Posts Per Day
0.04
I've only done a couple of OWC's and I have had my stuff SHREDDED by some of you all...and it usually wasn't over formatting issues.

I never took it personally.

Here's the trick (and I know this is going to sound awful, but...): you have to know your place as a writer and on this board.

Most of these OWCs are going to be a genre out of my element. That's going to show in my writing and, as a result, it's likely to be a weaker entry. I feel it's still important for me to enter because the practice and break-down of my writing is valuable. It's the difference between practicing basketball by shooting hoops by yourself rather than finding nine other people and getting into a full-court pick-up game.

There's some real talent mixed in these and I'm still a novice. Newbies (not to the board but to this style of writing) need to understand their stuff may not come off as inspired brilliance right away.

I set the my bar for myself in this REALLY low. My goal is to entertain as many people as I can with what I write for these and hope for a few positive comments. That's it. I know I'm not going to win over all of you. So I'll write what comes into my head on these (no matter how weird or out of place it might be), and write it the best I can. For my previous entries, you all have picked apart fundamental mistakes, highlighted what is amateurish and all the ways it didn't work. It was a learning process that proved to be valuable...and I've been encouraged by the positive comments from others (the genuine ones - you can tell the difference between posts trying to say something positive to be nice and the ones that actually like the script or parts of it).

So newbies - try to follow correct formatting (although it's inevitable you'll make a mistake or four), don't expect to enter the best script in the contest, expect to get your material ripped apart by a bunch of people...understand what they're saying and then get over it.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 140 - 254
DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 10:47pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
Michigan.USA
Posts
1522
Posts Per Day
0.31

Quoted from Don


Me, too.  I hope it's about witches.  I like witches.  Who doesn't like witches?


If it is, I will kill said witch on the first half on the first page. The Hag will gag and choke on a  cherry. I will also not use any funny psydonyms - you will know who it is from.  No more witch/warlock stories for me. That goes for modern day real life to Broom Hilda.

On second thought...
"The Hag Will Gag"...
Choke On A  Cherry

Oh great now lookit what you made me do, You made me come up with a title. Two of 'em!
Oh the humanity!



"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
my scripts on ss : http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1095531482/s-45/#num48
The Art!http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/m-1190561532/s-105/#num106

Revision History (2 edits; 1 reasons shown)
DarrenJamesSeeley  -  October 13th, 2014, 11:09pm
Logged Offline
Site Private Message AIM YIM Reply: 141 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 11:16pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Clowns.

We need a good Oct OWC with a clown theme.

OTN dialog will be rewarded with honks.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:53pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 142 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 13th, 2014, 11:26pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
LC,

I agree and you're spot on correct, Don shouldn't turn away submissions, shy of gross disregard.

These OWCs are challenges.
If someone wants to show up on race day wearing a gorilla suit and flip-flops... fine by me.
There is no harm.
But there will be consequences.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:54pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 143 - 254
khamanna
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 12:06am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
4195
Posts Per Day
0.78

Quoted from dogglebe
I try not to read other reviews before posting my own.  It can, sometimes, sway your opinion.


Phil


I fully agree. It can and it does. Especially if many don't like a scirpt - people provide very convincing explanations as to why.

And then if reviews are not favorable you don't want to stand out like a black sheep. Or vice-versa. And it's not because I'm bad or I'm weak - that I'm sure about.
Going against the croud is not easy. So I decided  it's better not read before I post then and I don't.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 144 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 2:17am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from RayW

...three out of four films are directed by the writer...



I've been trying to find that out for a couple of days now. Where did you get that stat from? Not saying you're wrong, I just prefer to check sources as the source itself could be wrong.

That's a scary stat for the lowly writer if true. Not to mention the other scary stats that all but guarantees most of us will never get anywhere.

Personally, I don't like direction. The only thing I do director-wise with my own films is pick the main cast. Well, I did this time. Last time we made a three-way decision which basically meant we got to pick one each.

I'd rather pick a separate director... but a director on our team isn't as powerful as they should be as my business partner and I like to take full control.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 145 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 7:31am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from DustinBowcot
I've been trying to find that out for a couple of days now. Where did you get that stat from? Not saying you're wrong, I just prefer to check sources as the source itself could be wrong.

Cold hard research, man.

Columns AC & AD: https://docs.google.com/spread.....;usp=drive_web#gid=0

Columns X & Y: https://docs.google.com/spread.....;usp=drive_web#gid=0

Columns K & L, M just for fun: https://docs.google.com/spread.....;usp=drive_web#gid=1

Data resources come from IMDB, BoxofficeMojo, TheNumbers, and internet searches.


Quoted from DustinBowcot
That's a scary stat for the lowly writer if true. Not to mention the other scary stats that all but guarantees most of us will never get anywhere.

Yes.
Yes, it is a scary stat - if you're writing for someone else to produce.
And this is exactly why I review a hopper full of OWC submission just like a job interview.

When a job opening comes up employers receive fifty to five hundred applications for a single opening. That's forty-nine to four-hundred-ninety-nine "not-winners."

When Pia posts those lists of production companies looking for screenplays to produce for a "Low $six figures budget thriller starring a middle aged woman" or "Dramedy for a Hispanic central characters, made for TV budget" or "LGBT romcom gone wrong, $1.5M budget" etc. the producers are going to shake all the trees they can, receive umpteen screenplays to review and figure out which story can they make a buck off of.

It's like Pawn Stars or American Pickers or Storage Wars - everyone's looking for something they can make a buck off of.

Screenplays are commodities.
Largely, worthless trash or rubbish.

Through other info sources I've run across every year another 100,000 new feature length screenplays enter the pool to be produced.
Assume a screenplay stays in the pool for five years and that's a pool of half million screenplays any one screenplay is competing with.



That said, now if a nube writer is here just to make literature in screenplay format-ish for personal entertainment as an art form, then... GOPHERIT!!!








Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 9:49am
Logged
Private Message Reply: 146 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 8:29am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
It's sort of obvious in a way that most films would be written by the director.

Making a film and getting it out there is a feat of will. Who else is more likely to push the film all the way than a guy who has written it and made it himself?
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 147 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 9:03am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scar Tissue Films
It's sort of obvious in a way that most films would be written by the director.

Making a film and getting it out there is a feat of will. Who else is more likely to push the film all the way than a guy who has written it and made it himself?


I've only just learned that... it took a while, much longer than it should have, to click. It stands to reason that most directors probably started out as writers at some point, maybe a few actors in there too.

Personally, I prefer to get a director in at the moment. Maybe I just need a little more experience before stepping into those shoes. I did volunteer to DP the film we're doing now but as soon as I realised what was involved I had to change my mind and get in a pro. I don't know the first thing about cameras or lighting come to that.

I'm very wary of stepping outside my expertise... that's when things will go wrong.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 148 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:31am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from RayW
These OWCs are challenges.
If someone wants to show up on race day wearing a gorilla suit and flip-flops... fine by me.
There is no harm.
But there will be consequences.


There's a difference between saying, "You need to work on character development and story pacing,"  and  "This is the worst shit I've read in my life!  I blame your mother for not drowning as a baby, you fucking fuck-face!"

And since this site needs a steady flow of new writers to replace the ones who are scared away by the pretentious few, don't you think we should show a little patience with them?


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 149 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 12:18pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I don't believe I have ever left a review that said anything like either of those remarks.  




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:55pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 150 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 1:30pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from RayW
Honestly, constructively, both are equally useless to writers of any skill level, although the latter is certainly just plain crazy.


Not true at all!  Being constructive and nurturing will encourage them to improve their work and try again; telling them they suck will not.



Quoted from RayW
"You need to work on character development" communicates no useful information going forward.
It's like telling someone "You're lost."
Oh. Okay. Well... Can you point me in a direction?
"Nope. I'm just going to tell you that you're lost/you need to work on character development."


My examples here are usually followed up with examples taken from the script.  If someone describes their protagonist as:

SID (45) an overweight, unkept slob who once was the high school football star sits behind the wheel of his car.

I would ask how we're supposed he used to be a football star.  And work from there.



Quoted from RayW
"The terrified teens talk like electricians and lawyers."
"Law enforcement is going to call for backup before entering that structure."
"Waitaminit. They were too tired to walk back to the car - but - they magically had the energy to run into the dark forest? WTH?!"
"How does the creature grab the postal worker if it only comes out at night?"
"No one in real life is going to stick their finger into a pool of blood and rub it around to see if it's really blood."


There. Those are examples of useful constructive character development critiques.


The funny thing is, I've seen similar mistakes from the more 'experienced' people on this board.  Mistakes will always be made.



Quoted from RayW
"You need to work on character development" is just useless bitching.


No, it's not.  Many writers see things in their head that they don't know how to put on paper.  They assume you're seeing what they're imagining.



Quoted from RayW
As I said earlier - nubes have all year to learn BEFORE the challenge.




Not everyone signs up on these boards after the last Halloween challenge (or past any challenge).  Some show up just in time to join in on the so-called fun.



Quoted from RayW
Those sincere "You suck"s are just wasted on them.

So, you're right. DON'T tell them they suck.


"You suck's" are wasted on everyone.



Quoted from RayW
These entrants are patting themselves on the back just for turning on their celtx for the first time in ten months.
These entrants just want a participation award, in which case what is it that you're really providing them if THEY really just don't givashit?

They're not patting themselves on the back for entering; other people are doing that,.

[quote=RayW]Seriously, you think that if these adults need to be spoon fed they will begin to ACTUALLY challenge themselves to do the research to craft a better story for 2015?
One OWC a year, get some constructive feedback, and next year they'll do less-sucky?

Okay.
I think you're onto something here.

Then let's NOT be patient with them.
Let's be a little more PROACTIVE.
Let's GIVE them the tools they need BEFORE this year's Oct OWC.
And then we'll GIVE them ACTIONABLE advisement so that their 2015 OWC will show some genuine improvement.

Let's NOT wait until after they've loused up their one shot per year* at some praise and adulation!




Stop going full-retard!  I have to pay RDJ a few bucks each time I use that clip.

Believe it or not, there is a middle ground between automatically patting someone on the back and comparing reading someone's script to a concentration camp.  If you can't find the right words to politely criticize a bad script, then how are you suppose to find the right words to tell your story?


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 151 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 1:45pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I hope the new writers appreciate the guidance they receive in the spirit in which it was intended, and that they learn from their mistakes to produce even better work the next time.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:57pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 152 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 1:55pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Follow good formatting specs and your criticisms will be reduced to fairly harmless "I don't get what you're trying to say", "I'm confused by the story", and "I just thought it was boring" sort of remarks.

Good luck & best wishes.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:58pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 153 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 2:19pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



You impress me with your pretentiousness.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 154 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 2:21pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I apologize, Phil.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:58pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 155 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 4:25pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
To conclude....be nice, constructive and leave your own issues behind.

But, I would also say, do speak your mind. That's the way we learn.

Whilst I almost gave up after my first OWC I have to say it was one of the fastest and best script educations you could ask for. Not for everyone I suppose.

Now, as for this week's  topic, well, I'm never even close on that, except....there will be blood.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 156 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 4:29pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



Left twiddling my thumbs for a few days now. I am writing another feature, a drama, but I don't want to dive back in just yet with a short to write in a few days. I suppose I'll spend the time trying to sell my work, kidnap an agent... or something.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 157 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 4:34pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from RayW
Likewise.

Let's be friends!  


I try to help people.  You try hard to scare them away.


Phil

Logged
e-mail Reply: 158 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 4:45pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I help people to NOT fall down.
You help them AFTER they've fallen.

TEAMWORK!  



Logged
Private Message Reply: 159 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 6:04pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



You make them afraid to get back up.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 160 - 254
Pale Yellow
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 7:48pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
2083
Posts Per Day
1.37
Appreciate your words Phil. The last few times, I've said 'I'm so done with these challenges' but gawd it's hard not to write one at this time of year since this is where it all started for me...this owc three years ago so it's like an anniversary for me, but I wish there was a way to really remain anonymous. I mean, some readers in here have a way of knowing who wrote what from the get-go. So if any of you techy people want to give some tips on how to keep a pdf anonymous, I'd sure like to know.

I also agree about 'not' reading the posts until you've read and commented. I KNOW that if a script gets a review...even the first review that is bad for whatever reason, it greatly effects how others read/feel about it and comment on it.

It's been an iffy decision... to write or not to write in this thing.

DON....are we allowed to cowrite a script with a friend this time?
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 161 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 8:01pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from Pale Yellow
I also agree about 'not' reading the posts until you've read and commented. I KNOW that if a script gets a review...even the first review that is bad for whatever reason, it greatly effects how others read/feel about it and comment on it.  


One way around this would be to make all comments unviewable until the end of voting. I'm no forum tech wizard, so no idea if this is even possible or more trouble than it's worth for Don.
It would be interesting to see how diverse the comments varied from each other at the end of the challenge.  It could also help keep writers who have received harsh criticism from retaliating, throwing in the towel early and giving up on reading other scripts.  It might prolong healthy interest.



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 162 - 254
Pale Yellow
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 8:04pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
2083
Posts Per Day
1.37
Well, Don does enough work posting all these I'm sure...hate to make it more work for the Don...but even if the comments weren't released until it was time for voting or something. I know the comments help the writer, but they sway opinions I believe so much that often it affects the outcome. Wonder if there is a way to post the comments after the voting. Now that would be something
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 163 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 8:19pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from Scoob


One way around this would be to make all comments unviewable until the end of voting. I'm no forum tech wizard, so no idea if this is even possible or more trouble than it's worth for Don.
It would be interesting to see how diverse the comments varied from each other at the end of the challenge.  It could also help keep writers who have received harsh criticism from retaliating, throwing in the towel early and giving up on reading other scripts.  It might prolong healthy interest.

That's how MP was done and I think most people who participated over there would agree that Chris came up with a SUPREME voting system. The only problem here though, would be that this is not a contest with votes. Just a challenge. It's supposed to be fun.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 164 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 8:58pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I don't read the comments of others until after I've posted my own.

That seems to provide the most objective approach.




Revision History (2 edits; 1 reasons shown)
RayW  -  October 15th, 2014, 12:00am
Logged
Private Message Reply: 165 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 9:01pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from RayW
I:
I don't waste brain cells trying to figure out who wrote what.
Although I understand the up-skirt photo "sport" in it I do not appreciate the gross rudeness of it.
People bring what they got.
I've got better things to do than to play stupid games.




In the old days when we used to have less than 20 entries, guessing who wrote what was the most fun part. Back then, we all knew each other and tried to guess by writing style.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 166 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 9:19pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
I think the most fun is to see if/when any of these actually get produced!

http://vimeo.com/83864136
  




Revision History (1 edits)
Don  -  October 16th, 2014, 1:36pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 167 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 9:21pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
Yeah, it is supposed to be a “one week challenge”.  The challenge ( not a serious competition) being: Write a short script based on a theme in a week.

I think that’s challenging enough, especially considering people have other scripts to write and jobs to do.   Whenever I used to enter I enjoyed the idea of having a bit of fun. Time to leave the “serious” stuff aside.

Without having a pop at RayW... I’m gonna have a pop at RayW.  It’s not your contest. You might be looking for “talent”, but why not just look in the shorts section? Why concentrate your attention so hard on a light hearted challenge where writers can have a bit of fun?

You draw up all these must do’s and must not’s and expect gold from writers who probably, and rightly so, don’t take this contest too seriously.

I look at the OWC as a bit of fun, a break from the serious side of the business.  I think that’s healthy for everyone, from experienced writers to those just starting out.
This doesn't mean I think anyone should get away with just sending in any old crap. But I look at the OWC as a bit of harmless fun. If you are looking for something to produce, I don’t understand why you wait all year when there are probably plenty of prime fish to catch in the short section.



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 168 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 9:25pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35
Ray, WTF man? You're killing our spirit here and the OWC hasn't even been announced yet. It's supposed to be fun.

If someone wants to write something to be produced, just write a short and post it in the shorts section. That's where most shorts get "discovered" anyway.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 169 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 9:32pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
I think Don should make this OWC a high budget horror about a planet hopping witch stranded in some otherworldly universe, where she needs to obtain several gold ( and they need to be real gold) bars from costume-budget-sucking aliens so she can return to her budget-draining home world.



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 170 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:10pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Fix problems before they're problems - or - fix them afterwards.
Pick one.




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 15th, 2014, 12:00am
Logged
Private Message Reply: 171 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:10pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



WOW...WTF?  REally?  You get me?  

Always...ALWAYS amazes me how peeps take everythign so out of contect and get so offended when someone trys to help and give them actual, honest critique of what they wrote.

I probably shouldn't post a single comment, but damnit, i will partake, and if I don't give back, that's not fair or in the spirit of the challenge.  BUT, it seems pretty apparent, peeps only want positive feedback, and in reality, BS, glowing praise, and you all know I just can't do that.

Not sure what to do about this, but I guess I should try to refrain from giving any feedback at all.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 172 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:15pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
RayW, what have you produced so far?
It might be beneficial to boast about having completed a project, some writers might want to impress the King Of Everyfuckingthing.







Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 173 - 254
EWall433
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:16pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
423
Posts Per Day
0.11
I disagree with the premise that exposure to other people’s opinions makes your own opinion less informed. It’s quite the opposite. As a writer, I like it when people debate a particular point on my thread. If no one could respond to previous comments, you’d rarely get more than surface level impressions.

As a reviewer the trick is to form your opinion independently and really understand why you feel that way before reading the other posts. If you don’t, then yeah... your opinion will be shaped by the comments. But if you really like a script and know exactly why, is someone’s negative review of page 1 really going to change your mind. Plus, if you’re aware of the issue enough to proactively avoid comments, you probably wouldn’t be part of the problem anyway. Similar to harsh reviews, it’s the people who don’t care that’ll be the worst offenders.

As far as scripts being unfairly torpedoed, I think that’ll come down to people not being asses in the very first post. A polite and constructive, “This wasn’t for me and here’s why…” isn’t going to kill a script. “THIS MUST BE A PISSER”, as the very first words might.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 174 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:22pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Can we say "THIS MUST BE A PISSER and here's why... "?  




Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 15th, 2014, 12:02am
Logged
Private Message Reply: 175 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:23pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from Dreamscale
WOW...WTF?  REally?  You get me?  

Always...ALWAYS amazes me how peeps take everythign so out of contect and get so offended when someone trys to help and give them actual, honest critique of what they wrote.

I probably shouldn't post a single comment, but damnit, i will partake, and if I don't give back, that's not fair or in the spirit of the challenge.  BUT, it seems pretty apparent, peeps only want positive feedback, and in reality, BS, glowing praise, and you all know I just can't do that.

Not sure what to do about this, but I guess I should try to refrain from giving any feedback at all.


Jeff, I think they want a little more than " I read half a page, this is shit, you can't write, I'm out."
If you can't understand that, or see why that causes issues, than it's probably for the best that you do stay out.



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 176 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:27pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from RayW

I was just wondering the same "WTF? It seems some here WANT nubes to fail just just so that fun can be had correcting them?!"

Why would anyone want anyone to fail? I think you have totally misunderstood that part.


Quoted from RayW
BUT... !
I'm killing the fun by heading them off down the path of avoiding fundamental format mistakes, thus denying them the "fun" of having a couple dozen reviews stating the same things, like "Don't do this" and "Don't do that."
Wheee!
Everyone's having fun, then.

I remember my first OWC. It was crap as far as screenplays go, but the story itself was decent and some people still remember that one to this day. FORTUNATELY for me, some very nice people told me what I could improve writing wise. I took those comments to heart and eagerly awaited the next OWC. I wanted to do a better job the next go around...and so it went. I slowly got better and better. All thanks to the kind people here at SS.


Quoted from RayW
Fix problems before they're problems - or - fix them afterwards.
Pick one.

Encourage story tellers to tell stories. Just guide them in the format they're trying to tell their stories.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 177 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:35pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from RayW

Nothing.

Who have you helped today?
What single sentence of useful information have you provided?



And you call yourself a producer?
That writers need to impress you?

Really, Ray, really?



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 178 - 254
mmmarnie
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:36pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
1085
Posts Per Day
0.22
I have an idea. When giving a review, pretend it's your Mother who wrote the screenplay. You want to help her get better, of course, but you don't want to make her feel like sh1t in the process. Speak to us like we're your mother. Unless you're Norman Bates. And there may be a few of those here.


boop
Logged
Private Message Reply: 179 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:37pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Grandma Bear
Why would anyone want anyone to fail? I think you have totally misunderstood that part.

Well, let's back up the truck first.
I don't give reviews that flame the writer, so all of this attention coming down on me today is pointless.

So far in this thread I've provided dos and don'ts that will decrease the flames others will surely direct to nubes - and for that I've been persecuted for, as if I was preventing someone else from the fun of correcting nubes after they've written some basic format errors.
W?
T?
F?

I'm the bad guy here?! Really? Pfft.



Quoted Text
Encourage story tellers to tell stories. Just guide them in the format they're trying to tell their stories.

And I'm bad for guiding story tellers in the format BEFORE they make mistakes... ?
I'm taking away the fun?




Logged
Private Message Reply: 180 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:39pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Scoob
And you call yourself a producer?
That writers need to impress?

A) You dodged my question.
B) Quote me on your statements, either one. Please. Go find it.  




Logged
Private Message Reply: 181 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:53pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Grandma Bear
Yes, actually...  

GAH!
You're killing me.

Since when has it been a good healthy thing for a "Newer, inexperienced writers who try to challenge themselves" to receive avoidable admonishments?
How is that encouraging to their fledgling screenwriting?

Code

EXT. CAMPGROUND FIELD - DAY
Banner over two tables reads "WELCOME SCREENWRITERS! REVIEWS HERE"

At each table is a line of writers, a short line of younger 
writers on the left, a long line of older writers on the right.

YOUNG WRITER, 20, shiny and hopeful, looks over at the long line 
of the older writers. Whisper-yells to that line.

			YOUNG WRITER
		Hey! Why are you old guys all 
		standing in that long line?

OLDER WRITER, 50, comfy and peaceful, shares mixed glances and 
smiles with his fellow older writers. Turns to talk.

			OLDER WRITER
		This is the line for ten beatings
		on our reviews.

			YOUNGER WRITER
		What? Why do you want to get 
		ten beatings?!

Other older writers chuckle amongst themselves.

			OLDER WRITER
		I'm afraid you're in the line for 
		fifty beatings.

Older writers start sniggering and laughing.







Revision History (1 edits)
RayW  -  October 14th, 2014, 11:11pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 182 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:56pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from RayW

Since when has it been a good healthy thing for a "Newer, inexperienced writers who try to challenge themselves" to receive avoidable admonishments?
How is that encouraging to their fledgling screenwriting?


Well, going back to that first OWC that I entered in -06, I might not have entered anything if someone had posted the criteria for entering the way you have in this OWC...


Logged
Private Message Reply: 183 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 10:58pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from RayW

A) You dodged my question.
B) Quote me on your statements, either one. Please. Go find it.  



None of those questions relate to the conversation. They are "Help me, I'm drowning" cards you decided to pick out.

You are of weak character. That's evident.

The fact you can't even admit you're not "as low as some of these writers" but " I can't write as good as them" is some issue you have to come to terms with. " I'll be a producer and show them all!" ... Yeah.
You're pretty sad.
Pathetic.

And, I'm not being mean. I just don't like people like you that screw writers over just to forge their way ahead. But you're not even at that point.  You're like an aimless zombie. The sooner you realize that, the better.
How's that for fair criticism?



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 184 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:13pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
A) You're still dodging my question.
B) You've failed to provide any citation of "And you call yourself a producer? That writers need to impress you?"

How's that for weak character?



Logged
Private Message Reply: 185 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:15pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
Find it out in your database.



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 186 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:16pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Grandma Bear
Well, going back to that first OWC that I entered in -06, I might not have entered anything if someone had posted the criteria for entering the way you have in this OWC...

So... what I've posted is erroneous or too difficult to achieve? Industry standard stuff?

Shall I go back and remove it?
For you I will.





Logged
Private Message Reply: 187 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:17pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Scoob
Find it out in your database.


Dodge.

Again.




Logged
Private Message Reply: 188 - 254
LC
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:18pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34
I think Ray has good intentions.

The thing is I don't see any newbs following this thread. You could argue they're reading it and haven't signed up yet, but I doubt it very much.

I found the discussion board on SS purely by accident from the home page when I was looking for a pro-screenplay, which I think quite a few people do. For the most part I believe Newbs likewise just happen across the OWC and, like I said before, they think ooh, I'll have a go at this.

Most of us recognize newb scripts when we read them - the capable script writers are obvious. When reading scripts that are clearly newb efforts we should go easy with 'constructive criticism' - not just say, this is shit, I'm out. If you think the latter (bagging it out) is even remotely helpful you're misguided and only blowing your own trumpet.

As for now don't you all think we should get back to some enthusiasm re what's just around the corner? I do.


Logged
Private Message Reply: 189 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:27pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from RayW

So... what I've posted is erroneous or too difficult to achieve? Industry standard stuff?

No. Not at all....but there might be some great new storytellers out there that just haven't got the hang of industry standards yet and we don't want to scare them away.


Quoted from RayW
Shall I go back and remove it?
For you I will.

...... I had a comment, but I'm a mod now.  

Let's just ease up. This is supposed to be fun. I'm looking forward to your end of the OWC analytics. I always read those...and appreciate them.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 190 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:28pm Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from RayW


Dodge.

Again.



Who have I helped today?
I helped many people today and they wont even know it and I don't expect a thanks for it.  I also helped someone with something we are working on together and I think we will make a great film out of it.  

You want "Thanks" all the time. That's you. You need to be thanked. I'm pretty sure you're verging on sociopath status...

" Look at what I've done for you all! All my graphs! All my studies! Look at how amazing I am!"
Yeah...
Great.

A producer that only works with one week scripts. (why?). Has never produced anything before. Thinks everyone needs to write about his small budget shithole. Talks crap constantly. Yeah... this guy,  is gold.

I can't wait for the OWC so I can work with RayW!!! OMG!!!! This guy opens so many dooors!!!
Yup.
Not gonna happen.
You might be well off telling writers to wake up and stop dreaming, but RayW, you need to do the same.



Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 191 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 14th, 2014, 11:41pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36

Quoted from Grandma Bear
No. Not at all....but there might be some great new storytellers out there that just haven't got the hang of industry standards yet and we don't want to scare them away.

Gah!

It takes an equal amount of effort to write a OWC right as it does wrong and will receive only a fifth of the beatings when reviews come out.

Code

EXT. CAMPGROUND FIELD - DAY
Banner over two tables reads "WELCOME SCREENWRITERS! REVIEWS HERE"

At each table is a line of writers, a short line of younger 
writers on the left, a long line of older writers on the right.

YOUNG WRITER, 20, shiny and hopeful, looks over at the long line 
of the older writers. Whisper-yells to that line.

			YOUNG WRITER
		Hey! Why are you old guys all 
		standing in that long line?

OLDER WRITER, 50, comfy and peaceful, shares mixed glances and 
smiles with his fellow older writers. Turns to talk.

			OLDER WRITER
		This is the line for ten beatings
		on our reviews.

			YOUNGER WRITER
		What? Why do you want to get 
		ten beatings?!

Other older writers chuckle amongst themselves.

			OLDER WRITER
		I'm afraid you're in the line for 
		fifty beatings.

Older writers start sniggering and laughing.




Quoted Text
...... I had a comment, but I'm a mod now.  

Oh, I assure you I've never not payed attention to that and will always respect that special power as an aside to the respect that I have have for YOU personally.

I'll just go start deleting stuff.


Quoted Text
Let's just ease up. This is supposed to be fun. I'm looking forward to your end of the OWC analytics. I always read those...and appreciate them.  

Yeah, well...
Somehow what started as Phil telling peeps to not leave sh!t reviews has become perverted into "Ray's freaking out the whole event" (mutter, mumble something about helping people before they make mistakes.)

And you're going to be sorely disappointed.
I'm taking this OWC off, and will be pumping out the same review approach as everyone else.
No analytics this OWC.
Just... whatever I think of.

And they'll be nice, useful, like they most always are anyway.

Sorry.  


So, let's go run, skip, and hop buck nekid down to the submission line!
LET THOSE FREAK FLAGS FLY, PEOPLE!!!



Logged
Private Message Reply: 192 - 254
EWall433
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:09am Report to Moderator
New



Posts
423
Posts Per Day
0.11
Truth is, while bad format is noticeable it doesn’t bother me. What bothers me is sentences that don’t make sense, confused visuals that make it hard to picture anything, and dialogue that’s so ‘off the nose’ it has ceased meaning anything at all.

So unless you’ve got a link for all that, you’re not going to save anyone from anything. The newbies will likely have a lot of issues even if they nail the format. You can’t explain the mechanics of a bike to a child and expect them not to fall down the first time they try to peddle it. Of course they’re going to fall. All Phil’s saying is, we should try our best not to laugh.

Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 193 - 254
bert
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:09am Report to Moderator
Administrator


Buy the ticket, take the ride

Location
That's me in the corner
Posts
4233
Posts Per Day
0.61
What on earth are you guys even arguing about?  I have totally lost track, but it seems kind of silly.

People are saying try to be nice.  Who disagrees?

People are saying try to use good format.  Who disagrees?

Why are you working yourselves into this big froth?


Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!
Logged
Private Message Reply: 194 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:35am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
I think Ray goes on too much about being a producer.
Me and some others kinda questioned the point of the OWC.
One camp thinks it's fun and good, the other thinks its ... gonna be made into a film. The OWC is just for laughs, light entertainment after a torrid year of working and writing hard.
The debate talked about why the OWC is fun and good and a break for writers, the wannabe producer said what he said.
Think we concluded with that.
Much ado about nothing.

I mean, in all respect to RayW, he does not act like a producer. He's a jilted writer. I think as soon as he comes to terms with that, it will benefit him and he will grow out of it. But he wants to make movies out of his bedroom. He's acting silly. He needs a slapdown more than any writer.




Revision History (3 edits; 1 reasons shown)
Scoob  -  October 15th, 2014, 12:50am
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 195 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:53am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
Now not to make fun of RayW, I appreciate he's taken a lot of time to do what he does, but it's kind of pointless.
You can make stats on all things, but you need someone human to write a story.  He just wants robots... to make a low budget garage-set movie.

And even if this dreamer had the funds... he'd blow it.

So RayW, why don't you come back down to planet earth with the rest of us. You're not a producer. You're a dreamer. Stop thinking you're above anyone else and come back down to this level.

You might learn a few things.




Revision History (5 edits; 1 reasons shown)
Scoob  -  October 15th, 2014, 1:22am
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 196 - 254
dead by dawn
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 1:20am Report to Moderator
New



Posts
149
Posts Per Day
0.04

Quoted from EWall433
Truth is, while bad format is noticeable it doesn’t bother me.


I'm glad somebody said it.  

I hate "technical reviews" - the kind where the reader has only checked out 2 or 3 pages, put the script down, and goes on a tangent about formatting.  Don't these people get tired of regurgitating the same old bullshit (formatting)?  Can't you explain something so many times before you want to blow your brains out?  I mean, how many times can you read a page or two of someone's script, and then spew the same shit you literally just said 500 posts before?

Don't get me wrong.  I spot all of the issues that could be spotted as I'm reading too, but I'm not going to waste my time explaining what the fuck is wrong with every little thing down to capping the intro of characters and all of that shit.  It's a waste of fucking time.  One, most of these "newb writers" don't even see what you're saying.  Two, the other half of them are stupid, ignorant jerk-offs who are rigid as fuck and continuously spout the same thing:  Well, Tarantino does it, so it must be fine.  [Insert some other famous writer/director] formats his script however he wants, so that means I can do whatever I want, blah blah blah blah.

You know what I do when I open a feature with bad formatting?  I shut the fucking thing out.  I don't even comment on anything, though, I will admit that sometimes I'm so desperate for a good story (I hate it when SS is dead), I will get past the bad formatting - unless it's atrocious - and try to read the script anyway.  But I do gotta say most of the time it's not even bad format that makes me put down a script!  It's that first action line or opening scene that is just so fucking bland, and I mean bland as all fuck.  It really is ridiculous how many scripts I open up and the very first scene is such a goddamn snooze fest...

Pia has mentioned the words "fun" and "in the old days" a couple of times and I gotta say I sure do miss the old days on here (I have been a member on and off for some years).  I miss the days when "technical reviews" didn't run rampant and everyone just delved into character & story instead.  The old fun days when you logged on and saw that people like Bert or Abe from LA commented on a script and you couldn't wait to see what they had to say about it because you knew they really had something to say other than 'I started reading this but put it down after seeing FADE IN: on the right side of the page.'




Logged
Private Message Reply: 197 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 1:33am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43

Quoted from dead by dawn
Pia has mentioned the words "fun" and "in the old days" a couple of times and I gotta say I sure do miss the old days on here (I have been a member on and off for some years).  I miss the days when "technical reviews" didn't run rampant and everyone just delved into character & story instead.  

The old fun days when you logged on and saw that people like Bert or Abe from LA commented on a script and you couldn't wait to see what they had to say about it because you knew they really had something to say other than 'I started reading this but put it down after seeing FADE IN: on the right side of the page.'


I have to agree. Nuff said.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 198 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 1:38am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
Dead By Dawn is right.
I started off with some horrific terrible stories. And I mean, they are terrible by screenwriting standards. Look up at my crappy scripts if you need to lol.
But thanks to encouraging words from here, I went on.
Now, I'm quite content and am working on something that's not quite my dream job but a sure passage towards it.

If I get that particular job, then I think my life is complete, haha.
But now it is a possibility... insanely real.

I;m working on five different projects, one is taking the main at the moment , but from the guy who wrote "Season Of The Devil" back in 2003/2002 and posted in here just looking for a chance... and Malevolent 1 2 and 3... those reviewers made me feel good. A reason for writing. I would never have gone on if they said " this is shit".
I owe this site everything.
If you're good, I think you will get a deal

So then to listen to this jap-ass,jackass, RayW, talk about how writers owe him... pfft... get the fuck out.

The last thing a writer needs is a bullshitter. The last thing they need is a bullshtting producer.




Revision History (2 edits; 1 reasons shown)
Scoob  -  October 15th, 2014, 2:03am
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 199 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:03am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Scoob, you just go right ahead and write whatever you want, any way you want.
Society has something just for you.



And just keep tilting after windmills while you're at it.

64, S :https://docs.google.com/spread.....;usp=drive_web#gid=0



Logged
Private Message Reply: 200 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:12am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08

Quoted from RayW
Scoob, you just go right ahead and write whatever you want, any way you want.
Society has something just for you.



And just keep tilting after windmills while you're at it.

64, S :https://docs.google.com/spread.....;usp=drive_web#gid=0


Umm ok ?
I'm right?

You can provide silly cartoons all you like. Facts are you are not a producer.
You have no history. Nothing to back your ridiculous, outlandish claims of making a short script into film.
You, as a producer, are an epic failure. Why would anyone want to work for you? What do you offer?




Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 201 - 254
Scoob
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:24am Report to Moderator
Been Around


Location
UK
Posts
583
Posts Per Day
0.08
Hey,
If that's the way you wanna go, great. Fair play to you, sir.




Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 202 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:24am Report to Moderator
Guest User



I do take the OWC seriously. Aside from the shark one, which is still quite a serious effort and could be easily made. Despite taking it seriously, writing will always be fun for me, it's what I enjoy more than anything else.

I did argue in this thread until I realised Phil only did it to stir up some shit. So I backed away. It's one of those arguments nobody can win. Everyone has their own way of reviewing and should be allowed to say how they really feel without fear of the PC brigade showing up, blaming them for a lack of newbs signing up.

If this forum was a little easier to sign up to, we'd get a lot more people here. Don has it the way he has it, I'm guessing, just for that very reason. He doesn't want any old idiot figuring it out and signing up. If it's just about spammers, there's an easier way of dealing with them than admin-only registration. You simply put a 'must answer' question in the registration process. Something only a human could answer. CAPTCHA does not work.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 203 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:24am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56

Quoted from bert
What on earth are you guys even arguing about?  I have totally lost track, but it seems kind of silly.

People are saying try to be nice.  Who disagrees?

People are saying try to use good format.  Who disagrees?

Why are you working yourselves into this big froth?


agreed

only with a OWC  


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 204 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:38am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
Some people focus on story, some people are more concerned with the technical side of things.


Together you get the best of both worlds.

Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 205 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 4:04am Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20
I'm a noob around here. And I'll be taking part in the OWC.
I've read this thread most days in anticipation and to be honest, I've gotten a good giggle out of it.
I'm pretty sure my formatting will be ok. No doubt people will find something wrong with it though. Right now I'm more concerned about getting a good story written. If I do that and my formatting is acceptable then I'll be happy.

I'll also do my best to review as much as I can and I promise it'll be constructive.

Now, can we stop this silly bickering and all just get along


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 206 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 7:37am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
Inspired by Pia's signature, I've embedded a film version of a previous OWC written by Dogglebe to get us in the mood.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 207 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 7:42am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scoob
One camp thinks it's fun and good, the other thinks its ... gonna be made into a film. The OWC is just for laughs, light entertainment after a torrid year of working and writing hard.


Everything I write, I write for potential production.  I've had two OWC scripts produced and a third recorded as an audio file.  If you write for shits and giggles, then that's all you end up with.



Quoted from Scoob
I mean, in all respect to RayW, he does not act like a producer. He's a jilted writer.


Those who can't do, bitch.


Phil

Logged
e-mail Reply: 208 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 7:50am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from LC
The thing is I don't see any newbs following this thread. You could argue they're reading it and haven't signed up yet, but I doubt it very much.


The following is a pm I've received from a newer member of SS


Quoted Text
It's crazy because I have seen posts like that (and then some).  "Technical reviews" irritate the shit out of me.  

Don't these people get tired of regurgitating formatting rules?  Can't you explain something so many times before you want to blow your brains out?  I mean, how many times can you read a page or two of someone's script, and then spew the same shit you literally just said 500 posts before?

Don't get me wrong.  I notice issues as I'm reading too, but I'm not going to waste my time explaining what the fuck is wrong with every little thing down to capping the intro of characters and whatnot.  

"Technical reviews" as I call them have also been running rampant around here for quite a while.  It sucks because this place has always been more interesting and more fun when people were delving into CHARACTER & STORY.  I am tired of these technical reviews after they have only just read one or two pages.  ONE OR TWO PAGES!!!!  Give me a break.

I want to scream this so bad in the October thread, but I'm afraid I'll get shit for it....



"Afraid to take shit for it."

That sums it up.


Phil



Logged
e-mail Reply: 209 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 8:52am Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
The thing is...Ray is right.


Just get the format correct, and then everyone WILL concentrate on the story.


Is that really so controversial?
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 210 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 9:55am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scar Tissue Films
Just get the format correct, and then everyone WILL concentrate on the story.

Is that really so controversial?


While formatting is important, Rick, it's not the most important.  Yet, there are those who will comment that the formatting is off, or there's a misspelling in the log line and leave it at that.  Nothing about the story or the characters.  And story and characters are more important than where FADE IN: is on the left or right side of the page.

This isn't to say that people should format their script any way they want.  There's always going to be some asshole who shows up here and will insist that their revolutionary way of formatting will take the industry by storm when, in fact, makes it very difficult to read.  These people usually last a few weeks here before they pack up their script and leave.  And I say good riddance to them.

But for the people who try--actually try--we should give them a chance and not discourage them with petty complaints.  There's a mispelled word on the first page?  Did you struggle to figure out what the writer intended to say?  No?  Then move the fuck on!  

Despite the few little problems in that short, there could be a good story in there.


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 211 - 254
Gum
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 11:22am Report to Moderator
Been Around



Location
Some travelling Circus...
Posts
832
Posts Per Day
0.41

Quoted from bert
… and tacking on a patronizing "congratulations" for entering does nothing to diminish what went before.  In fact, quite the opposite.


Yup… guilty. Even tried to recant after I realized how much of a tool I was. I’m also guilty of leaving constructive criticism as well, but I think the former outweighs how shitty you actually make someone feel. Haven’t done that since…

I mainly tune in to the OWC’s to see who can come up with the most entertaining, clever, original idea based on the theme announced, but I’ll admit it, I’ve spewed forth my own annoying bullshit regarding someone’s formatting… so unnecessary.

I know my first OWC was an abortion, and I seriously got ripped a new one for the formatting. It brought me down man; I crawled under the bathroom sink, curled up into a fetal position and cried myself to sleep. When it happened for the second time, I simply grabbed a tube of cooling gel and carried on, only next time (I thought), I won’t make the same mistakes… and I didn’t, things starting looking up.

Theeeen, someone decided they wanted to call me out about the way I think, write, review, and even view the world… whatever. Did I say anything?  Nope, I did a little research and found out about this person; who they actually were that is.  It was then that I realized that this person had bigger issues than me, and I thought I’d leave it to chance until everyone else caught on as to the false pretence this person was/is selling… whatever, moving on.

Then I seriously wanted to write a feature and tried to have a go at the 7 week challenge, I couldn’t bring it for many reasons, but the main reason was… I simply have not figured out how to properly construct a feature. The ten pages I did submit, however, were not a failure in my eyes simply because every single person that commented on my script gave me not only positive feedback, they also left a kind word about my writing, voice, and style (I’ll have to chime into that thread one of these days, lol). Anyways, this is a far cry from my first OWC, and I know emphatically it’s because I took all the beatings I got about NOT doing it right, and took that as constructive feedback.

My scripts still need work, allot of work… but I’m working on that. These OWC’s do amazing things to fine tune one’s writing.

My message I guess, is to newbs (wherever you may be… mind you, I’m still new to this) is take everything as constructive criticism, everything...
Logged
Private Message Reply: 212 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 11:56am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Scar Tissue Films
Just get the format correct, and then everyone WILL concentrate on the story.

Is that really so controversial?


It is if you think formatting takes presidence over story.


Phil

Logged
e-mail Reply: 213 - 254
Scar Tissue Films
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:01pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients


Posts
3382
Posts Per Day
0.63
You alright there, Phil?

I think you already replied to that one!

I understand where you're coming from, but I'm with the attitude above...take the beatings and come back stronger. I like technical reviews...they've helped improve my writing considerably recently.

PS How is your health these days? Hope you're well.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 214 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:28pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



Surgery went well, but that ws never a major thing for me.  Will have another minor surgery after the New Years.

Right now, my big concern is when Sixteen Minutes will be finished.  The director edited a lot out of my script.  I'm curious what it will look like.

How are things with you?


Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 215 - 254
Demento
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:33pm Report to Moderator
Been Around



Posts
946
Posts Per Day
0.25
Maybe there should be a link with script formatting rules. An official link that everyone uses. So when someone makes mistakes a reviewer can just post the link and say, "you have some formatting issues, check this link". Then the rest of their review they can focus on the story. This way it doesn't come off as harsh.

If people see that link everywhere, in their own threads and it others eventually they'll read it. So everyone will begin following the same set of rules and everyone will be happy. There will be no "formatting criticism" in reviews and people will get pointed in the right direction. Instead of criticising their formatting errors contained in the script itself and the writer learning from that review, they'll learn from the link about ALL formatting rules and hopefully write in a format that pleases people on this board. So there will be no more stupid posts about people bailing after one page.

Just an idea.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 216 - 254
oJOHNNYoNUTSo
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 12:51pm Report to Moderator
Been Around



Posts
817
Posts Per Day
0.19
This thread is not getting me stoked for a One Week Challenge.  
Logged
Private Message Reply: 217 - 254
JonnyBoy
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 1:03pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
London, England
Posts
994
Posts Per Day
0.18
Why do people choose to blast entries on formatting errors, rather than taking the time to work through and constructively critique plot, character, storytelling, etc?

Because it's easier. Much easier. But they still get to have a say. And 'twas ever thus.

(Hello everyone, by the way. Been a while!)


Guess who's back? Back again?
Logged Offline
Site Private Message Reply: 218 - 254
CalebHart
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 1:06pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from oJOHNNYoNUTSo
This thread is not getting me stoked for a One Week Challenge.  


What'd ya expect? ...a box of kittens?



Peek-a-boo.

Logged
e-mail Reply: 219 - 254
oJOHNNYoNUTSo
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 1:26pm Report to Moderator
Been Around



Posts
817
Posts Per Day
0.19

Quoted from CalebHart


What'd ya expect? ...a box of kittens?



Peek-a-boo.



If I had to be 100% honest right now... that totally melts my heart. I'm not even kidding.

I feel better now.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 220 - 254
dead by dawn
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:41pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
149
Posts Per Day
0.04

Quoted from Scar Tissue Films


Just get the format correct, and then everyone WILL concentrate on the story.

Is that really so controversial?


I assumed this side of the argument would make an appearance, but in all honesty, it's not even relevant.  Maybe it would be if we were talking about VETERAN MEMBERS, but we aren't.  We are talking about beginning writers who don't even show up to see what was said about their script, we are talking about jerk-offs who could give a flying fuck less because they're so stubborn in their ways -- Remember, since famous writer/director does it, it's OK!


Quoted from Demento


So there will be no more stupid posts about people bailing after one page.


We're not really getting rid of the problem because I can totally picture the stupid posts remaining.  Except this time instead of so-and-so wasting his fucking time going so into detail why he bailed after 1 or 2 pages, so-and-so will bombard every new script thread with that link, a stupid smiley face, and a "best of luck!" and believe me, it'll happen, because it's way easier than writing a novel, covering every trivial mistake that they spotted.  Shit, I think that would aggravate me more than the technical reviews themselves.

How about instead:  vets (as in people who have been around here long enough to know a thing or two) only comment and help other vets!  Stop commenting on new scripts until the author actually shows his face, has reviewed the work of others, and has proven that they're a nice enough guy who's worth the time and effort to help.  It'll aid other writers and scripts that need attention instead of burying them in the portal, like Static Town by Kevin R.  Go read that guy's script instead of some jerk-off who has no intentions of learning the craft.  Kev's a great guy.  He has the potential to be a great writer, he can take a negative review like a gentleman, and he'll even give you a return read, I'm sure.  

Yeah, that sounds good, let's start helping each other.





Revision History (1 edits)
dead by dawn  -  October 15th, 2014, 3:03pm
Logged
Private Message Reply: 221 - 254
Stumpzian
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 2:56pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
North Carolina
Posts
662
Posts Per Day
0.18
I've been reading all this back and forth for the past couple of days. Very entertaining!

For the record, I will be posting my first short in this OWC.  I'll get the format as close to right as I can.

P.S. I will enter IF I can think of a good story. For me, that's the motivator. If not, I won't take up anyone's time.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 222 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 3:20pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from dead by dawn
I assumed this side of the argument would make an appearance, but in all honesty, it's not even relevant.  Maybe it would be if we were talking about VETERAN MEMBERS, but we aren't.  We are talking about beginning writers who don't even show up to see what was said about their script, we are talking about jerk-offs who could give a flying fuck less because they're so stubborn in their ways -- Remember, since famous writer/director does it, it's OK!


Unfortunately, people of all skills of writing can be jerk-off.  This site has a history of people who ill insist that their scripts are perfectly formatted and perfectly written.  They don't want to hear criticism from you.  Only praise.



Quoted from dead by dawn
How about instead:  vets (as in people who have been around here long enough to know a thing or two) only comment and help other vets!  Stop commenting on new scripts until the author actually shows his face, has reviewed the work of others, and has proven that they're a nice enough guy who's worth the time and effort to help.  It'll aid other writers and scripts that need attention instead of burying them in the portal, like Static Town by Kevin R.  Go read that guy's script instead of some jerk-off who has no intentions of learning the craft.  Kev's a great guy.  He has the potential to be a great writer, he can take a negative review like a gentleman, and he'll even give you a return read, I'm sure.


Two problems with this idea, Joe:

1.  The scripts for the OWC are posted anonymously.  Names are not attached to them for about two weeks.  This anonymous decision was made after a 'vet' complained that people were giving him negative reviews because of who he was and not because of the script.

2.  I like helping the newer people.  I can't imagine that I'm the only one.



Phil


Logged
e-mail Reply: 223 - 254
dead by dawn
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 3:57pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
149
Posts Per Day
0.04

Quoted from dogglebe


Unfortunately, people of all skills of writing can be jerk-off.  This site has a history of people who ill insist that their scripts are perfectly formatted and perfectly written.  They don't want to hear criticism from you.  Only praise.


True - but during my entire time on SS, I have only encountered beginning writers who are like this.  I have only ran into one person who you might consider a vet - who still posts here on a regular basis - who has a jerk-off counter for everything.


Quoted from dogglebe

1.  The scripts for the OWC are posted anonymously.  Names are not attached to them for about two weeks.  This anonymous decision was made after a 'vet' complained that people were giving him negative reviews because of who he was and not because of the script.


The OWC I'm not really concerned about.  I'm more concerned about the board overall....


Quoted from dogglebe

2.  I like helping the newer people.  I can't imagine that I'm the only one.


Phil

I like helping new people too, but man, can they be raging pricks.  A few months ago, I started to get harassed by this guy on here.  He made a few posts in public, but he liked to send me PMs just tearing into me.  He was so obsessed with being a dick to me that he even stalked me on Facebook!  This has happened to me before (new members harassing me through PMs), but this one was the worst.  You can understand my weariness when it comes to trying to help newer members.  There's nothing wrong with it, but most of the time they're just jerk-offs - or, like I said before, they don't even show their face at all.  That's why I'd rather have some new guy sign up, let him mingle for a while and see how he reacts to things, let him display that he's an OK dude first, before I even pick up his script and read it.  Until then, let's try and help out the vets around here who have been around for ages, the ones who are solid, cool people, because it irritates me seeing their scripts get buried while other garbage gets more attention.

Logged
Private Message Reply: 224 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 5:09pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



I don't like helping strangers. I like helping people I know. When I throw down words for the newbs I see it as helping out the site. They need to understand format, and one of the best ways of helping them understand is to take an action block and rewrite it alongside an explanation.

I also do that because I believe this site should be about give and take. One shouldn't come in here expecting free reviews. It has to be earned. If a new member can't be arsed with that then fuck 'em. They don't deserve help.

If a member here is so incensed at a review concentrating on poor structure and format, even bad grammar, then why not simply throw down a highly detailed review on the story and character developments right afterwards? Problem solved.

Personally, I can't get past bad writing and bad dialogue. I can't read more than a page of it and I shouldn't feel obliged to. What has that newb ever done for me? I will give a little advice and see if they stick around. If they even show up at all. Mostly, it's wasted breath...

In regards to the OWC, I will read the entire script. They're only shorts and most will be written by the regular members.

There seems to be two conversations here... one in regards to newbs and another in regards to OWC's.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 225 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 5:11pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43

Quoted from dead by dawn
That's why I'd rather have some new guy sign up, let him mingle for a while and see how he reacts to things, let him display that he's an OK dude first, before I even pick up his script and read it.  Until then, let's try and help out the vets around here who have been around for ages, the ones who are solid, cool people, because it irritates me seeing their scripts get buried while other garbage gets more attention.


All the newbies aren't like that guy, DbD. People will read what interests them.

I too have had my fine scripts ignored while everybody else read some other garbage, thus ignoring my gem of a peach of a pearl of a screenplay. The injustice of it. Woe was me. Ho hum. The buggers are still ignoring them even as I type.

Tis how it goes.

Anyways, is there going to be an October OWC, or is all this moot? That'd be quite funny.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 226 - 254
Grandma Bear
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 5:42pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Swamp...
Posts
7967
Posts Per Day
1.35

Quoted from rendevous

Anyways, is there going to be an October OWC, or is all this moot? That'd be quite funny.


Nah. Sorry. I was just trying to stir up a bit of fun.  


Logged
Private Message Reply: 227 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 5:51pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43
Succeeded too. Naughty.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 228 - 254
dead by dawn
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 7:02pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
149
Posts Per Day
0.04

Quoted from rendevous

I too have had my fine scripts ignored while everybody else read some other garbage, thus ignoring my gem of a peach of a pearl of a screenplay. The injustice of it. Woe was me. Ho hum. The buggers are still ignoring them even as I type.

R


Yeah, big deal, right?  I get where you're coming from.  I won't argue it.  But I'll stick by my main point.  Reviews that focus solely on 2 pages of format are stupid, annoying, boring, and need to come to a fucking end.  Period.

Logged
Private Message Reply: 229 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 7:15pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from dead by dawn
But I'll stick by my main point.  Reviews that focus solely on 2 pages of format are stupid, annoying, boring, and need to come to a fucking end.  Period.


Get used to it and get ready for it, dude.  You get me?     Thanks for entering/Congrats on entering.

Logged
e-mail Reply: 230 - 254
dead by dawn
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 8:09pm Report to Moderator
New



Posts
149
Posts Per Day
0.04
I won't be entering the OWC, Jeffro.  
Logged
Private Message Reply: 231 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 8:25pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43

Quoted from DbD
Yeah, big deal, right?  I get where you're coming from.  I won't argue it.  But I'll stick by my main point.  Reviews that focus solely on 2 pages of format are stupid, annoying, boring, and need to come to a F**king end.  Period.


Amen to that.


Quoted from DbD
I won't be entering the OWC, Jeffro.


Why not? That's if there is one.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 232 - 254
LC
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 8:32pm Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from rendevous

... That's if there is one. R


Of course there is going to be one, you goose!   There's a thread created for it and an assurance by Don (click on the sub link) that this one won't be about witches.

Mind you the way this thread has gone Don might be sorely tempted to throw the towel in.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 233 - 254
rendevous
Posted: October 15th, 2014, 9:27pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Away

Location
Over there.
Posts
2354
Posts Per Day
0.43
Goose? I've always thought of myself as more of a eejit.

I'm sure you're right. Well, maybe. We'll see.

Now, I have some animals to attend to.

R


Out Of Character - updated


New Used Car

Green

Right Back

The Deuce - OWC - now on STS

Other scripts here
Logged
Site Private Message Reply: 234 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 16th, 2014, 2:36am Report to Moderator
Guest User



I can't remember when this is supposed to start. Is it tomorrow? I hope so. I'm not currently writing anything and I'm starting to suffer from cold turkey. I'm not due a break yet. I suppose the best thing to do would be to get drugged up... some more. Not that I'm advocating that to anyone. Drugs are bad, very, very bad.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 235 - 254
Ryan1
Posted: October 16th, 2014, 2:47am Report to Moderator
Old Timer



Posts
1098
Posts Per Day
0.21

Quoted from DustinBowcot
I can't remember when this is supposed to start. Is it tomorrow? I hope so. I'm not currently writing anything and I'm starting to suffer from cold turkey. I'm not due a break yet. I suppose the best thing to do would be to get drugged up... some more. Not that I'm advocating that to anyone. Drugs are bad, very, very bad.


It's usually announced Friday around 10 est.
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 236 - 254
Dreamscale
Posted: October 16th, 2014, 7:23am Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from dead by dawn
I won't be entering the OWC, Jeffro.  


Ah...the mask has been removed.  Welcome back, bro.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 237 - 254
Pale Yellow
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 5:49am Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Posts
2083
Posts Per Day
1.37
Traditional Skype awaiting the topic over a glass of wine or jaegie anyone???
Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 238 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 7:49am Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20
So we're getting something tonight?


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 239 - 254
LC
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 8:37am Report to Moderator
Administrator



Location
The Great Southern Land
Posts
7644
Posts Per Day
1.34

Quoted from IamGlenn
So we're getting something tonight?


Yep. October 17th - 10:00 pm edt.
Wonder what it will be.  





Logged
Private Message Reply: 240 - 254
IamGlenn
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 9:59am Report to Moderator
January Project Group


:)

Location
Dublin, Ireland, Europe, The World.
Posts
692
Posts Per Day
0.20
I have a nice little idea for a horror in my head. So if I could work it around what we get tonight, that'd be great


Logged Offline
Private Message Reply: 241 - 254
Gum
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 11:17am Report to Moderator
Been Around



Location
Some travelling Circus...
Posts
832
Posts Per Day
0.41

Quoted from IamGlenn
I have a nice little idea for a horror in my head. So if I could work it around what we get tonight, that'd be great


I don’t know what everyone else is thinking, but Don’s snippet of a clue (… a Drum!) got me thinking about jungle drums for no apparent reason. So there I was, there I was, and there I was… the Congo.

Perhaps this is too convoluted to create as a short, but as a feature I had this one rolling around my head after that. If someone out there wants to roll with it I think it would be awesome… Jumanji with blood!

Title: Pornopticon

Logline: When two teens find and play a sinister board game, they release a man who has been trapped in hell for decades, unleashing a night of evil, death, and debauchery that can only be stopped by finishing the game.

The beats are already there… in Jumanji that is. Chop it up, throw in a different flavor... and viola! A game board made from cracked and scarred flesh of tortured souls, dice whittled from human bone, etc… so macabre.

Of course, a drum could mean a sealed off 180Kg oil drum that has some misfortunate ‘Cartel’ stoolie soaking in brine. Covertly making his way up and down the trafficking highway day in and day out within the confines of some stank septic truck,  as in ‘The Counselor’… OK, I’m out of ideas.
Logged
Private Message Reply: 242 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 11:23am Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36



Logged
Private Message Reply: 243 - 254
Gum
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 11:33am Report to Moderator
Been Around



Location
Some travelling Circus...
Posts
832
Posts Per Day
0.41

Quoted from RayW


AhHaaaaaa!

A Drum ---> A Drum?

Non

A Drum ---> Cauldron

Oui?

Merci!
Logged
Private Message Reply: 244 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 12:30pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
Good news, it's on.

Bad news I will be asleep when announced. I tend to have about a day less than most to consider and write.

Hey Don, no one's listening....just send me a sneaky early on this so I can think about it over night. Promise I will keep my mouth shut.

Otherwise, let's see what tomorrow brings.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 245 - 254
dogglebe
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 12:31pm Report to Moderator
Guest User



The drum has nothing to do with the theme/genre of the challenge.  Don refers to the drum to get eveeryone's attention.

And since I started the OWC and ran half of them, Don may have nothing to do with it at all.

MWA-HA-HA-HA



Phil
Logged
e-mail Reply: 246 - 254
DustinBowcot
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 1:31pm Report to Moderator
Guest User




Quoted from Reef Dreamer
Good news, it's on.

Bad news I will be asleep when announced. I tend to have about a day less than most to consider and write.

Hey Don, no one's listening....just send me a sneaky early on this so I can think about it over night. Promise I will keep my mouth shut.

Otherwise, let's see what tomorrow brings.


I think there's quite a few of us in that position... if you get an early look-in then so should everyone else that is UK-based.
Logged
e-mail Reply: 247 - 254
JonnyBoy
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 1:44pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
London, England
Posts
994
Posts Per Day
0.18
Agreed. That's massively late for us!

(To be clear, I'm not ACTUALLY fussed.)

Not that I'm saying I'll take part. What? Oh...


Guess who's back? Back again?

Revision History (1 edits)
JonnyBoy  -  October 17th, 2014, 3:44pm
Logged Offline
Site Private Message Reply: 248 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 2:19pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56
Hey Jonny, Dustin, as if they would.  Just have to man up and cope

Useful excuse if I write a shocker though  


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 249 - 254
RayW
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 2:19pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Freedom

Location
About a thousand years from now.
Posts
1821
Posts Per Day
0.36
Across the years that the collective "we" have been doing these about what percentage of us have stewed about multiple ideas through about Wednesday before ever even beginning to write something Thursday or even Friday?

I'd say well over half.

Six, ten, twelve hours isn't going to matter.

It's all good.

Good luck, everyone!



Logged
Private Message Reply: 250 - 254
Reef Dreamer
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 2:53pm Report to Moderator
Old Timer


Part time writer

Location
The Island of Jersey
Posts
2612
Posts Per Day
0.56

Quoted from RayW
Across the years that the collective "we" have been doing these about what percentage of us have stewed about multiple ideas through about Wednesday before ever even beginning to write something Thursday or even Friday?

I'd say well over half.

Six, ten, twelve hours isn't going to matter.

It's all good.

Good luck, everyone!


As my wife tells me...every little bit matters.  

Back to writing, some seem to knock these things out in a few hours. Me, I need more time. I'm not as natural a writer as many around here. I have to work at it. That's fine, I'm just happy to write, but the extra time is useful. Especially when you are starting with a blank mind.


My scripts  HERE

The Elevator Most Belonging To Alice - Semi Final Bluecat, Runner Up Nashville
Inner Journey - Page Awards Finalist - Bluecat semi final
Grieving Spell - winner - London Film Awards.  Third - Honolulu
Ultimate Weapon - Fresh Voices - second place
IMDb link... http://www.imdb.com/name/nm7062725/?ref_=tt_ov_wr
Logged
Private Message Reply: 251 - 254
DarrenJamesSeeley
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 3:51pm Report to Moderator
January Project Group



Location
Michigan.USA
Posts
1522
Posts Per Day
0.31

Quoted from Pale Yellow
Traditional Skype awaiting the topic over a glass of wine or jaegie anyone???


Name the time I'll be around
DarrenJSeeley87


"I know you want to work for Mo Fuzz. And Mo Fuzz wants you to. But first, I'm going to need to you do something for me... on spec." - Mo Fuzz, Tapeheads, 1988
my scripts on ss : http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1095531482/s-45/#num48
The Art!http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/m-1190561532/s-105/#num106
Logged Offline
Site Private Message AIM YIM Reply: 252 - 254
stevie
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 4:03pm Report to Moderator
Of The Ancients



Location
Down Under
Posts
3441
Posts Per Day
0.61
It's 7 am Saturday morning here in Oz. Usually the announcement is about 2pm my time.

Every OWC I vow to get it done early in the week. But somehow it always goes awry and I frantically try and get it in on the last day. Will see if I can change that!

Be good to be 'distracted' by writing as I've been panicked a bit these last few days trying to organise stuff for a trip to Turkey next year for the 100th anniversary of the Gallipili landings.



Logged
Private Message Reply: 253 - 254
Don
Posted: October 17th, 2014, 4:58pm Report to Moderator
Administrator
Administrator


So, what are you writing?

Location
Virginia
Posts
16449
Posts Per Day
1.93
Hi Guys,

In fairness to the Limes, I've decided to post the Genre and Topic at 10:00 GMT.  Deadline still remains the same, 10/17 11:59 pm edt.

- Don


The Theme and Genre: http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1413583373/


Visit SimplyScripts.com for what is new on the site.

-------------
You will miss 100% of the shots you don't take.
- Wayne Gretzky

Revision History (1 edits)
Don  -  October 17th, 2014, 4:58pm
typo
Logged Offline
Site Private Message Reply: 254 - 254
 Pages: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17 : All
Recommend Print

Locked Board Board Index    October 2014 One Week Challenge  [ previous | next ] Switch to:
Was Portal Recent Posts Home Help Calendar Search Register Login

Forum Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post polls
You may not post attachments
HTML is on
Blah Code is on
Smilies are on


Powered by E-Blah Platinum 9.71B © 2001-2006