Thanks, peeps. Appreciate the support by everyone. I had a few drafts of an email ready for AF, and when I thought Carson was in the mood for sci-fi, I submitted it. But because I'm a complete moron, it was the wrong draft of the email, and in turn, an earlier draft of a script. It's not too bad though, tiny differences excluding the ending. Was just looking for a few comments to improve the script, I don't expect it to be picked, but who knows?

Quoted from nawazm11 Thanks, peeps. Appreciate the support by everyone. I had a few drafts of an email ready for AF, and when I thought Carson was in the mood for sci-fi, I submitted it. But because I'm a complete moron, it was the wrong draft of the email, and in turn, an earlier draft of a script. It's not too bad though, tiny differences excluding the ending. Was just looking for a few comments to improve the script, I don't expect it to be picked, but who knows?

Hey now, Mo!

Don't get down on yourself.
Your script has just as many thumbs up as those comedies do!
It's great to see more Simply Scripts peeps showing up there.
I wonder who will be next...

Regards,
E.D.

YES, Mo!!!!  Good luck!!!

Good Luck!  Hope we get to see some more scripts from here get at least a "worth the read".  

Congrats! Good luck. Hope it leads to more opportunities.

Yeah, big congrats to Mo.

For starters, it's a good story.

And secondly, you've got to love his timing in sending in a sci-fi script with all the hype around Gravity at the moment. He's a clever sod this one.

Good stuff!

Just saw Gravity, btw.  Awesome movie.

Thanks, everyone. I appreciate the support. Memories was originally a script in the vein of City of God, where a lone man stuck in space encounters the phone calls of two writers, which details their romance from when they were children to when they grow old. Although later, I felt as if I blended the two concepts, the story wouldn't work. So I decided to write them separately, the space story became Memories of a Distant Utopia, while the writer story became Memories of a Forgotten Love. Both which are very different in execution, but share a similar theme of identity. I might wrap it with one last Memories script in the trilogy, but have lost my mojo for the past few months. Anyway, thanks again, all!

Good stuff, Mo! I wondered if this was a reworking of your Forgotten Love script that I read a little while back, due to the 'Memories' part of the name.

Does Carson send you an email before he announces the script he decides to read, or do you hear the same time as the general public whether he is reading your work?

Thanks, Toby! We actually hear it when he sends the newsletter so basically everybody hears it at once.

Quoted from nawazm11 Thanks, Toby! We actually hear it when he sends the newsletter so basically everybody hears it at once.

Cool, man! Well you got lots of decent, positive comments... so my fingers are crossed for you!

Quoted from KevinLenihan Thanks, guys, the support means a lot. I'm sure I'm in for a rough ride Saturday with his readers comments. That's ok, I survived the Dreamscale bootcamp a couple years ago, I can take it! You never know, someone might like it. Worth a shot. I'm glad Carson gave it a chance. This script is posted here under Capone and the Great Zombie Massacre. Most of you have read it and given helpful suggestions. Thanks for the much needed and appreciated notes. Jeff, Gary and Janet read it way back before it was posted, special thanks to them.

Just read this. Well done and good luck.

I see The Devil's Jokebook is in the mix - good luck Phil.

Sorry Mo, I seem to have missed your script, but great job in getting in the running.

Good luck Shawn with next week's picks, for What Doesn't Kill You.

Love this script.

Libby

Posted in the other thread as well - but we've got two going now, cause I couldn't find the original the other week.

Best of luck to my bro, Shawn!  You deserve it, man!!!