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George has never been to Detroit so he did a lot of research for his little scene. I do hope it's enjoyed, and I also hope I left it in a precarious enough position for the next person who has to tackle them in Detroit... that water's cold up there.
George has never been to Detroit so he did a lot of research for his little scene. I do hope it's enjoyed, and I also hope I left it in a precarious enough position for the next person who has to tackle them in Detroit... that water's cold up there.
That's what I was thinking. Hypothermia would set in really quick.
George, I enjoyed the way you set up this scene with James sitting on the steps of the church. The flashback you built gave us a good indication of James' character. The radio part gives us a "whole" kind of sense of what's going on in the world which is invaluable because although we are going to see snapshots from the different locations, this helps to bring it together from the onset.
I didn't forget, I just...um...yeah, I guess I failed to read that part, so...well, I didn't forget, I just...didn't...ok, I'll figure it out.
And yeah, hypothermia is a definite possibility, I would imagine, but to choose between being really freakin' cold and being mauled by rapid cougars, I think I'd jump in too.
Then again, James is technically a medical doctor (albeit of Psychiatry) which does require some time doing actual medical doctor stuff before he could be a licensed psychiatrist, so he would likely know what to do for hypothermia.
And on the Stand reference, I just prefer to have characters in the story point out the obvious and even comment on it before someone on the outside can start pointing at it. One of my favorite movie moments was during The Emperor's New Groove when Kusco asked how Kronk and what's-her-name beat them to the palace, and Kronk showed the map from the previous scene and comments that he doesn't know and it really doesn't make any sense.
Cornetto...I suspect that we will learn where we are starting from and which tribe we are in one we either get the que from you or when we see our character written into a scene, as is the case with the two posts.
Great job George!
Both of these beginning entries have a nice pace and "excitement building" aspect.
Not only will this be a very cool challenge for all of us, but an even better learning exercise!
I love words and the fact that when the page is blank...there's nothing there until words are formulated in my brain. Those thoughts...rushing through my viens and out my finger tips, find "life" on the page.
When people and places come to life...that to me is exciting.
MBCgirl =) My finger nails should look nice while I type - Red works!
I liked the Stand reference. It's an obvious point to make. I'm curious on how Leona and James meet though. They seem odd as a pair.
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This is great. Even though I'm not part of this, I'm sure I will love reading it!
Who's up next?
Btw, if anyone needs to run their "scene" by someone before posting and their "buddy" is not around, feel free to send it my way.
I'd be happy to team up with Mr. Wesley; however any help from those up in Tebow-ville would be greatly appreciated...they are calling it that now, aren't they?...At least they will on Jan 9th
Failure is only the opportunity to begin again more intelligently - Dove Chocolate Wrapper
Ok. Haven't heard from Wesley directly but heard indirectly that he won't be participating. So I'm going to have to cancel his turn. Dreamscale, do you mind starting the Ottawa tribe?